FYL1253 by Nurul Naim

Task

wnfwmn87 — 2017-04-24 03:02:19 UTC

Write the introductory paragraph (including the thesis statement) and the conclusion for the following topics:

1) Professional athletes are paid too much.
a. Introduction
b. Conclusion

2) Clonning should be banned.
a. Introduction
b. Conclusion

3) Human are too dependant on technology
a. Introduction
b. Conclusion

4) Employees should not be allowed to use Facebook at work.
a. Introduction
b. Conclusion

5) Malaysia should enforce the one-car per family policy.
a. Introduction
B. Conclusion

Reuben Wong

2017-04-25 03:09:04 UTC

1)
Intro: A recent topic that has been discussed by the public very intensely is regarding to the income of the world class professional athletes. The athletes that represented their country receive has been privileged with many incentive for their family and himself.(general statement)So, professional athletes should now have high income.
Conclude: In conclusion, sport minister should consider their decision on paying the athletes. In fact this might be one the reason that will affect the particular country economic growth for paying high income to athletes.

2)
Intro:cyber Clonning has been a severe problem since year 2000 due to the improvement of technology in the world. One of the most common cloned item is digital video disc (DVD).(fact) The government should enforce stricter rules to the import duty department so that the culprit can be apprehend and be banned from his business. Clonning must be banned from the country.

Conclude: In conclusion, clonning is a criminal activity, therefor, the government should stop it before the problem became worse and affect the worldwide marketing. Otherwise the harmful effect will affect us one day and we can no longer get the genuine item that we requested for.

3)
Intro) "let's go and invent tomorrow instead of worrying about what happened yesterday " said by the world renowned Steve Job. (Quotation) Technology has exceeded humanity as human depend on it every single moment. Without technology, human might face many trouble in their daily life like lost in a busy traffic without using GPS. They might also spend a lot of time doing some house chores without the help of machines and also very hard for them to contact their oversea relative thought letters
Conclude: In conclusion, I agree that human are very dependant on technology. If we use the technology wisely, human can be very productive and have a better life. But if we misuse it, it can give the biggest influence and bad impact to our life. So as a parents, they should monitor their children gadget activity and take any action if needed .

4)
Intro: Office employee now days are provided a personal computer form them at work so that they can be more productive. A computer must go along with an Internet connection as well. So employee tend to spend a lot of time on Facebook etc.(fact) So, employee should not surf Facebook during their working hour because it is a wasteful of time , distracting and will not help in working productivity.

Conclude: In conclusion, employee should not use Facebook while working. Using Facebook during the working hours as it will distract the worker from their job and wasted a lot of time instead of working. This will affect the company economics and finally will tumble if bankrupt.

5)
Intro: The population of Malaysia is increasing day by day. The malaysia traffic jam has became a common occurrence when peak hours. Everybody tend to drive their own vehicle to work , so traffic jam will surely occur at office hour. But, relying on malaysia public transport isn't convenient at all as the public transport is not punctual about their departure and arrival time.(fact )Malaysia should not enforce one car per family rules.

Conclude: In conclusion, enforcing the one car per family will definitely help the country to overcome the traffic jam issue. But this will limit the spending of the affordable citizen to buy extra car for their family. In fact when our car broke down we still have another vehicle to drive as an alternative. Unless the public transport in malaysia is advance enough, this rules is not suitable for malaysia citizen.

Nur Alia Amani

2017-04-25 04:30:32 UTC

1. Introduction: In todays society, the highest paying job is performing as a professional athlete, this is not taking in consideration of sports such as fencing, minor league baseball, D-league basketball, etc. When I use the term professional athlete I'm refering to the big three American sports baseball, basketball, and American football. The average salaries of these three sports is absolutely apalling and absurd. These men simply play a game that they love and make so much money they literally don't know what to do with it. (Mention the type of Intro you are using) + (Specific thesis statement)

Conclusion: In conclusion, I believe (remove this) professional athletes are paid way too much money. Comparing their requirements, lifestyle, and work put into to that of other jobs it's hard to say that they are worthy of such pay. (Any advice/suggestion)

2. Introduction: What is cloning?. Cloning has been a debatable topic over the years with numerous arguments for and against it particularly in humans. However, there appears to be a very strong case that supports banning of cloning in many fonts. Unanimous responses to cloning are based on very legitimate concerns for instance with respect to relationships between human beings as well as between humans and nature. (Type of intro?) + (Thesis statement)

Conclusion: In conclusion, a critical approach and analysis of cloning show how fascinating genetic is through science and technology, however, the issue of cloning should be banned particularly in humans to ensure humans individuality is sustained while at the same time appreciating nature holistically. (Any advice?)

3. Introduction: What would happen if your computer crashed? What about if you lost your cellphone? If just thinking about these scenarios gives you anxiety, you’re not alone. Most of us rely so much on technology these days that losing it, even for a day, would be extremely inconvenient, and for some, life-altering. (Type of intro?) + (Thesis statement)

Conclusion: In conclusion, I think (remove this) the choice remains in each person’s hands. The balance we need to find is in appreciating and using technology the right way, but still knowing when to turn it off to experience life to its fullest.

