https://padlet.com/diamonddam52/ylr9vdy3h512 Daniel Erskine en-us 2017-11-09 15:15:03 UTC 2017-11-09 16:20:46 UTC hello@padlet.com diamonddam52 https://padlet.com/diamonddam52/ylr9vdy3h512/wish/205312389 You can see the song is in a park and the song show a story.  

I would change it to a parody to make it more funny by adding clowns in the video. The clowns will be dancing in the background of the video to make people laughing when they watch the video.      

]]> 2017-11-09 15:16:16 UTC https://padlet.com/diamonddam52/ylr9vdy3h512/wish/205312389 diamonddam52 https://padlet.com/diamonddam52/ylr9vdy3h512/wish/205340247 You can see that they are that they are tack the mick of Michael Jackson song was called beat it but they called eat it.  

I would change this to advertise Christmas food that is out in the supermarket. This song could work because it has “Eat it” in the song so people would come and buy it in the store. 

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