https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl Share your ideas here en-us 2019-02-09 04:14:44 UTC 2020-02-20 01:23:31 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/File.png https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947335 Hooks
 Good punctuation.
good vocabulary.
Make people want to keep on reading.
Paragraphs 
Correct punctuation.
correct Paragraphs 
Ideas
mysteries
Big juicy words

]]> 2019-02-19 21:31:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947335 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947478 Commers]]> 2019-02-19 21:31:41 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947478 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947604 Most of these stories hooked me in on the first sentence.]]> 2019-02-19 21:32:08 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947604 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947667 The authors make the first page really exciting so you want to read on.]]> 2019-02-19 21:32:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947667 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947704 Punctuation]]> 2019-02-19 21:32:31 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947704 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947706 Adding More Descriptive words? 
Adding punctuation ?
Adding paragraphs ?
Comers ?

]]> 2019-02-19 21:32:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947706 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947793 Most books usually come with good sentences that hook the reader in. Like for example, a nice introduction.]]> 2019-02-19 21:32:54 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332947793 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948236 The first sentence is always really good]]> 2019-02-19 21:34:01 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948236 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948402 The author hooks you into the story]]> 2019-02-19 21:34:26 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948402 dshfiyb https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948442 Correct punctuation
correct paragraphs 
Mystery
Juicy words
Capital letters 
Hooks
Good vocabulary
Ideas

]]> 2019-02-19 21:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948442 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948450 1.Paragraphs
2.Characters
3. Details
4.a Hook
5. Vocabulary
6.Punctuation 



]]> 2019-02-19 21:34:36 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948450 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948451 Punctuation
Correct Paragraphs
Authors Great Ideas


]]> 2019-02-19 21:34:36 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948451 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948550 Each story has some juicy vocabulary.]]> 2019-02-19 21:34:57 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948550 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948555 1. Descriptive language
2. Lots of detail
3. Punctuation
4. Hook
5. Vocabulary
6. Spelling
7. Structure
8. Ideas
9. Interesting 
10. 5 W's
W.A.L.T - Identify what makes a good piece of writing.]]> 2019-02-19 21:34:59 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948555 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948691 A hook ]]> 2019-02-19 21:35:29 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948691 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948711 Characters! Words are sometimes not what makes a book perfect. Characters. When some authors introduce the main characters, they can be well known for something they have. That thing is personality.]]> 2019-02-19 21:35:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948711 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948718 They add lots of detail in the story's]]> 2019-02-19 21:35:33 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948718 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948936 Being more descriptive]]> 2019-02-19 21:36:21 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948936 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948979 a introduction that makes people Laugh Out Loud]]> 2019-02-19 21:36:29 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332948979 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332949191 juicy words a good vocabulary and also puntuation fool stops and capital letters.

]]> 2019-02-19 21:37:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332949191 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332949239 full stops and capital letters]]> 2019-02-19 21:37:12 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332949239 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332949240 Even though the sentences are really long, they add commers to make it easy to read]]> 2019-02-19 21:37:12 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332949240 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332949561 Big Fat jucy Words]]> 2019-02-19 21:38:21 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332949561 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332949959 Punctuation

]]> 2019-02-19 21:39:16 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332949959 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332949968  Amazing Hooks

]]> 2019-02-19 21:39:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332949968 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332950149 They make sure that the first page is always the best. If its not good, then people don't carry on reading the book ]]> 2019-02-19 21:39:59 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332950149 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332950264 I think that you need juicy words and a hook]]> 2019-02-19 21:40:26 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332950264 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332950349 I like that the author has used nice vocabulary that goes perfectly on the text]]> 2019-02-19 21:40:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332950349 leonidas6mzdfkm https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332950351 amazing story's and ideas and the author had comers and he gave hooks and punctuation and detail and topic.Structure in the writing and spelling and big juicy words fool stops.]]> 2019-02-19 21:40:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332950351 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332951054 IDEAS              Vocab          
Spelling           Big Juicy 
Topic               words / 
Intro                Punctuation 
Hooks         Capital/letters 
Plan            Speech Marks 
Details          Commas
Characters   

Full stops / 
Structure 
Sentences
Paragraphs]]> 2019-02-19 21:43:29 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332951054 https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332951960 who , what , when and where]]> 2019-02-19 21:47:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dstone20/ypzo6ru0krfl/wish/332951960