FINAL DRAFTS by Moesha Swanigan

Minecraft

2024-09-04 16:10:19 UTC

My door opens hey my sister said yeah do you want to play minecraft i sniffle yeah i try to say in a cheerful voice i know your sick yes i am.I say in a sad voice it will be ok me and Mohrgan

calafornia

2024-09-04 16:10:23 UTC

"bla bla bla" As i heard my dad and mom talking to my uncle and aunt,while i and my sister, Hailey, was playing with our cousin, Aiden.

Colorado

2024-09-04 16:10:25 UTC

My first day in Colorado was deep into the night . The next day my granddad ,aunt, uncle, my parents, and me and my sister sat around one long wooden table . My mom passed me my plate of waffles with a touch of warm runny

In Main!

2024-09-04 16:10:26 UTC

Shut! I am in the big blue house in Main! M

My Home

2024-09-04 16:10:27 UTC

My dad cooks the best food for dinner!

Trinidad and Tobago

2024-09-04 16:12:08 UTC

Drip! Definitely

Eldridge park

2024-09-04 19:55:13 UTC

When i kick a soccer ball it sound like pingy. I run and then slid and said gool. I run's tuck the soccer and did a three sixty after the soccer game. I put my crocs on and run to the park and i play on the slide

Grandma's house

2024-09-04 19:57:45 UTC

''Sizzle". I hear my memas spaghetti . ''Madi'', my Memas calls. spaghetti is ready! I could almost taste the spaghetti . I ran like lightning in to the dinning room. I sat down and ate the spaghetti. mmm! i said. I would definitely eat the red saucy spaghetti again.

NewYork

2024-09-04 19:57:51 UTC

Whoosh! A shooting star flys over my head.Big buildings, star gazing, relaxing, and seeing the best view. Going to NewYork is a fun trip with your family. Star gazing and looking at big buildings. Wow! Driving around NewYork at night time is beautiful. It's no wonder why I love NewYork.

BASKETBALL court

2024-09-04 20:02:03 UTC

Swoosh! Basketball Is a good sport to play And to workout.I made so many shots. I hope we win the championship.

Eldridge park

2024-09-04 20:02:09 UTC

Wooooosh!!!! As I go so fast with my blue beautiful kent bike around green soccer field and around the fresh water lake.I go really fast in my blue bike and I sometimes even race people at Eldridge. Eldridge park is the best park I have ever went to. Now that I think of it. I think I know my plan for the weekend

nana's hill

2024-09-04 20:03:32 UTC

"Laughter" goes as me and my brother throwing brown sticks at a green tree. Running up and down smollm top of hill. Site of green grass. My nana hill is the pleas to be

Dominos pizza

2024-09-04 20:06:40 UTC

We are at Dominos pizza the most delicious

pizza at sugar land. When our pizza is ready

it was the most sizzly pizza in my life when

I took a bite it was the best pizza in my

opinion.

orlando florida beaches

2024-09-04 20:07:09 UTC

I can't believe it's already the last day of being in Orlando Florida. Well hey at least we're going to the beach today. The beaches are beautiful!!. There's seashells, fish, and alot more!. There's so much to do i don't even know where to start. The beaches are so clean! I don't even know how much times i can say this. The water is ocean clear and not a single piece of trash anywhere!. Before me and my little brother sat on our towels and ate our chocolate glazed donut. After we raced to the wet sand and had a sand castle contest. "I'm going to obviously win." Of course i did. Lastly me and my family went for a swim in the salty ocean before we went home. I had a great time in Orlando Florida, I hope to come back next year!

word

2024-09-04 20:09:23 UTC

word! Im learing a new language.Im geting use to It.My mom and dad always wanted me to learn spanish I didn't want to.Now because Im Interested In spanish they try to get me to learn I didn't understand since Ive found dolinggo Im learning spanish

OKC

2024-09-04 20:10:37 UTC

Nay Nay Nay as I looked out the window and I wanted to ride then but I could not ride it. My family and I enjoy looking at animals every time I visits.

Food in China

2024-09-04 20:12:11 UTC

Yum I love my donuts. best in China.I can always eat another pink glossy donut again.If you don't want your donut give me the donut.I can eat donuts for ever.

Target ice cream!

