Body 1:

Topic sentence: Albeit the development of digital innovation, art and music play an indispensable part of our life

+Support idea 1: enhance academic performance-foster critical thinking,problem-solving skills=> approach problems from various perspectives

*Ex: Through learning art and music=>inspire learners to get a better academic performance (pomodoro,...)

+Support idea 2: foster a sense of community with others=>express emotion=>release stress after working/studying

Body 2:

Topic sentence: Learners should spend more time to study Art and Music

+Support idea 1: promote immagination,academic achievement => develop personal growth

+Support idea 2: expose children to various cultures and traditions=>guiding them to protect cultures

*Ex: learn about music from different nations=> have a deeper understanding,appreciation of various cultures

Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today's world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

Body 1:

Topic sentence: To begin with, despite the development of technology, there are several reasons why music and art still play an essential role in today’s world. 

-Supporting idea 1: This is a tool to solve mental health’s problems. Paintings and music-> Improve emotional well-being and reduce stress. Rejuvenate mind after studying => boost creativity in learning 

Example: listening to music while studying-> totally concentrate on the lesson(Lofi music, high frequency music,…) 

-Supporting idea 2: Strengthen human’s connection-> Increase Accessibility Technology makes art and music widely available for everyone. Instead of using technology to communicate, people draw, sing together to get on well with everyone. 

Body 2: 

Topic sentence: children are encouraged to spend more time acquiring art and music’s knowledge 

-Supporting idea 1: Awareness development -> learning art and music enhances creativity, critical thinking, and problem-solving skills.+ Music and art is linked to improve mathematical and language abilities=> focus on learning  and discipline.

Example: drawing can improve mathematical skill-> connecting to solid geometry 

-Supporting idea 2: Social Skills-> Easily making new friends.+ Collaboration between students, lending others the helping hands in social activities and studying. 

 Example: finding enemies who share same favorite type of music or drawing together-> students operate bands,music clubs or art projects=>  build teamwork and communication skills.

Body1: Topic sentence:

Music and art support people in their spiritual aspects

Supporting idea 1:

Art and music can really touch us on an emotional level

=> it’s help to contribute to the life quality of humans, they can relieve stress, express ourselves, and even heal after listen to music or success ones art.

Supporting idea 2:

Engaging in art and music allows individuals to better understand themselves

=> The creative process often encourages introspection, enabling people to reflect on their thoughts, desires, and struggles. By exploring personal emotions through these mediums, individuals develop self -awareness and emotional insight, which is key to emotional growth and healing.

Body 2: Music and art play a crucial role in connecting young people to society

Supporting idea 1: Music and art help students create a sense of community

=> Music and art often serve as common ground for young people to come together and share experiences

, they can make new friends and to help them have a great chance to enhance their life skills

Supporting idea 2: Through music and art, young people are encouraged to get involved with what’s happening around them

=>For example, music festivals or art exhibitions often become places where people can talk about big topics like social justice, equality, or environmental issues. These events give young people a chance to use their creativity to raise awareness and make their voices heard in fun, impactful ways.

Body Paragraph 1: The Continued Relevance of Art and Music in the Modern World

Topic sentence: Art and music are essential for creativity, emotional expression, and mental health, even in a technology-driven society.

• Technology enhances productivity but cannot replace the creative and emotional depth offered by art and music.

• These forms of expression help people cope with stress and improve their overall well-being.

• Example: Listening to music to relax or using art therapy for mental health issues.

  
  

Body Paragraph 2: The Benefits of Learning Art and Music for Children

Topic sentence: Art and music education play a vital role in the development of children's cognitive, social, and emotional skills.

• Improve creativity, critical thinking, and problem-solving abilities.

• Foster teamwork and collaboration through activities like group performances or art projects.

• Enhance emotional intelligence by allowing students to express themselves.

• Example: Research showing students involved in music perform better academically.

Topic sentence: Due to the development of technology and science, art and music play an indispensable role in our daily life.

- Supporting idea 1: The uniqueness of art -> gain some skills like: solving problems, or social skills.

Ex: + solving problems: have many thoughts about the problem to solve it effectively.

        + social skills: have more connection with other people in the world and do some projects together which contribute to the development of the world.

- Supporting idea 2: lessen stress and pressure in each person when they listen to music. This is a pretty popular way to relieve stress among people, especially the young.

Body 2:

Topic sentence: Education programs had better enhance the teaching of art and music at schools.

