https://padlet.com/23egonzalez/yt8a0j88bh2d Hello welcome to my Padlet! Thank you for reading my writing! Please leave positive comments. Thank YOU! en-us 2017-06-22 14:37:22 UTC 2018-03-27 01:24:29 UTC hello@padlet.com https://i.imgur.com/hEC261a.png 23rhall https://padlet.com/23egonzalez/yt8a0j88bh2d/wish/237394386 Hey Esmeralda it's Trey, may I just say I really enjoyed your research simulation! You really put a lot of effort into it, and I applaud you for that. I like how your hook made me understand what the topic was going to be about, but you still made me interested. You also explained both speakers perspectives and where they are coming from. Next time you should add more background information, all in all great job!]]> 2018-03-02 14:09:13 UTC https://padlet.com/23egonzalez/yt8a0j88bh2d/wish/237394386 23asharma https://padlet.com/23egonzalez/yt8a0j88bh2d/wish/237418643 Hi Esmeralda! Your research simulation was an enjoyable read. I love how you began your piece was a statistic, a short yet effective way to show the reader how Hollywood has to value racial equality. In addition, you ended your piece very nicely. Using a question as a zinger made me think about your topic, and helped me connect it more. You made a very good first and last impression. One thing to keep in mind is your formatting. It was a bit hard to follow the paragraphs, because some of them were indented by accident. All in all, your piece was awesome!]]> 2018-03-02 14:53:12 UTC https://padlet.com/23egonzalez/yt8a0j88bh2d/wish/237418643