Remake of Persuasive Speech by https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v en-us 2022-03-13 19:42:22 UTC 2022-03-13 19:50:09 UTC hello@padlet.com Attention getter: Most of the increase in global temperatures since 1950 has been caused by human activity. carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092601412 2022-03-13 19:42:42 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092601412 Credibility statement: I have been vegetarian for a year and a half, as has most of my family. I can speak from my experiences and others experiences when talking about veganism. carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092601534 2022-03-13 19:42:53 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092601534 Common ground statement:Not everyone believes in veganism, vegetarianism or global warming. We all care for our health though, we all care about the future of this planet and making sure there is something for our future kin. carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092601615 2022-03-13 19:43:00 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092601615 Thesis statement:People should go vegetarian/vegan to save our planet, and to better their health. carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092601890 2022-03-13 19:43:27 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092601890 Preview statement: First I will go in my first point, which is “People should go vegan to save the environment”, support it with evidence and reasoning and transition into my second point “Vegetarianism is also better for peoples health.”. Review my main points and end my speech with a clincher. carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092602698 2022-03-13 19:44:43 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092602698 Transition:First of all. carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092602843 2022-03-13 19:44:58 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092602843 Point 1:Veganism will save our planet. carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092603366 2022-03-13 19:45:36 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092603366 Support:“A vegan diet is in most cases better for the environment than a flexitarian diet, when you consider greenhouse gas emissions, land use, freshwater use and water pollution. “ (BBC, 2020)“Being vegetarian can help slow climate change and its effects on the environment. Raising livestock animals for consumption creates more greenhouse gasses than all of the cars and trucks in the world, so reducing livestock production greatly reduces these emissions. Reduced demand for meat leads to reduced livestock production. Climate change can cause severe weather, like droughts causing forest fires or storms that are harmful to animals and humans. This directly harms animals and destroys their habitats. Climate change changes habitats too. For example, the Arctic fox faces threats of melting sea ice and tundra habitat due to the rise in global temperatures.” (Chritz, 2020) carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092603569 2022-03-13 19:45:57 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092603569 Point 2:A vegetarian diet is better for peoples health, and will help rid of diseases. carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092603744 2022-03-13 19:46:16 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092603744 Transition: Secondly carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092603969 2022-03-13 19:46:35 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092603969 Support: “Vegetarians appear to have lower low-density lipoprotein cholesterol levels, lower blood pressure and lower rates of hypertension and type 2 diabetes than meat eaters. Vegetarians also tend to have a lower body mass index, lower overall cancer rates and lower risk of chronic disease.” (Kelly, 2020)“The researchers found that those who didn’t eat meat had 10 fewer cases of heart disease and three more strokes per 1,000 people compared with the meat-eaters. Researcher Tammy Tong, nutritional epidemiologist at the University of Oxford, says the higher risk of haemorrhagic stroke could be for several reasons.” (BBC FUTURE, 2019) carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092604423 2022-03-13 19:47:16 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092604423 Transition
In spite carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092604730 2022-03-13 19:47:36 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092604730 Rebuttal:“ Like any eating plan to restrict specific food groups, vegan diets can come up short in essential nutrients such as protein, calcium, iron and vitamin B12.” (Fisher, 2020)* - My rebuttal carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092604933 2022-03-13 19:47:54 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092604933 Transition:To conclude carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092605126 2022-03-13 19:48:09 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092605126 Review of main points:People should go vegetarian/vegan to improve health, and save the environment. carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092605489 2022-03-13 19:48:43 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092605489 Reinforcement of thesis:A vegetarian/vegan diet has much criticism, but if carried out appropriately it could do so much good than worse. It would ensure a better, healthier future. carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092605669 2022-03-13 19:49:04 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092605669 Clincher:So I urge everybody, to try, try and eat one less chicken wing. One less burger. Because if we don’t try who will? carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092605797 2022-03-13 19:49:19 UTC https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092605797 Bibliography carolinabivol101 https://padlet.com/carolinabivol101/ywzch7erohn22s5v/wish/2092606086 BBC. (2020). BBC Food. Retrieved from www.bbc.co.uk: https://www.bbc.co.uk/food/articles/vegan_vs_flexitarian#:~:text=A%20vegan%20diet%20is%20in,freshwater%20use%20and%20water%20pollution.
BBC FUTURE. (2019). Is it really better for you? In the first of a new vegan series on BBC Future . Retrieved from www.bbc.com/future: https://www.bbc.com/future/article/20200122-are-there-health-benefits-to-going-vegan
Chritz, K. (2020, 11 15). The Impact of Being a Vegetarian on the Environment . Retrieved from potterparkzoo.org: https://potterparkzoo.org/veg/#:~:text=Being%20vegetarian%20helps%20reduce%20pollution,on%20wild%20animals%20AND%20humans.
Fisher, D. (2020). Vegan: Is it really a healthier way to eat? . Retrieved from www.tuftsmedicalcenter.org: https://www.tuftsmedicalcenter.org/news-events-media/news/web/20-in-2020/vegan-is-it-healthier
Kelly, D. (2020). Is It Better to Be a Vegetarian? . Retrieved from www.webmd.com: https://www.webmd.com/diet/features/is-it-better-to-be-a-vegetarian#:~:text=Vegetarians%20appear%20to%20have%20lower,lower%20risk%20of%20chronic%20disease.


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