- Supporting idea 1: Fostering the creativity and imagination of children.

- Supporting idea 2: Listening to music -> focus on doing something

Ex: it promotes students’ concentration while they are studying

- Topic sentence: Art and music play an important role in affecting our society significantly because of some reasons. 

- Support idea 1: Art and music bring inspiration, emotion and creativity to us.

+ Reason: Art and music contain rhythm, imagination and colors which come from anybody’s heart. When making them by ourselves, we will discover how amazing it is to combine each piece together to create an incredible work, which will level up our aesthetic senses.

+ Example: Drawings that are made by Van Gogh are highly rated because the way the artist chooses the colors and combines them brings different feelings to people and inspires them to create their own work.

- Support idea 2: Art and music reduce mental problems.

+ Reason: When making art and music, people will have a chance to express their feelings through them which help them relax and balance their emotions.

+ Example: On Facebook, a lot of young people post their art in order to show what is inside their mind, which helps them find the other artists who are in the similar shoes. 

=> Result: Art and music change the way we see the world, recover our mental injuries and increase the creativity inside everyone. 

Body 2:

- Topic sentence: From my perspective, art and music should be included as school subjects in order to help children learn about the importance of artistic values.

- Support idea 1: Children will have more chances to make projects on their own and identify themselves through the works.

+ Reason: Every artwork made by children has their unique characteristics. Moreover, students will also enjoy doing their work to show off to other classmates.

- Support idea 2: Singing along with the rhythm makes children learn about emotions and change their mindset positively.

+ Reason: Songs have different types of melodies, which also have different messages that children may learn by themselves.

+ Example: Light music brings peaceful feelings to students, some of them always have inspirational lyrics which influence the students impactfully.

=> Result: Learning art and music have many beneficial effects on children, especially on their mental health. 

Body 1:

Topic sentence: Music and art still play a significant role in our technologically driven society because of their spiritual values.

-Supporting idea 1: They are a tool for managing self emotions and healing mental health.

+Ex: Listening to music or enjoying a work of art can reduce stress, help overcome depression, and improve focus. After a long busy day, those musical and artistic activities bring a sense of peace and relaxation.

-Supporting idea 2: They help preserve cultural heritage and maintain national identities, which technology cannot.

+Ex: Traditional music or historical paintings always necessary for learning about culture.

Body 2:

Topic sentence: Schools should encourage students to explore and develop their artistic and musical side.

-Supporting idea 1: Learning art and music allows students to express themselves creatively and discover unique abilities.

+Ex: Participation in art competitions or music clubs can help students show their talents, build confidence, and create memorable achievements.

-Supporting idea 2: Knowledge in the music or art fields can support in learning and for future opportunities.

+Ex: Those skills may be useful in school projects or presentations and also for university studies.

Topic sentence:

With the development of modern world, art and music play an indispensable role in our community as many reasons.

• Supporting idea 1: Art and music seems as a tool to support people show their unique identity or emotion which also inspire it to everyone. => Creating a multiform culture => Making a colourful world => Connecting people

Supporting idea 2: A various of art and music is suitable with each people state => release stress or boots emotion. EX: a lot of researchs about music which helps individual in their mental health.

Body 2:

Topic sentence:

It is nescessary for children to learn art and music at school

• Supporting idea 1: developing immagination, mindset,.. => enhance their creativity and critical thinking. => have a opportunities to improve artistry or talent. Ex: Drawing and painting promote their mind to visualise.

• Supporting idea 2: explore different cultures and customs through artistic learning process => deeper understanding => expand knowledge

Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today’s world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

A. Do you think art and music still have a place in today’s world of technology?

Body 1:

Topic Sentence: Art and music have developed constantly so far and still keep going, despite the significant development of technology which is believed to have replaced them by other factors. Art and music play a crucial role in preserving cultural heritage and traditions, as well as benefiting us with emotional and psychological support.

1. Supporting Idea 1: Art and music preserve cultural heritage and traditions. They serve as vessels for passing down stories, beliefs, and customs from one generation to the next.

-Example: Traditional music and dance forms that tell the stories of a community's history. Traditional music and dance forms often summarize the history and values of a community, ensuring that these cultural narratives are not lost and forgotten throughout time.

2. Supporting Idea 2: Art and music provide emotional expression and mental health advantages. They offer individuals a means of expressing their emotions and coping with mental health challenges.

