https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin en-us 2023-02-21 21:34:28 UTC 2025-11-19 17:38:32 UTC hello@padlet.com yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2490335492 2023-02-21 22:19:21 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2490335492 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2490336741 It is true that young people see climate actions from a different perspective than older generations do. When my parents talk about climate changes and their consequences, what comes first to their mind is the warm winter. Lacking related education and knowledge about this topic at a young age, they never consider climate actions an important theme that largely affects our everyday lives.]]> 2023-02-21 22:21:02 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2490336741 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2490351228 The plural verb “affect” does not conform to the singular subject “an important theme". In this way, it should be changed into "affects". 
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/11/subject-verb-agreement/]]> 2023-02-21 22:46:26 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2490351228 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497525194 2023-02-28 07:15:13 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497525194 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497541583 My peers and I are quite different from the older ones. My roommate Kate, an econ student, usually shows me how climate changes will affect agriculture and afterward average income; my friend Zoey even talks about the assessment and analysis of climate using data science, which is really a different view compared to the other generation.]]> 2023-02-28 07:33:20 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497541583 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497547802 The word after "and" should be a noun as "assessment" is a noun. "Analyze" is a verb, so I should use "analysis", the noun version.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/27/verb-form-5/
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/11/parallel-structure/]]> 2023-02-28 07:39:39 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497547802 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497559601 2023-02-28 07:51:13 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497559601 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497563215 Military leaders warn that more conflicts and migration brought by global warming will increase the world's security threats. Maj Gen Munir Munizuzzaman claimed that climate change is the most severe threat now because there will be too many refuges to migrate by then. ]]> 2023-02-28 07:54:48 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497563215 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497564810 In this sentence, "is" does not conform with the noun "changes". As we usually use "climate change" rather than "climate changes", I should change "changes" into "change".
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/27/verb-form-5/]]> 2023-02-28 07:56:13 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497564810 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497565403 2023-02-28 07:56:44 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497565403 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497570941 2023-02-28 08:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497570941 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497571374 The temperature in the region, Brown said, increased 2.7 degree Celsius in 27 years, encouraging earlier breeding and making them burn more weight. Although there is no direct proof of this theory, Brown still believed that all the evidences fit in.]]> 2023-02-28 08:02:05 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497571374 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497571898 Jerram Brown documented the change in jay's reproductive clock caused by climate change, making the female jays lay eggs earlier.]]> 2023-02-28 08:02:44 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497571898 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497573809 When connecting "change" and the noun after it, we should use "in" rather than "of". This is a set phrase.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/19/preposition-choice/]]> 2023-02-28 08:04:46 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497573809 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497581321 If I use "there is not", I should add "any" after that. "No" has the same meaning as "not any". In this way, I should change "not" to "no", which is the correct and concise choice. 
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/24/words-word-form-word-choice-and-word-order/]]> 2023-02-28 08:11:34 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497581321 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497585240 2023-02-28 08:15:19 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497585240 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497591271 2023-02-28 08:21:05 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497591271 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497591626 The most obvious cultural difference between Santa Barbara and my home country, China, is reflected in class. In China, individuality is discouraged and even forbidden. ]]> 2023-02-28 08:21:26 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497591626 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497592896 Saying "my home country" only is a little bit vague. In order to make my sentence easier for readers to understand, I should add the name of my home country, which is "China".
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/meaning-vague-unclear-contradictory-and-erroneous-statements/]]> 2023-02-28 08:22:47 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497592896 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497593074 Students are ordered to study the same subjects, play the same sports, and dress in the same way in traditional Chinese schools. There are also rules limiting students' sitting gestures in class and even the way to speak to teachers.]]> 2023-02-28 08:22:58 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497593074 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497594916 "Gesture" is a countable noun, so we should pay attention to its form. Here, as there is no article before it, we should use the plural form, which is "gectures". 
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/word-form/]]> 2023-02-28 08:24:41 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497594916 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497596784 2023-02-28 08:26:29 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497596784 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497600960 Unique imaginations and ideas are graded below average. However, UCSB encourages uniqueness, allowing students to choose different courses in various fields. Unusual ideas are considered interesting by teachers, which encourages students to share whatever they think.]]> 2023-02-28 08:30:28 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497600960 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497603716 It is wordy. There is no need to include "wrong ideas" after "unusual ideas" according to the meaning of this sentence. 
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/33/]]> 2023-02-28 08:33:12 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497603716 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497624474 2023-02-28 08:52:55 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497624474 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497627785 Moreover, all kinds of dressing are welcomed, and the school supports students' extracurricular interests. Of course, there are also drawbacks brought by this freedom. I can usually smell the weeds, smoke, and wine in my dorm, and I can hear student couples making noise in the room next to me. ]]> 2023-02-28 08:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497627785 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497635305 I should delete "individual" here because it is indicated in the sentence. "Interests", the plural form, means that everyone has different extracurricular interests.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/words-word-form-word-choice-and-word-order-9/ ]]> 2023-02-28 09:01:45 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497635305 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497635918 2023-02-28 09:02:22 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497635918 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497638247 As a result, I think the cultural difference wants to tell me that there is no right lifestyle or idea, but only those following one culture and those following others.]]> 2023-02-28 09:04:29 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497638247 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497641763 As it is a sentence with a negative meaning, we should decide the wording carefully with the meaning. The "lifestyle" and "idea" are parallel, so I should use "or" instead of "and".
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/articles-determiners-and-quantifiers/]]> 2023-02-28 09:08:13 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497641763 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497645778 2023-02-28 09:11:55 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497645778 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497647951 Why should people care about man-made climate change? Mary Robinson claims that it threatens human rights and the world's future, which is not fair to many people. The whole country of the Republic of Kiribati is submerged by rising sea levels,]]> 2023-02-28 09:14:14 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497647951 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497655073 and those in Eastern Uganda suffer from long droughts and severe floods caused by climate change, but they should not be responsible for this. These people need help, and the whole world will be affected by man-made climate change, says Robinson.]]> 2023-02-28 09:20:13 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497655073 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497670714 2023-02-28 09:33:06 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497670714 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497685707 The expression is too wordy. The expressions including those about "people" and "situation" are not that necessary. https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/33/

