Leading the Perfect Society by Sydelle Sandoval https://padlet.com/sandovals_21/yrq9ne3c81au By: Sydelle, Maddy, and Alexis en-us 2019-02-05 01:56:59 UTC 2019-02-13 21:28:54 UTC hello@padlet.com The author has a very good a way with words/writing making the writing seem like a reality. Using details to make it seem more believable Also we could use these writing traits in my writing to help my writing more realistic. sandovals_21 https://padlet.com/sandovals_21/yrq9ne3c81au/wish/327607289 2019-02-05 02:15:51 UTC https://padlet.com/sandovals_21/yrq9ne3c81au/wish/327607289 The suspense used in the beginning of the text helped me focus in and continue to read. Getting involved with what is going on in the text. sandovals_21 https://padlet.com/sandovals_21/yrq9ne3c81au/wish/328066283 2019-02-06 00:01:21 UTC https://padlet.com/sandovals_21/yrq9ne3c81au/wish/328066283 Taking Celestine from being a "flat" character to more of a main character was a way of showing growth and a way of showing how a character develops. sandovals_21 https://padlet.com/sandovals_21/yrq9ne3c81au/wish/328066729 2019-02-06 00:04:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sandovals_21/yrq9ne3c81au/wish/328066729 The setting was very different sandovals_21 https://padlet.com/sandovals_21/yrq9ne3c81au/wish/328067213 2019-02-06 00:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/sandovals_21/yrq9ne3c81au/wish/328067213