-Example: Music therapy is used to help patients with mental health issues. Music therapy has been shown to be effective in treating patients with various mental health issues, highlighting the therapeutic power of music so far.

Body 2:

Topic Sentence: In the technology era, art and music have not been rendered obsolete; rather, they have been enhanced by technological advancements.

1. Supporting Idea 1: Technology has revolutionized the creation and distribution of art and music, making them more accessible to a global audience.

-Example: Digital art platforms and music streaming services have democratized the arts, allowing artists and musicians to reach wider audiences than ever before, such as DeviantArt, ArtStation, Spotify, Apple Music, etc.

2. Supporting Idea 2: Learning art and music fosters creativity and critical thinking skills, which are invaluable in today's fast-paced, innovation-driven world.

B. Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

Body 3:

Topic Sentence: Integrating more art and music education into school curriculums is undeniably essential for promoting creativity, emotional intelligence, and development in children.

1. Supporting Idea 1: Art and music play a vital role in nurturing creativity, emotional intelligence, and social skills. The skills learned through art and music, such as teamwork, discipline, and perseverance,...

-Example: Participation in school bands or orchestras teaches students the importance of collaboration and dedication, skills that are transferable to various aspects of life.

2. Supporting Idea 2: Art and music also contribute to the holistic development of children. Programs that integrate arts into the curriculum have been shown to positively impact student engagement and overall development.

Topic sentence: Music and art remain important in today’s tech-driven world because of their emotional and cultural value.

• Supporting idea 1: They help people manage emotions and improve mental health.

• Example: Listening to music or appreciating art can lower stress, combat depression, and boost concentration. After a hectic day, these activities provide relaxation and a sense of calm.

• Supporting idea 2: They preserve cultural traditions and national identities, which technology alone cannot.

• Example: Traditional songs and historical artwork are essential for understanding and passing down culture.

Body 2:

Topic sentence: Schools should encourage students to explore their creative talents in art and music.

• Supporting idea 1: Art and music let students express themselves and uncover unique abilities.

• Supporting idea 2: Learning about music or art can help with studies and create future career opportunities.

• Example: Participating in art shows or joining music clubs helps students develop their talents and confidence.

Topic sentence: Art and music plays an irreplaceable role in most communities thoughout history, so does the present.

-        Support idea 1:

+music remain essential for expressing emotions and reducing stress, even for encouraging > increasing human’s life quality.

+Example: people often turn to music to overcome grief, celebrate happiness, or enhance their focus while working.

-        Support idea 2:

+Art and music reflects cultural and historical heritage. Paintings, sculptures, and other forms of art preserve traditions and allow people to learn about different societies > bearing the value of communities.

+Example: Famous works like the Mona Lisa or Beethoven’s music show how art and music carry culture through time. Or every nation’s anthem hold their own meaning of culture.

Body 2:

Topic sentence: Teaching art and music to children is essential for enhancing their brain functions, emotional development, and cultural awareness.

-        Support idea 1:

+Art and music provide cognitive benefits, improving skills > upgrade overall abilities of children

+Example: Drawing helps children improve their fine motor skills and attention to detail, promote creativity. Learning to play instruments helps with skills like memory, attention, and problem-solving.

-        Support idea 2:

+Drawing or singing helps kids express their feelings, especially if they are shy or stressed.

+Example: A child feeling sad might use music to cope, by playing a calming melody on an instrument or singing their emotions.

• topic sentence: Beside the development of technology, art and music still play an important role in various spiritual aspects of human's life.

• supporting idea 1: Art and music can healing the soul + boosting morale

• Reason : the melody of songs or conplete an art can realease stress and help human control emotion.

• Supporting idea 2: Also connecting community by connecting people who have the same perspectives and viewpoints in art or music.

• Reason: same music taste or same art evaluation will bring people closer emotionally and spiritually, so that forming friendships.

• Ex: People at an exhibition who share the same viewpoint will discuss the artwork together and exchange their opinions. => bring them closer to new relationships.

Body 2:

• Topic sentence: the value of art and music brings many benefits for children not only on social media but also from art and music activities at school. => Children should spend time learning those at school.

• Supporting idea 1: Enhances creativity and patient.

• Reason: To completly finish an art work, ones  need to have a high concerntrate in each line and details + variety ideas are depicted in the painting can enhances creativity by their own characteristics.

• supporting idea 2: improves social skill

• Reason : take part in a band, music groups or a performance => need the cooperation of all members. Enhances communication and teamwork skill.

