https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t 6to B Sociales. English activity en-us 2023-10-28 22:34:02 UTC 2023-11-04 11:46:23 UTC hello@padlet.com belenceccarelli https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2767348798 Hi Eli! Thank you for sharing. I like the three disadvantages of playing video games! They really are! The only thing I would change is after the phrase "spending long hours" I would add "playing video games". In this way, you make the sentence more specific. You hand in the homework on time! It shows your compromise with the subject.]]> 2023-10-29 02:21:44 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2767348798 belenceccarelli https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2769625704 Hi Dana! Thank you for your contribution! I agree with the fact that violence in some videogames affects children, I would add "in a negative way" after the word children. You handed in the homework on time and this shows the investment you make to be a better student. Take a peep to Eli's contribution, the feedback may help you. ]]> 2023-10-30 23:11:28 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2769625704 belenceccarelli https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2769626226 Hi Flor! Thank you for sharing your Instagram post! I really like your disadvantages of playing videogames. They truly are! I would add some changes: After the phrase "spending long hours" I would add "playing videogames" so the sentence is more specific and "in a negative way" after children and you relate videogames with the disadvantage. I think your ideas are really good! Keep your hard work! ♡]]> 2023-10-30 23:12:16 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2769626226 belenceccarelli https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2771560204 Hi Cami! Thank you for sharing your disadvantages! I like how you add more hashtags # so your ideas will have more views! Please read my feedback on Flor's contribution, I think it will help improve your writing skills too. Thank you for sharing your ideas on time ♡]]> 2023-11-01 02:31:28 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2771560204 belenceccarelli https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2771598973 2023-11-01 02:57:19 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2771598973 belenceccarelli https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2772289439 Hi Lou!
Thank you for your ideas! You show commitment on handing in the homework on time! I think that you should see my feedback on Flor's contribution! It will help you to develop your writing ❤️ ]]> 2023-11-01 14:00:06 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2772289439 belenceccarelli https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2772402104 Agus, thank you for sharing your ideas! I agree with the fact that videogames can be addictive and you forget about the real world! So true! A change to do, I would only add in the "@" your friends or famous people that may be interested in video games. Excelente content! ]]> 2023-11-01 15:15:01 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2772402104 belenceccarelli https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2772564061 2023-11-01 17:17:04 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2772564061 belenceccarelli https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2772565240 2023-11-01 17:17:58 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2772565240 https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2772602664 Hello Aixa! I find new ideas here! When you say that aggressive can be developed by video games I totally agree! Sometimes it may feel like gamers are less compassionate and aggressive with themselves while they are playing or competing with others. Thank you for your sharing! ❤️]]> 2023-11-01 17:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2772602664 https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2772827544 Hi Tizi!! Well, new more ideas here! I think it the first idea need a little bit more to add, what do you think about privacy? Why is there lack of privacy when you play? Tell me in the comments and we will discover together. Thank you for sharing! You go girl! ]]> 2023-11-01 21:58:08 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2772827544 belenceccarelli https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2776057492 Hi Yuli! Thank you for your sharing! Good ideas in your contribution! Something new to reflect: the time we spend! I think you should write "in a negative way" because it is a post about the consequences of video games. But this reflection is assertive! Thank you ♡]]> 2023-11-04 11:08:14 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2776057492 belenceccarelli https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2776062174 Hi Iara! Congratulations Iara! This is the most complete IG post!! You have written linked sentences and a call for action! (That will lead your post to have more views and invite your audience to interact with your post!) Thank you Iara ❤️]]> 2023-11-04 11:20:52 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2776062174 belenceccarelli https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2776071108 Hi Ana! Your ideas are so accurate and I like your use of English to express the ideas! The phrases such as 'gaming late into the night' and 'a lack of dedication' are so precise to express the negative impact of playing videogames. Thank you for your sharing!]]> 2023-11-04 11:46:23 UTC https://padlet.com/belenceccarelli/ys8ztg12l91tjw2t/wish/2776071108