3A Peer Feedback Rubric Analysis/Synthesis - Group by jackiefly https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev Find your group's line items and post 2-3 look-fors for each item. en-us 2022-02-21 18:05:59 UTC 2022-02-22 16:39:53 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060883473 Comprehensible to all readers

]]> 2022-02-22 16:10:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060883473 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060884867 No extreme repetition]]> 2022-02-22 16:11:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060884867 The sentences flow https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060885776 2022-02-22 16:11:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060885776 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060885799 Organized, makes sense for the claim being established]]> 2022-02-22 16:11:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060885799 Short meaningful quotes https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060886252 2022-02-22 16:11:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060886252 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060886888 vocabulary is descriptive and concise]]> 2022-02-22 16:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060886888 Evidence connects with the lines of reasoning https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060888017 2022-02-22 16:12:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060888017 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060888574 Provides evidence to support line of reasoning and claim overall]]> 2022-02-22 16:12:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060888574 The sources and evidence are connected properly to the topic, there is a bias that is backed up with facts, make sure claim ties into reasoning https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060888617 2022-02-22 16:12:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060888617 Concise claim that gets the point across; must be defensible; no overgeneralization or extreme specificity https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060888687 2022-02-22 16:12:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060888687 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060889035 Evidence is cited]]> 2022-02-22 16:13:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060889035 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060889350 sentences are complete]]> 2022-02-22 16:13:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060889350 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060889519 Claim must be defensible with the evidence provided]]> 2022-02-22 16:13:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060889519 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060891611 All the elements of a TIED paragraph are present]]> 2022-02-22 16:14:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060891611 Topic sentence should be concise as well; LoR directly connects Evidence to Claim and introduces the reader to paragraph https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060892319 2022-02-22 16:14:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060892319 Evidence doesn't include extra, irrelevant information https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060892998 2022-02-22 16:14:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060892998 Considers opposing arguments, demonstrates deeper meaning rather than just description of text https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060893183 2022-02-22 16:14:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060893183 Providing evidence with direct quotes from Sources that support your argument rather than analyzing or describing what was simply being said. https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060893848 2022-02-22 16:15:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060893848 Proper citations https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060893927 2022-02-22 16:15:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060893927 Evidence fits well within the rest of the paragraph https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060896725 2022-02-22 16:16:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060896725 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060898001 Grammatical and spelling]]> 2022-02-22 16:17:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060898001 Using evidence that is given and clarified by the Sources or from your own experience or knowledge. https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060899962 2022-02-22 16:18:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060899962 efforts to persuade, when the writing offers a new perspective viable https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060901052 2022-02-22 16:18:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060901052 LOR is viable and relevant to the claim, serving as support for the argument https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060904225 2022-02-22 16:20:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060904225 analyzes rather than describes https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060904387 2022-02-22 16:20:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060904387 https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060906723 colorful words]]> 2022-02-22 16:21:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060906723 Putting the source in parentheses: (Source A) https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060907370 2022-02-22 16:21:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060907370 Evidence directly relates back to the line of reasoning that you are trying to support and not contradicting it or relating to another idea/topic. https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060911437 2022-02-22 16:23:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060911437 LOR must be the first sentence and the topic sentence of the paragraph https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060913302 2022-02-22 16:24:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jflynn31/yl3nfe2959krcoev/wish/2060913302