• Ex: have the same type of music can bring people closer each other => make new friends + easily work together effectively.

Body 1:

Topic sentence: music and art is the best means of communication.

+ Explain: convey emotions, ideas, and messages without using words

+ Example: different languages -> misunderstanding but through music and art -> meanings was able to transfer to the listener or watcher

+ result: reach people on a deeply emotional and instinctual level

Body 2:

Topic sentence: art and music play a vital role in education.

+ Explain: art and music nurturing creativity + enhancing cognitive abilities + supporting emotional development.

+ Explaination for the former:

• Music linked to enhanced memory, attention, and the ability to process information + Art activities can develop spatial-temporal skills and improve visual and spatial intelligence.

• Students express feelings better through art and music.

Result:

• manage emotions and build self-confidence

• Develop the ability to approach tasks from different perspectives + think critically

Main ideas :

1. Art and music are unreplaceable

•Explanation : For a very long time, art and music have played a basic role in entertainment and reducing mind pressure

•Example : Both of them had appeared early even in the primary period of humanity, became important in social life up to now.

2. Technology promotes music and art

•Explanation : Technology or specifically social media is an ideal platform for art and music to develop

•Example : People are now able to share everything in the Internet, so it is a golden apple for music and art become more popular to everyone and widen its fame.

View 2 : Children should spend more time learning art and music at school

Main ideas :

1.Develop creativity

•Explanation : Comprehending art by themselve provide children a freedom to be more creative.

•Example : Children are given opportunities to express themselve through art and music, particularly drawing or singing, even other aspects not only amusement. Consequently they have more and more interest to determine themselve

2.Ameliorate communication skill and be more confident

•Explanation : Children would have an excuse to interact with other peers, share their own ideas and share interest to the others

•Example : Two childrens with the same hobby at art, such as playing guitar, drawing or singing can connect each other and make friend, show off their personal skills or delight. As a result, they gain confidence by sharing and interacting

Art and music are mulled over the human’s spirit and it develops the connection between ethnics.

+Supporting idea 1

Art and music were discovered for million years ago -- it shows up a human’s civilization and culture at one point in the past -- it illustrates the human’s innovation.

ð  However the contemporary the human was, arts and music still have a presence in our life.

Ex: + There are many kinds of music which changed over the time

       + We still create some modern art which are exhibited in some art galleries or museums.

+ Supporting idea 2

Each of country has their own national anthem and national flag  – the difference and uniqueness of art and music all over the world could bring us together

ð  Art and music are our soul. Without arts and music, there might have been plenty of wars between ethnics

Body 2 :

Music and art not only should be taught to the children but also being taught as a main subject at the school.

+Supporting idea 1 :

Making art and music compulsory at schools makes students to grow interest in non-academic subjects and get hands-on experience in these fields

+ Supporting idea 2:

Boost Critical Thinking, Creativity, and Problem-Solving Skills 

Ex: children could brainstorm for the new ideas during they make an art project.

Outline

Body 1

Topic sentence: Although digital evolution is developing, art and music still play a crucial role for people to soothe the spiritual factor and narrow the social gap.

Supporting idea 1: Art and music bring a lot of emotional or cognitive benefits.

-       Bring joy and relax when they listen their idol’s music

-       Foster emotional expression, creativity, and critical thinking.

Supporting idea 2: these gifted subject will help students who diverse social relationship and connect with many people through technological devices

-      Music and art as tools for building communities and enhancing interpersonal relationships.

-       Students can cooperate with friends and exchange information related to music and art.

For example: When a works of art or a piece of music is released, inviduals can discuss with others together, worthing them which is good or bad, they will gradually uderstand each other better.

Body 2:

  Topic sentence: Art and music still are a part of education that brings a lot of benefits for students.

Supporting idea 1:

• This is a gifted subject for students to show their talent.

• Art and music can be organized as a competition for students to get the awards that assert themselves to everyone.

Supporting idea 2:

• Serving for their future and following their passion.

• Being a job that brings a source of income while still a student.

For instance, when a student has a talent for singing, they can participate in many music shows or competitions in school; they will get much money from the awards or donations from audiences. Then they can buy something that they like or use this money for their family.

Topic sentence: Art and music always play an extremely important role in today's modern technology for student's life.

• Supporting idea 1: Increase the emotional and psycological.

• Reason: The meaning of a song's lyrics can help them calm down and better understand themselves and completing a beautiful painting makes them happier.

