https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm By Cannon Productions en-us 2018-03-25 09:53:11 UTC 2018-03-29 06:24:37 UTC hello@padlet.com robij271 https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245804730 Positive - Good main image, good facial expression and the beard adds some texture 

Improve - You should add a border because all Sight and Sound magazines have one. ]]> 2018-03-25 09:54:58 UTC https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245804730 robij271 https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245804842 Positive - I really like the two colours. Makes it stand out 

Improve - The S+S logo is not the best quality. Maybe find a better one online.]]> 2018-03-25 09:56:14 UTC https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245804842 robij271 https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245804944 Positive - The use of a puff is really good. 

Improve - Maybe add some colour to the text at the bottom to make it more appealing.]]> 2018-03-25 09:57:27 UTC https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245804944 robij271 https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245805032 Positive - Like the concept of the split down the middle, it fits the title nicely. 

Improve - Don't think the line down the middle is central. The plus is over to one side. ]]> 2018-03-25 09:58:40 UTC https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245805032 robij271 https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245805239 Positive - The text is good. It conforms to the typical layout. 

Improve - You don't have the issue number and date in the top corner. ]]> 2018-03-25 10:01:51 UTC https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245805239 robij271 https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245805325 Positive - Great main image and I like the puff you have used. 

Improve - There is more blue than red because the line is too far to the right. You should make sure its the same amount of colour on each side. ]]> 2018-03-25 10:02:57 UTC https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245805325 robij271 https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245805519 Positive - I like the cover. Looks like a sight and sound magazine cover. 

Improve - the barcode on the right is too low. I'd bring it up a bit. ]]> 2018-03-25 10:05:26 UTC https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245805519 robij271 https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245805597 Positive - I like the main image, think its good to have a close-up because thats very common. 

Improve - The two colour split isn't very conventional. S+S very rarely stray from the typical layout and you have. ]]> 2018-03-25 10:06:38 UTC https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245805597 robij271 https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245805885 Positive - The colours make it really striking and attractive. 

Improve - Add a border]]> 2018-03-25 10:09:29 UTC https://padlet.com/robij271/yolsca5q0rgm/wish/245805885