2024-09-04 20:12:53 UTC

Scoop I witnessed the best ice cream ever! The ice cream I tasted was creamy and It had has a lot of toppings in it.It has chocolate chips with caramel chunks. No ice cream can beat target ice cream wow That was good. I was so excited to eat more ice cream! plus there was a lot of different flavors of there ice cream.The colors in the bubble gum ice cream was baby pink; dark blue ;green and yellow.

playdate

2024-09-04 20:14:42 UTC

Wow! my first play date was so amazing! we played a mystery

game and we'll be going to PUMP IT UP! an l can't wait for another adventure with Heidi

2024-09-04 20:14:50 UTC

Creak!The door opened a we heard a, "Hello!" My brother and I looked and saw my relatives.Once, they unpacked, we wanted to show them around.However my parents said it was late and they needed to sleep.Then we all went to bed. the next morning,we got to show them around! Also showed them the pool.After, we went swimming.Once I touched the pool,it felt like ice.Lastly we got a call that dinner was ready. When we smelled the pizza, we grabbed a slice as quick as we could.I can't wait to make does memories again

2024-09-05 14:34:42 UTC

In 2022 it was my first time going to the beach. I was so excited to go. It was a 2 hour drive the whole time i was thinking about what could go wrong. Mostly thinking about rain,storms, iv been trying to get it off my mind but i could not because it was getting a bit cloudy.My dad tried to calm me by saying we can get a hotel if something even happens so i tried to get it off my mind by playing games on my mom's phone. It worked eventually but as soon as i got off it looked liked it was going to rain. When we got there it was drizzling a bit but only a little so we tried another part it was not raining there so we played for 2-3 hours before leaving

Shhh..... the waves say calmly.Squak! the birds say crazly.I love the beach near my house,so is the ice cream store. Its so calm. Right when you open your eyes you'll see blue,splashing waves.I love the smell of water in the morning.I feel the bumpy sand below me.I love to get a quick ice cream in the morning before going to the beach.I cant wait to go back to boston and play at the beach!

2024-09-05 14:38:52 UTC

*California

2024-09-05 15:36:46 UTC

"bla bla bla" As i heard my dad and mom talking to my uncle and aunt,while i and my sister, Hailey, was playing with our cousin, Aiden.What we usually do is having family dinners.We go to chili's, golden corral, whatever.The best part is when we light up

PonyVill

2024-09-05 15:38:37 UTC

Knock knock the pony's walking that was the best ride ever in california because the pony's was so cute,and sweet but it might seem boring,but my opinion that is my favorite,and it is not scary like the other rides i've been "so scary"But the food "muah" so deliuous I forgot the name but I can describe it so it is a sweet flavor freezing kind of a popsicle or ice cream cotton candy flavor "YuM",and walking might be exsuasting but it is fantastic about everything.I will treasure all my merories in pony vill

BEACH Swash the sand fells so good underneath my toes. As the beach is the only I can catch a breath. That's the only time my gradnma comes anywhere. By the way the waves are so beautiful. Thay look like thay are photoshoped.They make me want to stay forever I hope you fell the same?

2024-09-05 15:38:55 UTC

vietnam! *

2024-09-05 15:44:57 UTC

"chitter chatter" I hear my family talking. I have a lot of people in my family so its loud. I like spending time with my family in vietnam they take me places like restaurants to eat my favorite food noodles. Next they take me shopping i bought plushes and so much other stuff. My family took me to places like the beach in vietnam the sand is so soft. I jump in the water in excitement. I can't wait to go back to vietnam

*Minecraft

2024-09-05 15:45:07 UTC

My door opens hey my sister said yeah do you want to play minecraft i sniffle yeah i try to say in a cheerful voice i know your sick yes i am.I say in a sad voice it will be ok me and My sister love to play minecraft. We like to build houses ginormous houses its quiet My sister says hey your piano practice is better than last time really yes hey want to help me build as house sure want some ramen i say ok .Make two one for me one for you i can't have any i'm sick oh right im sorry echoed in my mind .I pushed out my words it's ok xbox shuting down good game yeah.