]]> 2023-02-28 09:46:34 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497685707 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497698080 We consider wording problems here. "Due to" and "caused by" have similar meanings, but "caused by" is better.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/24/words-word-form-word-choice-and-word-order/]]> 2023-02-28 09:57:24 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497698080 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497707082 How can Europeans help Syrian refugees? Melissa Fleming maintains that they should care more about saving others’ lives than the different life brought by accepting refugees. The actions to take include solving the problems that drove them away from their homes, such as safety, culture, and economy. Europeans should try to help them thrive in their hometown and persecution while offering refugees investment in the shelter and humanitarian care, says Fleming.]]> 2023-02-28 10:05:18 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497707082 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497708659 2023-02-28 10:06:46 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497708659 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497713028 This is a transition problem. The previous sentence considers what people should think of the refugees, and the following one is about the actions they can take. In this way, the transitional sentence should be "actions to take include..." rather than "to solve this problem".
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2015/12/14/wrong-or-missing-transition/]]> 2023-02-28 10:10:30 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497713028 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497715207 What kind of freedom and relief can students obtain in the US? Weihang Zhang maintains that they come from both the natural environment and social ideology. Freedom in the US enlightens students’ minds and releases their stress.]]> 2023-02-28 10:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497715207 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497716413 2023-02-28 10:13:32 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497716413 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497718687 According to my question, the example I gave should be as general as the whole United States. In this way, I should not include those that are specific to UCSB.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2015/12/14/a-transitional-idea-is-missing/]]> 2023-02-28 10:15:42 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497718687 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497721282 People usually become sad and emotional knowing that parting from home is irrevocable, and this is the main reason for them to feel hiraeth. Especially when people encounter impressive scenes from their previous hometowns, this kind of feeling will become stronger, says Xue.]]> 2023-02-28 10:18:11 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497721282 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497722162 2023-02-28 10:18:55 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497722162 yirou_su https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497724273 It is grammatically correct to say "when encountering..", but it makes the sentence vague. Readers will have no idea about the subject of the sentence.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/meaning-vague-unclear-contradictory-and-erroneous-statements/]]> 2023-02-28 10:20:50 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2497724273 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503212837 2023-03-04 00:44:21 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503212837 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503221251 2023-03-04 01:10:37 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503221251 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503221593 2023-03-04 01:11:38 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503221593 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503221706 2023-03-04 01:11:56 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503221706 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503221902 2023-03-04 01:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503221902 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503222075 2023-03-04 01:12:55 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503222075 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503222283 2023-03-04 01:13:26 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503222283 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503222448 2023-03-04 01:13:55 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503222448 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503222631 2023-03-04 01:14:29 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503222631 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503222779 2023-03-04 01:14:54 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503222779 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503222930 2023-03-04 01:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503222930 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503223181 2023-03-04 01:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503223181 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503223389 2023-03-04 01:16:33 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503223389 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503224582 2023-03-04 01:20:16 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503224582 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503225063 2023-03-04 01:21:43 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503225063 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503225735 https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2021/05/24/use-a-wh-clause-for-a-short-quotation/

and
http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/26/mechanics-8]]> 2023-03-04 01:23:29 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503225735 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503226209 Can Fleming's principles be extended to other regions?]]> 2023-03-04 01:24:53 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503226209 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503226994 http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/verb-tenses-and-time-meanings-20/

or
http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/verb-tenses-and-time-meanings/

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]]> 2023-03-04 01:27:30 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503227351 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503228551 http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/using-sources-quoting-paraphrasing-and-citing-10/

]]> 2023-03-04 01:31:04 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503228551 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503228908 http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2014/03/11/using-sources-primary-and-secondary-sources/

]]> 2023-03-04 01:32:00 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503228908 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503229461 Make sure this comes later in your outline, after your story.

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https://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/weed]]> 2023-03-04 01:41:32 UTC https://padlet.com/yirou_su/yj0idwrjoctisvin/wish/2503232033