Skyllar by Elise Song https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud PRAISE and POLISH en-us 2018-02-12 19:21:34 UTC 2025-09-30 18:10:26 UTC hello@padlet.com Andrea https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800270 Praise: Great job at explaining a serious topic in a way appropriate for children to understand.
Polish: I wish you would have read the entire book. :-/]]> 2018-02-12 19:51:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800270 Jeannie https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800279 You did a great job in making a difficult topic like depression in a children’s book. I wish you read the entire book]]> 2018-02-12 19:51:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800279 Joanna https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800406 I liked how it ended with a happy ending for the little girl. ]]> 2018-02-12 19:51:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800406 Khreasna https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800436 Praise:it was good! I was vibing it
Polish: I didn’t really get the feel of the whole story.]]> 2018-02-12 19:51:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800436 Corbin https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800518 Pr:the story is really in depth
Po: more time on pics
]]> 2018-02-12 19:52:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800518 Jacqueline https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800610 I like how the story is about deep emotions and it’s something that people go through. I would have made the letters of the book bigger and darker to be able to see them better.]]> 2018-02-12 19:52:10 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800610 Desiree https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800677 I like your topic because it is common and it fit well as a children’s book

]]> 2018-02-12 19:52:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230800677 Imani https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801146 Your story is really sweet and it can help many younger kids with depression and learn about depression 
The pictures were a little small but the overall concept of your book was good. ]]> 2018-02-12 19:53:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801146 Kennedy https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801151 Praise : I like how the book was made and the pictures 
Polish : the explaining could have been clearer ]]> 2018-02-12 19:53:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801151 Jaylen https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801337 I really like the concept and the originality of it
I think the letters could’ve been darker because it could be hard to see]]> 2018-02-12 19:53:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801337 Chiamaka https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801340 I think you did a good job having the mom explain a serious thing to their child 
I would like to see more color]]> 2018-02-12 19:53:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801340 Jalissa https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801353 She did a nice job putting her book together! ]]> 2018-02-12 19:53:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801353 Tracy tontra000 https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801391 Praise: I like how you took on a serious topic and put it in a form that could help children get a better understanding
Polish: maybe elaborate a little more on the storyline]]> 2018-02-12 19:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801391 Brisa https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801522 Praise: explained a serious topic very well 
Polish: a little too fast]]> 2018-02-12 19:54:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/yifspvvrmoud/wish/230801522