• Supporting idea 2: Art and music support personal and community development.

• Reason: Finding people with similar interests in music or art helps them gain more inspiration.

Ex: By joining groups with similar interests, we will have a chances to share about our hobbies with another person=> Build good relationships between people.

Body 2

Topic sentence: Learning music and art in education also brings many benefits for the comprehensive development of students.

• Supporting idea 1: They can enhance people's ability to develop creative thinking

• Reason: Learners need to understand and create new musical melodies as well as express emotions through sound, while drawing stimulates the ability to imagine and express ideas through images, forms and colors.

• Supporting idea 2: Reduce stress and depression

• Reason: They help students improve our spirit and reduce stress after a tiring day of studying and working

Ex: When they listen to a favorite song or complete a painting, that is the moment all our negativity disappears.

Main idea: Art and music still stand a significant position in today's technological world.

Sup point 1: Technology has enhanced the accessibility and reach of art and music via multimedia platforms.

Sup point 2: Creativity as digital art and music production, are dying out as technological tools continue developing

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Main idea: Children greatly forms creativeness from learning art and music in school.

Sup point 1: Art and music allow creativity, principle-breaking and relaxation to arise steadily.

Sup point 2: Taking part in artistic activities supports emotional expression and mental health.

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Topic sentence: Music and art play an important role in our emotions and preservation culture and tradition.

Supporting idea 1: Music and art help us reduce stress, heal soul 

Ex: When we listen to music, which has cheerful, inspirational melodies we can reduce weariness and stabilize negative emotions. Moreover, It helps us get inspired to keep working. 

Supporting idea 2: Music and art will make people more interested in its message instead of just reading about it.

Ex: We are easily attracted by music or pictures. Therefore, through a traditional painting or a folk, we can be interested and easily absorb the messages that music and art bring.

Body 2:

Topic sentence: Music and art help students connect with each other and express their creativity.

Supporting idea 1: Music and art help communicate easier.

Ex: By sharing a favorite song or picture with each other, students can get to know each other through similar musical tastes, making it easier to connect with each other.

Supporting idea 2: Music and art allow students to be creative.

Ex: Through drawing lessons at school, students can show their creativity through their freehand drawings. In addition, music can help students express their creativity by playing new melodies on a musical instrument.

• Topic sentence: Art and music play a multifaceted role in human life and society, enriching emotional, intellectual and cultural dimensions.

+ Support idea 1:

Art and music serve as universal languages of emotion, helping individuals process feelings and experiences.

+ Support idea 2:

Music and art bring people together, building a sense of connection.

+ Example: The song’s lyrics and emotional melody of “Someone like you” by Adele allowing people from various cultures to connect with feelings of loss, even if they don’t share the same language.

Body 2:

• Topic sentence: Children who experience art and music in the school are better equipped to think critically and creatively in the future.

+ Support idea 1:

Art and music encourage children creative problem-solving.

+ Example: When children learn to play an instrument, they need to think creatively to connect with the melodies or how to play it in many different styles.

+ Support idea 2:

Artistic and musical help children to communicate effectively and develop social skills.

+ Example: By collaborating in some art projects or creating a music band help students learn how to work as a team, express their vision in a respectful way.

* Topic sentence: Art and music offer unique benefits that technology cannot fully replicate.

* Supporting idea 1: They foster creativity and innovation.

   * Example: Engaging in artistic pursuits like painting or composing music encourages divergent thinking and problem-solving skills.

* Supporting idea 2: They enhance emotional intelligence and well-being.

   * Example: Listening to music or creating art can evoke strong emotions and provide catharsis, improving mental health.

Body Paragraph 2: The Importance of Early Exposure to Art and Music

* Topic sentence: Early exposure to art and music is crucial for children's cognitive and social development.

* Supporting idea 1: They develop cognitive skills.

   * Example: Learning to play an instrument or analyze a painting can improve memory, attention span, and spatial reasoning.

* Supporting idea 2: They strengthen social and emotional bonds.

   * Example: Participating in music or art classes can foster teamwork, cooperation, and empathy among children.

1. Art and music are vital for emotional and cultural expression

   • Art and music serve as universal languages that help people express emotions and cultural values. They communicate feelings that words cannot.

   • Example: National anthems, cultural dances, and traditional art forms like Aboriginal dot painting or African drumming preserve cultural heritage and identity.

