OUR cultural and traditional values.So we should not PLACE TOO MUCH IMPORTANCE ON buyING [the] new THINGS 

In conclusion think ,I buying things have too much

importance.in modern society,Times are changing as technology is getting better and better.So,the existence of new

things is important,and it can drive economic growth.I think

buying new things is necessary but maybe we should care

about old things and I think buying new tings has too much 

importance in modern society.

Good team effort. CAN BE MORE CAREFUL WITH EDITING YOUR ERRORS. `sarah`

I agreed  with the topic. In modern society, many peoples likes new [some] things. I agree, because I have my own reasons. In the shopping mall, maybe [some] things which are  new ARE usually very good looking.  Beautiful things have a striking impact on human vision. [than,]so to get your money to buy a something new [stuff] is  [an award] LIKE REWARDING YOURSELF.I usually buy something to reward  MYSELF after  I HAVE  tested it. I think, there is a saying in China  which says [called] new IS not old. I think  new [some] things make me [enjoy. I] feel  happy. 

    Sometimes, some people think that buying too much new stuff can waste money，but I think, IT IS ALL RIGHT, BECAUSE WE DO NOT buy new things [ is don't buy new things]  everyday. [It is  Just] we only buy on special days. ，For example, if I get [a new If I get] something new, it' IS like getting a gift, and this gift will motivate me to [make me] work harder so that I understand that the gift is not easy to come by. , So I will become more WILLING  [loving] to learn and will move towards MY [the] goal.  [Go close, but]  It will take a long time for  ME TO GET the next gift, so it will not waste money.

     buying [some] new things  [Buy new things] is not impossible, but we need to be rational in our  consumption, and by all means, we should [do] not waste.
SHIYING,
YOU CAN EDIT YOUR WORK WITH MORE CARE BEFORE YOU POST IT HERE. PLEASE LEARN FROM YOUR ERRORS. I HOPE THE CORRECTIONS ARE CLEAR TO YOU. `sarah`

 

Most people like new things because they are clean, shiny and new.
In modern society, many new things are rapidly being produced  and they come to us too soon before new things wear out. So they give us a big stimulus and they get our minds so easily to buy more and more.

As well as this, in modern society, we buy things that we do not even know are really necessary. because new things are more exciting AND WE TEND TO [than] buy {ing} MORE THAN  what we need.

However,  new things DO NOT give us a lot of meaning. For example, we can spend some precious time with PEOPLE WHO ARE DEAR TO US  [new  someone] during  THEIR LIVES [they life] and It can be an experience to develop smart consumption habits. [but] Under SUCH circumstances, WE should [we] think about the important things when spending.

In conclusion, I think that in today's society, rather than buying new things, I need to have the necessary  consumption habits to help me lead a happier life.

QUITE GOOD! KEEP IT UP. `sarah`

 

Firstly , I don’t think it’s a good decision to buy something for no purpose . Technology is indeed growing , but the bad effects are unwise consumption habits . Let’s take the phone as an example . Today ,  iphones are basically ubiquitous. Nowadays, it is very convenient for mobile phones to access the internet . However, some people are not satisfied with the functions of mobile phones. so the  phone has been constantly upGRADED [dated]  with added style and functions. Many people just want to experience some new things. I think the phone should have some basic functions

Secondly, buying new products is partly necessary. New things can broaden our horizons and give us more information .They can help people to learn more about things.

As for me , [and] it is important to buy something new , which really helps us a lot .but we must be rational when buying things.   
GOOD EFFORT, HANSEN.  FEW ERRORS AND GOOD IDEAS. ~sarah`

 

Firstly, in my opinion, going shopping is a good way to meet friends. Today, society has become too commercialized. Social contact has too much importance for modern people, so, shopping is a good choice. As usual, we choose to invite friends to buy something new instead of visiting their homes. We can go outdoors to talk about some news by way of shopping. People love not only buying new things but also getting more pleasure from social contacts. 

 

 

Secondly, when people go to shopping malls, they want to buy something important for their homes or themselves. For instance, if you buy a new lawn mower, it will make your life more convenient and comfortable and you can have a beautiful garden. On the other hand, when we buy a new smart phone for our family members, we can share our pictures with each other on social media and remember the happy hours. It will make our life happier.

 

Finally, I very much agree that people pay  TOO MUCH [a lot of] attention  TO [on] buying new things. [,] It is important in modern society TO STRIKE A BALANCE BETWEEN SHOPPING AND KEEPING OUR SOCIAL RELATIONSHIPS. This will have good effects on social contactS and life.

 

9.1.2018
A GOOD PIECE OF WORK! WELL DONE AND WELL EDITED.
~sarah`

Before I did this, I were very afraid and confused. Everyone wanted to get good marks. So, we all worked very hard. We had to compile the data and produce the graphs. We often discuss our report outside the library. So, brainstorm and come up with at least a few solutions. After we collected the data, two of us wrote the draft report, another two of us make the PPT. During the project, we share our ideas again and again and changed the report and PPT again and again to make our work better and better.

For this experience I learned a lot. Firstly, I know the importance of teamwork. The spirit is great. We should respect everyone ideas, and then we share it with each other, which is helpful to create a better achievement. I should try to enjoy it. Secondly, this survey provides a chance for us to communicate with others. It is a good way to practice our speaking skills. 

If we had to do this again, to make it better we would like to get more information from more people. We will explain more clearly when we asking or answering our questions. Maybe I could use a few jokes to lighten the mood.

Thank you .

in this speech, I have gained a lot. I know the food types of Ireland, and learned how to find data, fill in data and collect data. I have investigated a lot of people who are very willing to cooperate with me to finish the work, so I have made great progress, and in these days I have known a lot of people. Although this process is very difficult, but it has learned a lot in this process. I am very happy, because I can contact with friends from so many countries. Although the score is not ideal, but the process is very fun. Finally, I wish me every day to improve, IELTS pass.