https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd Please write your name (roll) then words or phrases that you think belong in the "dull word graveyard." Write below each an example of how they might replace the dull words or phrases. en-us 2020-12-09 16:17:56 UTC 2021-08-04 16:46:33 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003228474 ¨Today was the banquet and I was nervous.¨ This was more telling because it is just saying what she is feeling. She could have said that she was sweating so bad because she was so nervous. ]]> 2020-12-09 17:38:51 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003228474 https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003229081 "At the banquet, my parents and I were separated because there was not
enough space for me at their table."
When we got there, I was directed towards another table, the representatives of countries less big than those who sat with my parents.]]> 2020-12-09 17:38:58 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003229081 https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003233592 “It was a cold morning” 
“I walked outisde and saw frost all over, I opened my mouth and a white cloud popped out” ]]> 2020-12-09 17:39:51 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003233592 https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003237269 "Today was the banquet and I was nervous." When I woke up I realized today was the banquet. My hands were so sweaty, I started to overthink things. I could feel my whole body really tenseing up. ]]> 2020-12-09 17:40:36 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003237269 https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003237367 "...because there was not
enough space for me at their table." because our group was unable to squeeze into a table together. 
"I was nervous." My heart raced and hands became damp with sweat. ]]> 2020-12-09 17:40:37 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003237367 https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003237401 "It was a cold morning..."
They could have written about how each surface had felt chilly and how the air flowing into the room had felt almost windy.]]> 2020-12-09 17:40:38 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003237401 https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003237505 "There was not enough space for me at their table" The table was too crowded and I had to sit apart from my parents.]]> 2020-12-09 17:40:39 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003237505 https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003237795 ¨It was a cold morning and my throat was dry¨. ]]> 2020-12-09 17:40:43 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003237795 https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003238298 "It was a cold morning and my throat was dry." instead of just saying it explain it in a exaggerated way to make the feeling go with the "vibe" with the event.]]> 2020-12-09 17:40:49 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003238298 https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003238789 ¨"It was a cold morning and my throat was dry." "It was as imagery and you could imagine it in your head. ]]> 2020-12-09 17:40:55 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003238789 https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003239285 "I awoke in my hotel room with my
throat rasping and my eyes heavy." 
I woke up with my throat dry and feeling drowsy this morning.

]]> 2020-12-09 17:41:01 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003239285 https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003240630 " It was a cold morning and my throat was dry. I awoke in my hotel room with my throat rasping and my eyes heavy."  Instead of a "cold morning" he could have said " I could see the frost crystalization on the window as I looked outside our hotel."

]]> 2020-12-09 17:41:18 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003240630 https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003252084 ¨It was a cold morning´´ ]]> 2020-12-09 17:43:35 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/ysknzpdnmapgcryd/wish/1003252084