2. Art and music have cognitive and mental health benefits

   • Artistic activities stimulate brain development, enhance memory and focus, and reduce stress.

• Example: Studies show that students who study music tend to perform better in subjects like math and science due to improved cognitive skills.

The Importance of Art and Music in Children's Education

1. Promote cognitive and creative development

   • Arts education boosts creativity, problem-solving, and critical thinking, which are valuable in both artistic and technical fields.

   • Example: Students involved in music often develop better language and reasoning skills, helping them succeed academically.

2. Foster social and emotional development

   • Art and music encourage teamwork, empathy, and self-expression, building emotional intelligence and interpersonal skills.

   • Example: Programs like El Sistema in Venezuela use music to help underprivileged children grow in confidence and emotional well-being.

3. Schools should prioritize art and music education

   • A well-rounded education, including the arts, helps children become creative and well-adjusted individuals. Art and music should be integrated into the curriculum alongside STEM subjects.

   • Example: Finland's education system, which includes arts education, leads to high student engagement and academic success.

Topic sentence: Music and art play vital roles in inspiration and relaxation for majority of individuals in today’s world.

Support sentence 1: its healing melody and meaning lyrics does not only help relax and inspire after working hours, but aslo promotes productivity and creation in working.

Support sentence 2: art like paintings or drama reflects meanings about different sides of life => understand more and have a number of aspects.

Second paragraph:

Topic sentence: Children should learn art and music at school.

Support sentence 1 : beside studying many compulsory subjects, they need to learn happily some classes => make them chill and entertain to get more energy and knowlegde of society such as emotional expression, confidence, cultural appreciation,…

Support sentence 2: help students develop creation and explore their interests => easily direct a right way in the future.

Ex: Some activities such as singing painting, dancing,… in groups => learn how to interact with other people, have beautiful memories with friends, social skills,…

•Topic sentence 1: Art and music still hold a significant value in today's rapidly changing world with many positive impacts to society.

• Supporting idea 1: Art and music are means of expressing and releasing human's emotions  .

• Example : For instance, after a stressful day at work, listening to a favorite song can help release emotions, whether by offering relaxation or providing comfort through its meaningful and comforting lyrics. Allowing people to express feelings that are hard for them to put into words.

• Supporting idea 2: They play an essential role in cultural preservation.

• Explain: Despite the strong development of technology , which can diminish local traditions , art and music can help maintain a sense of identity and cultural continuity.

• Example : Many tradition forms of art such as indigenous music , folk art , traditional dance,.. are promoted and introduced through social media or famous tourist attractions , which help young generations understand their heritage.

Body 2:

•Topic sentence 2: The importance of art and music also extends beyond emotional and cultural benefits to intellectual development. So let children approached art and music as a subject at school is necessary.

• Supporting idea : Art and music education to provide students with an interesting and creative learning experience.

• By doing that, students can also practice artistic abilities, promote creativity + contributes to their emotional and intellectual growth .

Body 1:

- Topic sentence: Although the rapid pace of technological change is having profound impact on our lives, art and music still hold a crucial place for some reasons.

- Supporting idea 1: Art and music preserve and express historical traditions and values -> serving as a reflection of culture and history in our country.

Ex: Dong Ho painting and Quan Ho singing in Vietnam -> rich cultural history -> sense of pride.

- Supporting idea 2: The best means of transportation to connect with others -> breaking the language barrier and different cultural backgrounds -> fostering connection and cohesion.

Ex: Global music festivals like Coachella which attracts attendees from all over the world -> bring together people from diverse backgrounds, promoting understanding and collaboration.

Body 2:

- Topic sentence: It is crucial that schools should encourage students to spend more time engaging in artistic and musical activities.

- Supporting idea 1: Art and music as effective tools for relieving stress and improving emotional well-being -> helping students cope with academic pressures -> reducing mental illness.

Ex: Schools celebrate some artistic and musical competitions or performances -> helping to boost mood after a hectic schechule -> leading to a more positive learning environment.

- Supporting idea 2: Art and music classes also help students to develop critical thinking skills -> opportunities to express their creativity and imagination -> contributing to their overall development.

Ex: Studies have shown that learning to play an instrument or engage in musical activities improves memory and concentration -> Students can become better learners and thinkers -> Leading to having a positive effect on academic performance.

OUTLINE:

BODY 1: 

Topic sentence: 

To begin with, music and art still play an vital role in today world because of the educational impact and the influence on the society it brings.

