Conventions and analysis of ‘Keyboard Warrior’ Open Letter by Miss Adams https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter You must 1. Identify the convention and 2. Explain the analysis/the purpose of using this convention en-us 2025-02-17 01:08:39 UTC 2025-02-17 04:48:13 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/8.0/png/1f603.png Sample: missadams10 https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330610653 Convention: Simile

Analysis: A simile has been used to compare _____ to ______ in order to suggest that ___________

]]> 2025-02-17 01:13:54 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330610653 Sample: missadams10 https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330611175 Convention: Anaphora

Analysis: Anaphora has been used to emphasise _________ in order to make the reader understand that __________

]]> 2025-02-17 01:14:38 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330611175 Sample: missadams10 https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330613634 Convention: Tone

Analysis: a ______ tone has been used in order to __________

]]> 2025-02-17 01:17:23 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330613634 Kayla, Bella and Layla https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330810328 Convention : juxtaposition

It was used in paragraph 3 ‘’ you are faceless while I very much am no.”

It was used to show how the writer is showing that they are better than keyboard warriors.

]]> 2025-02-17 04:24:32 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330810328 Layla, Bella, Kayla https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330814684 Convention: anaphora

Analysis: an anaphora has been used to emphasis how much she cared

]]> 2025-02-17 04:28:38 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330814684 Kayla, Bella and Layla https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330816222 Convention : enumeration

‘’ I did feel your disappointment, I did feel your shame and I did feel your judgement.

This was used to show she cared and noticed.

]]> 2025-02-17 04:30:21 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330816222 Millie Ella millieclarke1 https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330816616 Enumeration

2nd page paragraph 7


In saying that, I did feel your disappointment, I did feel your shame and I felt your judgement.


Enumeration is used to list the things she felt

]]> 2025-02-17 04:30:50 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330816616 Kayla Bella layla https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330819485 Throughout all of the last 5 paragraphs they all start with ‘I cared’

This is the emphasise that she really did care.

]]> 2025-02-17 04:33:41 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330819485 Ella Millie millieclarke1 https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330822447 My performance could bring joy to so many people - you included


Inclusive language is used to make you feel sorry for her as she talks about how it could have bring people joy

]]> 2025-02-17 04:36:22 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330822447 Kayla Bella layla https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330824605 hyperbole - why I ‘choked’


She didn’t actually choke but it is a way of expressing that she was struggling.

]]> 2025-02-17 04:38:09 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330824605 Millie Ella millieclarke1 https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330825169 Anathora


I cared got repeated at the start of the last 5 paragraphs/ sentences to show how much she cared

]]> 2025-02-17 04:38:49 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330825169 Isaac https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330825177 Convention: Anaphora

Emphasis The anaphora has been used in this sentence to show how much This kind and great person cares for us


]]> 2025-02-17 04:38:50 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330825177 Kayla Layla bella https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330826045 there is short syntax all throughout this text. Being short and sharp she can express her point clearly and straight forward.

]]> 2025-02-17 04:39:42 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330826045 Sienna, lily ,Tahlia, maddi maddisonsalamon https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330826463 On the second page enumeration of “I cared” 8 times emphasises how much she loves and wants to please her fans

]]> 2025-02-17 04:40:13 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330826463 Tahlia, lily, maddi, sienna maddisonsalamon https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330829045 On the second page, the metaphor of “why I choked” symbolises her failing or bailing out of her win. This is a metaphor because she is using the word I, saying that she is something when in reality, she didn’t actually choke.

]]> 2025-02-17 04:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330829045 Llana, Eabha https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330829549 Convention : point of view in first person

“I was the undisputed favourite”

Analysis : a pov was used to show her title, to show her placing in the competition

]]> 2025-02-17 04:43:00 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330829549 Millie Ella millieclarke1 https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330829783 Short syntax


No intermediaries. No journalists


I cared because that’s what I do. I care.

]]> 2025-02-17 04:43:18 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330829783 Tahlia, Sienna, Maddi, Lily https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330829796 convention: Australian discourse

“sadly it probably tasted more like VB.” is an example of Australian discourse.

]]> 2025-02-17 04:43:20 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330829796 Laurence, Tyler, Valentino, Gabby https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330830454 Convention: 1st person POV

In the 4th paragraph on the 1st page, she states, “2016 Olympic Games in Rio. The final of the 100 metre freestyle. I was the undisputed favorite.” In the last sentence first person POV can be seen.

]]> 2025-02-17 04:44:21 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330830454 Kayla Bella Layla https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330830896 (One who would appreciate the keyboard trolls returning to the underside of a bridge where they belong)

This is a pleading/ desperate/ needy tone expressing how she really doesn’t like it and saying that their opinion needs to be kept to themself

]]> 2025-02-17 04:44:52 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330830896 Sienna, lily, maddi, Tahlia maddisonsalamon https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330831090 On page 2 the words “ XXXX- sadly it probably tasted like VB.” Is used to show Australian discourse because they are using language that people from other countries wouldn’t understand, making it more relatable for Australian people

]]> 2025-02-17 04:45:04 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330831090 Millie Ella millieclarke1 https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330831593 Tone

Sarcastic tone at the very end of the open letter in brackets

“ one who would appreciate the keyboard trolls returning to the underside of the bridge where they belong”

]]> 2025-02-17 04:45:41 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330831593 Sienna, lily , maddi, tahlia maddisonsalamon https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330832519 On page 2, the short syntax of “And I cared.” Is used to symbolise her exhausted tone and how she feels so defeated and tired of the hate she receives.

]]> 2025-02-17 04:46:37 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330832519 Laurence, Tyler, gabby, Brendan, Valentino https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330832913 Anaphora In the 9th 10th 11th and 12th paragraph on the second page the phrase “I cared” this highlights of how much she cared about her performance and what she does

]]> 2025-02-17 04:47:09 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330832913 Kayla Bella layla https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330833529 the last sentence in brackets is a call to action asking them to stop

]]> 2025-02-17 04:47:54 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330833529 Alexander Noah Rory ahyde2_1 https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330833572 Anaphora:

In the last 3 paragraphs on page 2 and the first paragraph on page 3 there were 4 examples of anaphora of “I cared”

]]> 2025-02-17 04:47:56 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330833572 Ella Millie millieclarke1 https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330833760 When she says she is “choking” she want actually choking she was describing her sadness

]]> 2025-02-17 04:48:08 UTC https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330833760 Rory Zander and noah rstubberfield https://padlet.com/missadams10/Yr8OpenLetter/wish/3330833929 In the 10th paragraph it says “I’ve had a long time to process and what went wrong and why I choked” this is personal anecdote because the author uses her experience

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