Mia and lucia!!

Dear Mia and Lucia,

Unfortunately, your work has so many mistakes that I find it difficult to understand. In addition to that, you haven't been able to follow the writing guide or use the tenses appropriately. You were supposed to follow a structure using Thomas and Vanessa's blog post as a model and the Writing guide I gave you (where the instructions were abundantly clear). From my point of view, this task needs improvement.

I hope you can do a better job with your teacher later.

You've got a 5 (five).

Warm regards,

Teacher Barbie

Sofia y Mora

Dear Sofi and Mora,

It seems like a great trip so far! Congrats! Although you can see a lot of corrections, I am happy that you have been able to follow the structure and tenses appropriately. This post definitely fulfils all the requirements and seems like a very nice work to me. Great job! You've got a 9 (nine).

Something to bear in mind for future tasks, make sure you revise your work before you submit it, I mean, spelling, capital letters, punctuation, Grammar, everything.

Warm regards,

Teacher Barbie

Today, we're exploring (or we have been to) the "Laguna Esmeralda" where we will do (have done? remember you are talking about today and you needed to use the Present Perfect also) a guieded walk includes including the lunch in "Kuar restaurant". Then, we're going to go to the hotel "Las Lengas" Hotel to spend the night.

Tomorrow, we're going to travel to Buenos Aires but before we're going to visit the museum "Fin del Mundo" and play football in a park because it's too funny so much fun!

Where is your conclusion?

Dear Fabri and Nico,

It seems like a great trip so far! Congrats! Although you can see a lot of corrections, I am happy to see the results. It's a pity you forgot to use the Present Perfect tense to describe current activities, a conclusion and a picture of the place. This post fulfils almost all the requirements and seems like a nice work to me. Good job! You've got a 7 (seven) (due in part to your delay).

Something to bear in mind for future tasks, make sure you revise your work before you submit it, I mean, spelling, capital letters, punctuation, Grammar, everything.

Warm regards,

Teacher Barbie

When we arriba arrived, we picked up some unique souvenirs and every we had the best empanadas of Empanadeishon Benzaqueishon, this those empanadas are were amazing.

Today, we’re in San Salvador de Jujuy in the best restaurant of here, “Viracocha Restaurant”. We’ve tried tijitincha, the delicious food of this restaurant.

This places is beautiful, the atmosphere is very good and este? We've eaten? maybe? very well.

We are planning to go take care of the liga culito and colita with our best friend Sebas.

Where is your conclusion and the picture of the place?

Dear Benja and Mane,

Unfortunately, your work does not fulfil the requirements. One mistake, in particular, is a joke that seems absolutely out of place to me since it is disrespectful. In addition to that, you haven't been able to follow the writing guide. You were supposed to follow a structure using Thomas and Vanessa's blog post as a model and the Writing guide I gave you (where the instructions were very clear). In addition to that, it was uploaded very late. From my point of view, this task needs improvement.

I hope you can do a better job with your teacher later.

You've got a 5 (five).

Warm regards,

Teacher Barbie

We're Julia and Lara, we're travelling to Argentina together.

We're finalky finally in an hotel on in "San Carlos Center", Santa Fe. We arrived yesterday, we went to "Jaaukanigás" and we ate medialunas with dulce de leche, fernet with Coca and milanesas. It was so delicious!

Tomorrow, we're planning to visit the Museum of Jewish Colonization. We're so excited!!!

What about your current activities (using the Present Perfect Simple tense)? and your conclusion?

Dear Juli and Lara,

It seems like a very nice trip so far! Congrats! Although you can see a lot of corrections, I am happy to see the results. It's a pity you forgot to use the Present Perfect tense to describe current activities and a conclusion. I wish I could see something more complete, with more descriptions of your activities and the place. This post fulfils almost all the requirements and seems like a nice work to me, though. Good job! You've got a 6 (six) (due in part to your delay).

Something to bear in mind for future tasks, make sure you revise your work before you submit it, I mean, spelling, capital letters, punctuation, Grammar, everything.

Warm regards,

Teacher Barbie

I arrived to at a camping campsite called "Río Azul" last wendsday Wednesday. the camping The campsite is very quite quiet and relaxing. I went by bus to the camping campsite and the trip took 14 hours even making stops for to go to the bathroom. When I arrived I took that day for to relax, but the next folowing following day I went to a wine cellar called "La Azul". The wine was exelent excellent, but the wether weather was very sunny and very Hot hot.

I have done zipline. that was very funny and I shouted very much. I have also gone rafting with some friends I met here in Mendoza.

Tomorrow, I'm going to do trakking trekking. The trakking trekking is 7 kilometers long. After that, in the at night we are going to do have a very big campfire with the other Ppeople of at the camping campsite.

Mendoza is incredibly incredible! I promise I'll post some photos in the evening. If you have any questions or comments, let me know, and I'll anzSwer you.

See you soon, bye-bye!

-Jano

Dear Jano,

It seems like a great trip so far! Congrats! Although you can see a lot of corrections, I am happy that you have been able to follow the structure and tenses appropriately. This post definitely fulfils all the requirements and seems like a very nice work to me. Great job! You've got a 9 (nine).

Something to bear in mind for future tasks, make sure you revise your work before you submit it, I mean, spelling, capital letters, punctuation, Grammar, everything.

Warm regards,

Teacher Barbie