-Supporting idea 1:

Music and art can effectively improve children academic performance. 

Learning music and art enhance cognitive skills( critical thinking, time managing,...)

Music and art help student to enhance their creativity, makes them to think outside the box and develop unique solutions to problem.

Example: learn how to do art like painting or singing can involve complex mental process that improve student academic performance.

-Supporting idea 2:

Additionally, music and art has a enormous influence on today society. Many artist nowadays use their work of art as a tool to raises awareness about social issues.

Artists' artwork can inspire and motivate people to take action in social problem( pollution, racism,...)

BODY 2:

Topic sentence: School and parent should encourage children to spend more time learning art and music.

- Supporting idea 1: 

Music and art help children to gain many neccessary skill. By creating artwork, children can develop their creativity, imagination and critical thinking skill. Moreover, art and music can help children to have better academic performance.

Example: studies show that learning how to play a musical instrument can help children enhance their memorizing and problem solving skill.

- Supporting idea 2: 

Encourage children to learn music and art can help them cultivate their talents, prepare for their potential careers.

A background in art and music can bring children various career path ( singer, artist, graphic designer,...)

+ Topic Sentence: Art and music play a vital role in human development and society.

- It can enhance cognitive abilities such as creativity, problem-solving, and critical thinking.

Ex: Learning to play an instrument or create a piece of art requires focus, discipline, and problem-solving skills.

- Making art also can foster emotional intelligence and mental well-being

Ex: They can express their emotions and process difficult experiences.

- Moreover, they contribute to cultural identity and heritage

Ex: By studying and appreciating art and music, individuals can develop a deeper understanding of different cultures and perspectives.

Body 2: Student should be taught art and music at school.

+ Topic Sentence: Schools should concentrate on art and music education to equip students for the future

- Teaching art and music helps the young improve academic performance in other subjects

- Drawing and singing at school fosters creativity and innovation

Ex: By exploring different artistic techniques and musical styles, students learn to think outside the box and approach challenges with fresh perspectives.

- Art and music education social skills and collaboration

Ex: Teamwork, communication.

Topic Sentence: Despite rapid technological advancements, art and music continue to hold significant value in modern society.

- Supporting Idea 1 - Mental health benefits: Art and music offer emotional release, reduce stress, and enhance creativity.

Example: People often listen to calming music, such as lo-fi beats, while studying to improve focus and reduce anxiety.

- Supporting Idea 2: Technology has expanded the accessibility of art and music, making them more inclusive.

Example: Online platforms like YouTube and Spotify allow users to access global art forms, strengthening cultural connections and understanding.

- Supporting Idea 3: Encourage Human Connection:

• Art and music foster shared experiences, transcending language and cultural barriers.

• Technology enables broader access to art and music but does not replace personal engagement like attending live concerts or art workshops.

*Body 2: Encouraging Children to Learn Art and Music in Schools

Topic Sentence: Schools should incorporate more time for art and music education to promote holistic development in children.

- Supporting Idea 1: Learning art and music fosters creativity, critical thinking, and problem-solving skills, which are vital in both academics and personal growth.

Example: Activities like drawing can enhance geometric understanding, which relates to mathematical skills.

- Supporting Idea 2: Art and music promote teamwork and social skills by encouraging collaboration among students.

Example: Students who form bands or participate in art projects develop better communication and build lifelong friendships.

*Outline:

_Body 1:

Topic sentence: Despite the rapid technological advancement. Art and music still play an integral part of our society in terms of cultural and emotional significance.

Supporting idea 1: Art and music preserve cultural heritage => create inspiration for students in learning history and culture through entertainment platforms.

Ex: Participating in some ancient music performances like opera, Cai Luong,... and art exhibitions => provides students with great exploration as well as offer an enriching introduction about history and culture of a local or country

Supporting idea 2: Art and music help students overcome emotional damage.

Explain: Listening to favorite songs that match our emotions or engaging in drawing => foster students creativity and relieve mental health's problems => healing negative feelings.

_Body 2:

Topic sentence: it is vital for children to spend more time learning art and music at school.

Supporting idea 1: art and music contribute to the development of students’ mindset and cognitive skills => promote students in improving their imagination and coordination => enhance their performances in academic subjects.

Ex: Some schools encourage learners to engage in art and music activities => embrace their logical and critical thinking skills + collaborating with their peers.

Supporting idea 2: Learning art and music helps students develop self-expression => allow them to better understand and communicate their feelings.

