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Room 3

2022-02-24 03:45:09 UTC

Intro
- General information: Lately, more emphasis has been put on teaching various skills to elementary school students.
- Thesis statement: While this practice poses certain risks to children, I believe overall it is a boon to their development
- Topic: Primary school education
- Controlling idea: advantages outweigh disadvantages

Body

Body 1: Disadvantages

- Topic sentence: There are some inherent dangers in allowing elementary school students to participate in said activities
- Supporting idea 1: The physical toil of cultivating plants and taking care of animals may be too much for children to handle.
- Supporting idea 2: When the beings that children care for die, it could cause them great trauma given the strong attachment to these creatures that they have developed.
- Ex: For example, it would bring a child great sorrow when the cattle that he or she raises are slaughtered for meat or when their pets die, even of natural causes.

Body 2: Advantages

- Topic sentence: However, I believe the aforementioned disadvantages pale in comparison to the huge upside that could be gained from children learning how to farm and keep animals
- Supporting idea 1: To begin with, this experience instills in children a variety of virtues and skills, such as independence, patience and empathy.
- Supporting idea 2: Apart from these practical benefits, having such a close relationship with nature will widen children’s knowledge about the environment and foster their appreciation for nature.
- Supporting idea 3: Last but not least, taking care of plants or animals gives children an opportunity to be physically active on a regular basis.

Conclusion

In conclusion, the advantages of introducing children to gardening and taking care of animals far outweigh the disadvantages, and this practice should be encouraged not only at school but also at home.

Room 1 - Essay 1

2022-02-24 03:46:27 UTC

Outline:

It is suggested that primary school children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Introduction:

Background information: Lately, more emphasis has been put on teaching various skills to elementary school students.
Thesis statement: While this practice poses certain risks to children, I believe overall it is a boon to their development
Topic: Primary school education
Controlling idea: advantages > disadvantages

Body:

Body 1:

Topic sentence: There are some inherent dangers in allowing elementary school students to participate in said activities

Supporting idea 1: The physical toil of cultivating plants and taking care of animals may be too much for children to handle.
Supporting idea 2: When the beings that children care for die, it could cause them great trauma given the strong attachment to these creatures that they have developed.
Example: For example, it would bring a child great sorrow when the cattle that he or she raises are slaughtered for meat or when their pets die, even of natural causes.

Body 2:

Topic sentence: However, I believe the aforementioned disadvantages pale in comparison to the huge upside that could be gained from children learning how to farm and keep animals
Supporting idea 1: To begin with, this experience instills in children a variety of virtues and skills, such as independence, patience and empathy.
Supporting idea 2: Apart from these practical benefits, having such a close relationship with nature will widen children’s knowledge about the environment and foster their appreciation for nature.
Supporting idea 3: Last but not least, taking care of plants or animals gives children an opportunity to be physically active on a regular basis.

Conclusion:

Concluding sentence + personal comment:

Room 4 - Essay 1

2022-02-24 03:47:42 UTC

Introduction:

General information: Lately, more emphasis has been put on teaching various skills to elementary school students.
Thesis statement: While this practice poses certain risks to children, I believe overall it is a boon to their development
Topic: Primary school education
Controlling idea: advantages > disadvantages

Body:

Body 1: Disadvantages

Topic sentence: There are some inherent dangers in allowing elementary school students to participate in said activities
Supporting idea 1: The physical toil of cultivating plants and taking care of animals may be too much for children to handle.
Supporting idea 2: When the beings that children care for die, it could cause them great trauma given the strong attachment to these creatures that they have developed.
Example: For example, it would bring a child great sorrow when the cattle that he or she raises are slaughtered for meat or when their pets die, even of natural causes.

Body 2: Advantages

Topic sentence: However, I believe the aforementioned disadvantages pale in comparison to the huge upside that could be gained from children learning how to farm and keep animals
Supporting idea 1: To begin with, this experience instills in children a variety of virtues and skills, such as independence, patience and empathy.
Supporting idea 2: Apart from these practical benefits, having such a close relationship with nature will widen children’s knowledge about the environment and foster their appreciation for nature.
Supporting idea 3: Last but not least, taking care of plants or animals gives children an opportunity to be physically active on a regular basis.

Conclusion:

Concluding sentence + personal comment

Room 7

2022-02-24 03:48:49 UTC

1. Introduction:
- General information: Mobile phones have certainly had an enormous impact on us.
- Thesis statement: They have significantly changed the way we communicate with each other in both our personal and our professional lives. However, the impact has not all been positive.

2. Body:
- Par 1: Disadvantages
+ Topic sentence: By far the most common criticism of mobile phone is the fact that we are now expected to be available all times of the day and night, especially for work-related communication.
+ Supporting idea 1: Mobile phones mean that the separation between work and free time has disappeared.
+ Supporting idea 2: Another negative effect is that in places such as theaters, cinemas or public transport we often have to listen to the noise of infuriating ring tones and loud one-sided conversations.
+ Supporting idea 3: A final drawback is that these small but very expensive devices are easy targets for thieves.
- Par 2: Advantages
+ Topic sentence: On the other hand, there are several obvious benefits from this invention.
+ Supporting idea 1: The most powerful in favor of mobile phones is that they can be used to call for help in the most inaccessible places.
+ Supporting idea 2: Another positive aspect of for mobile phones for business people is the fact that they can be available for potential customers at all times
+ Supporting idea 3: Finally, mobile phones are extremely simple and convenient to use.