4. Introduction: Social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram and Youtube are seen as double-edged swords by businesses. They can be used as a powerful tool to promote yourself, your business and to deliver great customer services, or they can be a big distraction to people at the office and greatly reduce their level of productivity and cost the company money. (Type of intro?) + (Thesis statement)

Conclusion: In conclusion, many companies are choosing to block social media access at work because they fear employee misuse as well as the resulting drop in productivity.

5. Introduction: One of the biggest expenses for any family is transportation. It seems that most families own as many cars as there are drivers, or more. There are three main reasons why Malaysia should enforce one car family policy such as it would help reduce pollution, there will be unauthorised parking due to lack of space and it will save the money.

Conclusion: In conclusion, one car per family idea is good due to the traffic situation at Malaysia. We can find other alternatives to move anywhere we want such as public transport or carpool concept to reduce the number of car on the road

Nur Hakimah

2017-04-25 05:05:30 UTC

1. Professional athletes are paid too much.
a) Introduction: Wouldn't it be great to make nearly $111 million a year simply to play a game? Tiger Woods, along with many other professional athletes, certainly think so. But do these athletes really deserve all that money? (Write a sentence to connect the intro with thesis statement) (Mention the type of Intro used) + (Specific Thesis statement)

b) Conclusion: In conclusion, they must be paid with high income. (Restate thesis statement) They also train a lot and work hard. (Provide suggestion/opinion regarding this issue)

2. Cloning should be banned.
a) Introduction: At the present time the science has achieved such high level of the development that is became possible to clone not only the cells but the whole organisms.(Try add more sentences for Intro) (Mention the type of intro) There are three main reasons why cloning should be banned such as they are unacceptable medical risks, needles of the reproductive cloning, and the danger of degradation of the humanity.

b) Conclusion: In conclusion, (restate the thesis statement first) banning the human cloning can help us to keep that little part of moral and ethical values in our present material world (should be the second sentence after the restate of thesis statement)

3. Human are too dependent on technology.
a) Introduction: Technology bought us machines, computers, cars and airplanes. It made the world smaller by providing good communication tools, made it possible to explore the solar system and the universe and proved that technology is truly significant in human advancement. (mention the type of intro) + (thesis statement)

b) Conclusion: In conclusion, restate of thesis statement? (Maybe you can write one sentence to relate the restatement of thesis statement and your ending.) there is no denying technology is great, but are humans becoming too dependent on technology?

4. Employees should not be allowed to use facebook at work.
a) Introduction: If you are an employee, you are smart not access social media such as facebook on a company computer. Most employers are able to access on track anything you do on a company computer. (Explain further+mention the type) + (Specific thesis statement)

b) Conclusion: In conclusion...(restate of thesis statement) social media such as facebook especially at work is a topic that has to be dealt with. One thing to keep in mind is that employees already have access via personal devices. A personal media policy should include all usage including usage during work hours on personal devices.

5. Malaysia should enforce the one-car per family policy.
a) Introduction: Reducing the number of cars that are potentially polluting the atmosphere is one of many things that needs to be done. Besides, if families need multiple modes of transport, they should be encouraged to use public transport or electric/hybrid cars instead of buying more petrol cars and driving more often than necessary.

b) Conclusion: In conclusion (restate thesis statement), we can limit each family to only one car to tackle pollution ( We take the first step to restoring the ozone layer and reversing global warming setting an example for other companies or organisations to do the same to stop their pollution so that our next generations can enjoy the planet that we saved.

Assabar Abdul Halim

assabar28 — 2017-04-25 08:46:13 UTC

a)Professional athlete are paid too much
Introduction
Is it worth for an athlete to get paid with a million dolars per month ? Most of the athlete nowadays got paid too high due to their perfomance in sport. I think they deserve to be paid with such a huge amount of salary. There are a few reason why profesional athlete should be paid with a huge amount of salary.
(question type)
Specific thesis statement?
Conclusion
In coclusion , the professional athlete deserve to be paid with a huge amount of money. In addition , this may lead to a success sport development in the country.

b)Clonning should be banned
Introduction
Clonning is a kind of plagiarism activities from other individual that admit the creation is theirs. Most of the clonning nowadays are in outfit and attire. Statistic also state that 70% of the products in the market nowadays are clonned.There a few reason why we should ban clonned product such as losses in income , no quality of a product and can harm the growth of economy.

conclusion
In conclusion, clonning can cause a lot of bad efect. This is the reason why we should ban clonning item. In my suggestion, the goverment shuld take action in this cases seriously.

c)Human are dependant on technology
Introduction

Mohamad imran hakimi

2017-04-25 08:49:45 UTC

A) Professional athlete are paid too much
Introduction :

Conclusion :

Mohamed Imran

2017-05-03 05:56:44 UTC

A)Professional athletes are paid too much
Introduction:Why do athletes get paid like they do?According to chris butterfield ,it's somewhat part of the fans fans fault why there get paid like they do, fans spend more money on team merchandise like tickets,sweatshirt,t-shirts and other's things.
Conclusions: The Conclusions is ,its about the fans and how much merchandise they buy of that team or athlete.I think it is ridiculous how much they are getting paid,even if they are good in sport.