Topic sentence: Art and music play an important role in the modern world nowadays. 

Supporting sentence 1: Role of these things in the life of humans. 

Supporting ideas

• Entertainment (reduce stress, relax…) . Color and melodies create us a different space, the place where we can escape from daily works and actuality. Ex: When you bored, you would find  watching films, listening to songs

Supporting sentence 2: Many jobs, career need these things. 

Supporting ideas

• Music and art help people gain their career more successfully. They could make their own unique equality and be different from others, so it will be easily attractive and push their works to be better. Ex : As a Tiktok content creator, if they are creative in their works, they could brainstorm many new and quality contents, so they could easily succeed in their jobs.

Body 2: 

Topic sentence: Children need to learn more about art and music, especially students of kindergarten, primary school. 

Supporting sentence 1: Enhance creative and brainstorm.

Supporting ideas

• Their brain works more creatively when they do art activities. 

Supporting sentence 2: Enhance artistic skills

• Play music instruments, draw a painting. It could make them talented at something.

Body 1:

Topic sentence: Spiritual values ​​from art and music cannot be replaced but can also be nurtured according to the development of the times.

• Supporting idea 1: As global development goes hand in hand with challenges and pressures, people are increasingly concerned with spiritual life.

+ Ex: More and more people are attending workshops, concerts, music and art events,…to express emotions, heal hearts and connect souls.

• Suppporting idea 2: Music and art are increasingly taking on more modern approaches.

+ Ex: Digital art, virtual concert, music app,…

Body 2:

Topic sentence: Music and art are wonderful when applied in schools, but they should not become mandatory subjects.

• Supporting idea: Not all students have a deep interest or talent for music and art. Forcing them to take these subjects can lead to boredom and create a sense of constraint.

+ Ex: Students who are not good at music and art may feel pressured about their performance. Music is emotion, art is creativity, let students be comfortable with their strengths.

Viewpoint 1: Art and music signficantly effects on our part of human being

Supporting idea 1: Provide health benefits which reduce stress, negative feelings, improve depression system, get in touch with our emotion

Example: Hospitals often use music therapy to help patients undergoing surgery or chemotherapy

Supporting idea 2: Creating or simply viewing the drawings and listening to music help people stay motivated during workouts, study sessions, or challenging life moments. Additionally, they can be able to gain more confidence and inspirations.

Example: Gymers usually set their personal playlists as for their motivation.

Viewpoint 2: Education should focus more on art and music for their students owning to following reasons.

Supporting idea 1: Make more creative and innovative thinkers. Art and music helps these qualities by encouraging children to think more deeply. In art, they experiment with different materials and styles, while in music, they explore unique melodies and rhythms. These experiences nurture flexibility in thinking, a skill crucial for problem-solving in any field.

Supporting idea 2: Music and art lead to emotional and social development. They encourage children with to express feelings they may not yet have the words to say.

Example: Composing a piece of music or painting can help children process complex emotions like sadness or excitement, promoting emotional intelligence and mental well-being.

Topic sentence: Despite the explosive growth of cutting-edge technologies, art and music still play a pivotal role in the world.

Idea 1: Art and music bring truly aesthetic values that have positive effects on human’s mental health.

Explanation: Human beings have emotions → express them through pictures and songs → people in the same situation get mutual understanding → relieve their stress/ solve their mental problems.

Example: Music therapy

Idea 2: Art and music effectively stimulate people cognitive system

Explanation: Drawing/ listening or writing music enables people to come up with innovative ideas → perform such ideas in their unique way → increase creativity and personal comfort.

Expand: They draw up different strategies → significantly contributing to task-solving in constantly developing world.

Body 2:

Topic sentence: Students should be encouraged to engage their time in cultivating art and music subjects.

Idea 1: Student can expand their social circle by means of learning such subjects

Explain: Art and music have different categories → Students choose their favorite one → make friends with people whose the same interest

Expand: Curriculum of such subjects requires mutual collaboration → Children collectively performance → enhancing cooperation, strengthening friendship.

Idea 2: Art and music subjects stimulate students’ intelligence in an effective way.

Explanation: Young children have different perspectives towards life/ great abilities to solve problems → art and music allow students to express more easily/comfortably → they will continue to create more ideas, innovation, breakthroughs.

Expand: Teachers, families can help children, enhance students' intelligence find out the appropriate ways of self-development by drawing and writing.