Week Two: Revision Practice Activities (Wed.) by https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv Use the Guidelines for Writing and Reading Broadcast News to rewrite these sentences for broadcast. Remember: You are not only writing for the ear, someone is going to have to read what you write out loud. Sometimes that person will be you and other times, it will be someone else. Either way, you need to make sure that the person does not stumble over their words. You are writing for your listeners.  Make sure you think listeners, not readers. en-us 2017-09-07 18:01:24 UTC 2025-11-13 13:57:44 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/19205516/c63c475a94ee581e4d82d7a837025679/broadcast_technicians.jpg Sentence 1 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540131 The Grape and Wine Festival took over parts of Saint Catharines today ... to celebrate the recent harvest.]]> 2018-09-12 19:10:45 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540131 Sentence 1 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540242 The Grape and Wine Festival took over Saint Paul Street in Saint Catharines today.]]> 2018-09-12 19:11:03 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540242 Sentence 1 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540254 Today parts of Saint Catharines were taken over by the Grape and Wine Festival.]]> 2018-09-12 19:11:05 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540254 Sentence 1 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540281 The Grape and Wine Festival took over downtown Saint Catharines today. ]]> 2018-09-12 19:11:09 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540281 Sentence 1 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540370 Today's harvest celebration in Saint Catharines took over Saint Paul Street.]]> 2018-09-12 19:11:22 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540370 Sentence 1 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540376 The largest recent harvest in Saint Catharines was celebrated on Saint Paul Street.]]> 2018-09-12 19:11:23 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540376 Sentence Two brandon_98_wright https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540439 The evidence was found on a hidden tape recorder. ]]> 2018-09-12 19:11:33 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540439 Sentence 1 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540444 The Grape and Wine Festival took over St. Paul st. to celebrate one of the largest recent harvests. ]]> 2018-09-12 19:11:33 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540444 One. https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540449 Today in Saint Catharine's the Grape and Wine Festival celebrated one of the biggest recent harvests.]]> 2018-09-12 19:11:34 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540449 Sentence #1 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540456 In Saint Catharines, the Grape and Wine Festival took over a downtown street ... Saint Paul Street.]]> 2018-09-12 19:11:35 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540456 Sentence 1 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540473 The Grape and Wine Festival on St. Paul st. has taken over St. Catharines.]]> 2018-09-12 19:11:37 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540473 Sentence 1 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540535 The Grape and Wine Festival took over Saint Paul today with one of their largest harvests yet.]]> 2018-09-12 19:11:45 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540535 Sentence 2 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540651 The evidence was secretly recorded.]]> 2018-09-12 19:12:05 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540651 ONE https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540702  o on  
one of the largest of harvest celebrations '  
The Grape and Wine Festival ' took over today .]]> 2018-09-12 19:12:10 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540702 Today the Grape and Wine Festival took over parts of Saint Catharine. https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540721 2018-09-12 19:12:13 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540721 Sentence 2 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540723 The evidence wad found on a hidden tape recorder.

]]> 2018-09-12 19:12:14 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540723 Sentence Three brandon_98_wright https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540732 City police report four people were injured in a five-car pileup on the Trans-Canada highway. The crash happened as a result of heavy snow, decreasing visibility. ]]> 2018-09-12 19:12:15 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540732 Sentence 2 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540894 A hidden twin-track tape recorder contains the evidence that was recorded.]]> 2018-09-12 19:12:44 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540894 Sentence 2 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540906 The evidence was secretly recorded.]]> 2018-09-12 19:12:45 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540906 Sentence 3 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540917 Four people were injured in a multiple car pile-up on the Trans-Canada highway.]]> 2018-09-12 19:12:46 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540917 Two. https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540957 The evidence was recorded on a hidden tape recorder]]> 2018-09-12 19:12:52 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540957 Sentence 3 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540967 City police report that four people were injured in a five car pileup on the Trans-Canada highway. The crash happened due to heavy snow that reduced visibility. ]]> 2018-09-12 19:12:53 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280540967 Sentence 2 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541094 The evidence was recorded on a hidden tape recorder.

]]> 2018-09-12 19:13:08 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541094 Sentence 3 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541179 Police report four people were injured in a pile-up this morning on the Trans-Canada Highway during a snow squall.]]> 2018-09-12 19:13:20 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541179 Sentence 2 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541315 The evidence was recorded on a hidden recorder.]]> 2018-09-12 19:13:39 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541315 Four people were injured in a five car pileup this morning on the trans canada highway. A snow squall made the roads icey and reduced visibility for drivers. https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541339 2018-09-12 19:13:41 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541339 Sentence https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541344 This morning in a five car pile-up on the Trans Canada Highway, city police report four people were injured because of reduced visibility and ice.]]> 2018-09-12 19:13:42 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541344 Sentence https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541345 The grape and wine festival took over st.Catharines today, it is a day to celebrate one of the LARGEST harvest in recent years. ]]> 2018-09-12 19:13:42 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541345 Sentence #2 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541361 the concealed tape recorder recorded the evidence.]]> 2018-09-12 19:13:44 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541361 Sentence 2 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541364 The evidence had been recorded on a hidden recorder. ]]> 2018-09-12 19:13:44 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541364 Sentence 2 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541540 Evidence has been found on a tape recorder.]]> 2018-09-12 19:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541540 Sentence https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541644 Police reported four people were injured, two seriously hurt, in a five car pile-up on the 4-0-1. The accident was because of winter weather and road conditions. ]]> 2018-09-12 19:14:20 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541644 Sentence https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541674 City police reported four people are injured, two seriously, in a five car pile-up,  that took place on the 4-0-1 this morning. Some sections of the roadway were iced over, because of the snow storm, which reduced visibility. ]]> 2018-09-12 19:14:24 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541674 Evidence had been found on a hidden twin tape recorder. https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541696 2018-09-12 19:14:27 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541696 Sentence #3 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541715 On the Trans-Canada Highway, police report 4 people injured due to icy conditions. ]]> 2018-09-12 19:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541715 Sentence 2 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541719 The evidence had been taped. ]]> 2018-09-12 19:14:31 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541719 Sentence 3 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541895 City police report four people were injured in a car pile-up this morning on the Trans-Canada highway during a snow storm that reduced visibility.  ]]> 2018-09-12 19:14:56 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541895 Sentence https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541924 The evidence was recorded on a hidden tape recorder. ]]> 2018-09-12 19:15:01 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541924 Sentence 3 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541985 Four have been injured in a five car pile-up on the Trans-Canada Highway during a snow squall this morning, City Police report.]]> 2018-09-12 19:15:11 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280541985 Sentence 3 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280542143 Four people were injured, two seriously, in a five car pile-up this morning on the Trans-Canada Highway. The accident took place during a snow storm that reduced visibility and caused some sections of the road to be icy. ]]> 2018-09-12 19:15:32 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280542143 Sentence 1 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280542318 The Grape and Wine Festival took over St. Catherine's today, in one of the largest of recent harvests.]]> 2018-09-12 19:15:59 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280542318 Sentence 1 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280542505 In a day of celebration, The Grape and Wine Festival took over a section of St. Catharines today with an impressive harvest

]]> 2018-09-12 19:16:24 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280542505 Two https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280542522 2018-09-12 19:16:26 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280542522 Sentence 2 https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280542915 The evidence had been recorded on a tape recorder.]]> 2018-09-12 19:17:18 UTC https://padlet.com/teresagoff1/ylyt2i5emepv/wish/280542915