https://padlet.com/24cwidder/ylgi0rkn6qap Thank you for visiting and leaving feedback on my writing pieces! Keep my comments (clean and green) - Jeff the Alien en-us 2018-12-05 17:13:26 UTC 2018-12-07 17:10:08 UTC hello@padlet.com 24gsweeney https://padlet.com/24cwidder/ylgi0rkn6qap/wish/312317886 I enjoyed your vignette very much. The first thing I liked about was that it was very easy to understand. Secondly, It was very easy to relate to when  you were talking about not being able to jump. One thing I think you could improve upon is in the beginning your dialogue was hard to follow.
-Grace S]]> 2018-12-07 17:02:17 UTC https://padlet.com/24cwidder/ylgi0rkn6qap/wish/312317886