Thunderstorm Paragraph editing activity by Kallen Findlay https://padlet.com/kallykat03/yiosdaxkdf4mplcq en-us 2024-06-09 07:27:34 UTC 2024-06-09 15:22:11 UTC hello@padlet.com Thunderstorm paragraph editing kallykat03 https://padlet.com/kallykat03/yiosdaxkdf4mplcq/wish/3022119795 Instructions: read through the following paragraph:

Once read through each learner must fix the paragraph using VCOP elements and type them up on Padlet


Thunderstorm paragraph:

the storm approached. Dark clouds gathered in the sky the rain came pouring down on the windows roofs Flashes of lightning struck in the sky with thunder causing loud noises and shaking the ground, people running to safety in their homes in fear of the storm. where can we hide where it is safe from the storm. Some houses were not as safe, unable to stand the rain pour many started to flood a frightening experience for all. how could these people have survived the terrible storm

]]> 2024-06-09 07:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/kallykat03/yiosdaxkdf4mplcq/wish/3022119795 Example of how to edit paragraph kallykat03 https://padlet.com/kallykat03/yiosdaxkdf4mplcq/wish/3022286366 As the fierce storm approached, gloomy dark clouds gathered in the sky. Suddenly, the rain came pouring down drastically on the windows and roofs. Flashes of lightening struck across the sky accompanied by raging thunder causing loud noises and the ground to shake. Frightened, people running in a hurry to get to safety in their loving homes in absolute fear of the brewing storm. Where can we hide? Where it is safe from the rapid storm? As some houses were not as safe, as there were many homes that were unable to withstand the harsh rain pour. Many started to flood vigorously. It was truly a frightening experience for all. How could all these desperate people have survived this terrible storm?

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