*Colorado

2024-09-05 15:46:58 UTC

My first day in Colorado was deep into the night . The next day my granddad ,aunt, uncle, my parents, and me and my sister sat around one long wooden table . My mom passed me my plate of waffles with a touch of warm runny syrup . After we were do done my mom asked if we would like to go dog sledding Yes please! I said . When we got to the snow hills down the rode . There was about ten or maybe eight . After we got on the sled with my mom , sister ,and me

my home

2024-09-05 15:46:58 UTC

my favorite place to be is my home because it has toys and games and family. my home is the beat because it has beds and a tv and

In Main!*

2024-09-05 15:47:04 UTC

shut! l am in the big blue house in Main! My family is there and l hug them all so hard. l miss them sense the last time l saw them! l ran to the dogs too in excitement! I hug them so hard too! They feel like a nice soft blanket in my hands. then l sit on the soft couch and l start to drift. the dogs licked my face and l got up fast and l see the dogs. l pet the dogs and l get up and l smell a big meal waiting for me

*The mall

2024-09-05 15:47:34 UTC

We are at the mall. I go with my garama. We go to Macys or Dillards. I cloths from the shiny coat racks. I get shirts, shorts, skirts, and drees. Then we both get kind of hungry, ... so we go to Chik-fa-la. I always get chicen

*My Home

2024-09-05 15:47:50 UTC

My dad cooks the best food for dinner!

Crab,ousters,chicken,you name it,and he

can make it!

I hear the bubbles from the pot outside.

I could smell the big MEATY claws!

I already know what my dad was making...

CRAB!!!

the reason I love my home is because

there's no other place my dad makes crab this good!

JAPAN

2024-09-05 15:48:30 UTC

Hmm? me and my mom were looking at sushi my dad wasn't there because he is allergic to seafood so he was at my uncle house we were going to my uncles house but i will eat it in the car because i can eat seafood next to my dad he cant be near it

Orlando Florida

2024-09-05 15:48:34 UTC

*Back at home my cousin traves drove us I was so excited when we got to the airport so we can go to Orlando Florida .we got a few snacks from the airport when we got on the plane it took 2 hours from Houston to Orlando .When we got there we got a car then we went to a hotel and it had a pool and a hot tub outside the next day me and my cousins and my auntie dreena and my mom we went to a water park and Lego land we had fun at the water park we went on water slides ,lazy river,loped slides.then we ate pepperoni pizza the Legos I got from Lego land is venomtis groot ,sonic Lego set on the last day in Orlando was we played at the hotel pool.

2024-09-05 15:49:27 UTC

My favorite place to go is my house. cus I love my bed and. I love my mom and her name is Felicia I love my dad amd his name is Lalo and my

*Trinidad and Tobago

2024-09-05 15:49:52 UTC

Drip! Definitely the drippiest chicken ever. I hear my uncle talking to me "why eating chocolate so early in the morning" he said. I really like the food in Trinidad and Tobago. I like the chocolate, chicken, and the food. My mom tells me every time of how it was like in her old neighborhood. Trinidad and Tobago has always been a special place for me.

*im in La

2024-09-05 15:50:17 UTC

SPLAT!!! I witnessed the best pool and the BIGGEST pool in LA. my mom and dad loved LA AFTER we went to the pool. when we went to Dominos the smell in that place oh my god too good the pizza we all loved. That was the memories of Detroit!!!

2024-09-05 19:53:53 UTC

basketball court

2024-09-05 19:58:57 UTC

Swoosh!Basketball Is a good sport to play and to workout.I made so many shots.I hope we win the championship.

boston

2024-09-05 20:11:33 UTC

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!A baby is crying in its black crib,I love spending time with my little nephew,and spinning him in his black bassinet at my brothers house,and I like gazing at all the colorful colors and smelling all the beatiful smells at the mall .I also like running away from genesy when her inner donky kong emerges out.another thing I like is running from the monkey.

2024-09-05 20:12:14 UTC

crunch!crunch! I bit in my big glose donut we went down the elevator. my sis came running out of the room. she can small the donuts

playdate

2024-09-05 20:12:22 UTC

Wow! my first play date was so amazing we played a mystery game and we'll be going to PUMP IT UP! an I can't wait for another adventure with Heidi And It's end of summer and this year Heidi and I are not in the SAME CLASS! I'm

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moeshaswanigan — 2024-09-05 20:13:02 UTC

getting home bring me so much joy!I see the green and w

Bestie

2024-09-10 18:15:01 UTC