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      <pubDate>2013-06-11 21:51:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Marriage is outdated(JiEun and JiHyun)</title>
         <author>emma_heath</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p> Marriage system has long history. However, as women's social participation is growing, marriage system&nbsp; is regarded as outdated custom than before.&nbsp; It means some people think marriage is not nessessary in ther lives anymore. While other people think it should be existed as an important part. Do you think marriage is outdated?</p><p>We will discuss this topic in confronted situation: under korean circumstance-in korea there is no legal &nbsp;'in between' status, such as a civil partnership contract.</p><p>&nbsp; The greatest benefit of&nbsp; being single is that people can enjoy freedom more than married people. For example,&nbsp; they can spend time and money for themselves only. In other words,  they could travel anywhere if they can afford to or&nbsp;<span style="background-color: initial; "> study whatever they want because nobody interupt their lives. What is more being single is economical. Meaning is that single person doesnt't need to support&nbsp; their family including raising children. An</span><span style="background-color: initial; ">d there is one more strong point to singles which there are no any conflict between them and their wife or husband's family.</span></p><p>Also, downsides of remaining unmarried are here.<br>As mentioned above, marriage is a long historic system, it reflects human<br>beings natural feeling, basic instinct: get together. Being alone brings some<br>social problems, for example, commit suicide, self-closed people…</p><p>Reproducing is one of main powers to maintain<br>societies and states. If people do not marry and have and child, this causes<br>serious problem. Korea’s low birth rate is becoming a concerning issue.</p><p>Being single can rise economic problems,<br>like housing shortage, and the lack of labour population which is related to<br>low birth rate. </p><p>In conclusion, Being single person could be free and economical than being married but there could be loneliness for being single which can lead to social problems.</p><p>In my case, even if there are many good points to singles i want to choose marriage because i want spend my whole life with my husband and own family which i will compose.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2013-06-11 21:54:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>article</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2013-06-12 01:31:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>It means = meaning</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2013-06-12 01:37:16 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>unmarried?!!</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2013-06-12 01:41:02 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Think about how you've started the essay maybe you should in</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2013-06-12 01:44:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>think about how you've started essay maybe you should introduce topic first</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2013-06-12 01:44:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>first sentence of main body is an incomplete comparative</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2013-06-12 01:50:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>can afford to</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2013-06-12 01:50:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>be careful with use of full stops and commas</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2013-06-12 01:51:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Final feedback</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/emma_heath/marriageisoutdated/wish/10751550</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>We have a quite a few errors throughout this essay that make it difficult for the reader to follow. The ideas are not linked together very well and the two arguments do not mirror as in most important positive first then most important negative last. Your final conclusion doe snot draw on the arguments given it introduces a new concept not already spoken about. </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2013-06-17 04:45:52 UTC</pubDate>
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