https://padlet.com/23khaggerty/yuqvzjw02wbm Let me know what you think! en-us 2017-06-22 15:36:37 UTC 2018-03-28 13:29:01 UTC hello@padlet.com 23dreyes https://padlet.com/23khaggerty/yuqvzjw02wbm/wish/237386639 2018-03-02 13:52:06 UTC https://padlet.com/23khaggerty/yuqvzjw02wbm/wish/237386639 23nashie https://padlet.com/23khaggerty/yuqvzjw02wbm/wish/237522745 I really like how you added what the citizens of spf are thinking in their daily lives, and didn´t just overlook the thoughts, it made me feel like I was being notified about everything. Also, I really appreciated that you told the reader the community getting a better down town would not only help the teen but also the families, which is a good appeal to everyone in the district. Though in the future, I would look to review you writing pieces more and dig deeper into the writing, in order to use more persuasive language and sentences. Overall great job! 
-Naa Dei A. ]]> 2018-03-02 17:49:43 UTC https://padlet.com/23khaggerty/yuqvzjw02wbm/wish/237522745 23gbeirne https://padlet.com/23khaggerty/yuqvzjw02wbm/wish/246880248 Hello Katelyn! I loved your magazine article! It was exceedingly hilarious to read! To begin, I really loved how you brought back the cheetos as frequently as possible and did not stop incorporating them into your story after North's head blew up. For example, when Kim Kardashian was located at the hospital with North she recognized that everyone was eating cheetos and as a result the citizen's located at the hospital heads were blowing up! Also, when Kim was hungry, and left her snack at the park she discerned that the hospital vending machine only obtained cheetos, so in repercussion she was forced to eat them! This was so funny to me! Next time, try to edit your writing pieces for missing words or capitalizing first names. You can attempt to do this by utilizing grammarly or spell check. Overall, great job! Your article was amazing]]> 2018-03-28 13:19:35 UTC https://padlet.com/23khaggerty/yuqvzjw02wbm/wish/246880248