https://padlet.com/24shagopian/yjxuio81xtd1 Thank you for reading my stories and leaving feedback! Remember to not be rude when commenting, thanks *yeet* en-us 2018-12-05 15:52:41 UTC 2025-10-09 02:43:23 UTC hello@padlet.com 24hhausle https://padlet.com/24shagopian/yjxuio81xtd1/wish/312277905 My 2 stars are I love how you really slowed down the story so well. You made seconds feel like hours. So good! One of my wishes is that you keep this great repetition going. I loved all of the repeating words so much. And my last star is that I love your description. When you said " The blood red curtain " and "Silence.  It swallows the room" . All of this personification is amazing!
  
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