3. Conclusion: (Concluding sentence + personal comment)
To sum up, I feel that although there are some drawbacks to mobile phones, their efficiency and portability has greatly improved our ability to communicate our professional and personal lives. In my opinion, the benefits of have a mobile phone certainly offset the drawbacks.

Room 2

2022-02-24 03:48:56 UTC

Intro:
- gen. info: Lately, more emphasis has been put on teaching various skills to elementary school students.
- thesis: While this practice poses certain risks to children, I believe overall it is a boon to their development
- topic: primary school education (on how to grow veggies and animals)
- controlling idea: adv. outweighs disadv.

Body:
1. disadvantages
- topic sen: There are some inherent dangers in allowing elementary school students to participate in said activities
- sup 1: the physical toil of cultivating plants and taking care of animals may be too much for children to handle.
- sup 2: when the beings that children care for die, it could cause them great trauma given the strong attachment to these creatures that they have developed

2. advantages
- topic sen: However, I believe the aforementioned disadvantages pale in comparison to the huge upside that could be gained from children learning how to farm and keep animals.
- sup 1: instills in children a variety of virtues and skills, such as independence, patience and empathy
- sup 2: widen children’s knowledge about the environment and foster their appreciation for nature
- sup 3: gives children an opportunity to be physically active on a regular basis

Conclusion:
- concluding sentence + personal opinion
- In conclusion, the advantages of introducing children to gardening and taking care of animals far outweigh the disadvantages, and this practice should be encouraged not only at school but also at home.

Room 8 - Essay 2

2022-02-24 03:49:04 UTC

I. Introduction:

General information: Mobile phones have certainly had an enormous impact on us.
Thesis statement: They have significantly changed the way we communicate with each other in both our personal and our professional lives. However, the impact has not all been positive.
Topic: Impact of mobile phones
Controlling idea: advantages > disadvantages

II. Body:
Body 1: Drawbacks

Topic sentence: By far the most common criticism of mobile phones is the fact that we are now expected to be available all times of the day and night, especially for work-related communication.
Supporting idea 1: Mobile phones mean that the separation between work and free time has disappeared.
Supporting idea 2: Another negative effect is that in places such as theaters, cinemas or public transport we often have to listen to the noise of infuriating ringtones and loud one-sided conversations.
- Supporting idea 3: A final drawback is that these small but very expensive devices are easy targets for thieves.
- Body 2: Benefits
Topic sentence: On the other hand, there are several obvious benefits from this invention.
Supporting idea 1: The most powerful in favor of mobile phones is that they can be used to call for help in the most inaccessible places.
Example: For example, when our car breaks down in a remote area.
Supporting idea 2: Another positive aspect of for mobile phones for business people is the fact that they can be available for potential customers at all times
Supporting idea 3: Finally, mobile phones are extremely simple and convenient to use.
III. Conclusion: Concluding sentence + personal comment (Benefits > drawbacks):

To sum up, I feel that although there are some drawbacks to mobile phones, their efficiency and portability has greatly improved our ability to communicate in our professional and personal lives. In my opinion, the benefits of having a mobile phone certainly offset the drawbacks.

Room 6 - Essay 2

2022-02-24 03:51:42 UTC

Mobile telephones have brought many benefits but they have also have negative effects.

Do the advantages of mobile phones outweigh the disadvantages?

Introduction:

General information: Mobile phones have certainly had an enormous impact on us.
Thesis statement: They have significantly changed the way we communicate with each other in both our personal and our professional lives. However, the impact has not all been positive.
Topic: Mobile phones’ impacts
Controlling idea: advantages outweigh disadvantages

Body:
Body 1: Disadvantages

Topic sentence: N/A
Supporting idea 1: Because of mobile phones, we are now expected to be available all times of the day and night, especially for work-related communication.
Supporting idea 2: Theaters, cinemas or public transport → often have to listen to the noise of infuriating ringtones and loud one-sided conversations.
Supporting idea 3: Easy targets for thieves.

Body 2: Advantages

Topic sentence: On the other hand, there are several obvious benefits from this invention.
Supporting idea 1: They can be used to call for help in the most inaccessible places.
Example: For example, when our car breaks down in a remote area.
Supporting idea 2: They can be available for potential customers at all times
Supporting idea 3: Extremely simple and convenient to use.

Conclusion:

Concluding sentence + personal comment (disadvantages < advantages):

To sum up, I feel that although there are some drawbacks to mobile phones, their efficiency and portability has greatly improved our ability to communicate our professional and personal lives. In my opinion, the benefits of have a mobile phone certainly offset the drawbacks.

Room 5

2022-02-24 03:54:05 UTC

It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Do the disadvantages of living in a media-rich society outweigh the advantages?

Intro

General information: The ubiquitous impact of the media could be felt by anyone in this era of advanced technology
Thesis statement: The advantages of a media-rich society are varied, and its disadvantages are no less discernible.
Topic: living in a media-rich society.
Controlling idea: advantages and disadvantages.

Body
Advantages:

Topic sentences: People could derive a host of benefits from the media
Supporting idea 1: The media could be a huge source of reference materials for work and study
Supporting idea 2: The media grants us access to various forms of entertainment.

Disadvantages

Topic sentences: The negative effect of the media on people’s lives are clearly observed
Supporting idea 1: People got exposed to all sorts of information even when not wanted
Supporting idea 2: Over-reliance on any platform can create misguidance

Conclusion

Concluding sentence + personal comment (disadvantages < advantages):

In conclusion, the influence of the media is growing with the progress of time in domestic life. It is my strong belief that its merits outweigh the demerits.