Video Critiques by https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0 Glow and Grow en-us 2018-02-10 21:38:06 UTC 2025-10-07 13:49:27 UTC hello@padlet.com Milan Montelibano delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308253 Glow: Your choice of words and vocal tone make the video seem like it could be interactive.
Grow: You could have wrote out what you planned to say so that your sentences had more fluency.]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:14 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308253 Lou Santamaria delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308288 Glow: I found it useful, as a viewer, how you described each aspect of the website.
Grow: The fluency of your speaking could be improved.]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:30 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308288 Adassa Nedd delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308309 Glow: I like that you highlighted the tools you felt were most helpful.
Grow: Next time try changing the screen and showing the viewer what you are discussing.]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:43 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308309 Angel Tello delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308340 Glow:         N/A
Grow:]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:51 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308340 Elizabeth Dennis delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308370 Glow: I liked how you went in depth with your descriptions of what each tab consisted of.
Grow: Be careful when recording because some of your words got cut off, making it abrupt.]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:02 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308370 Tab LaRocca delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308400 Glow: I really like the way you showed the Padlets you would use in your lesson and gave an example that children could relate to.
Grow: On the Tagul you moved the mouse continuously, which made trying to read the highlighted words and listen a bit overwhelming.]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308400 Nikki Phillips delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308498 Glow: I like how you color coded the symbaloo and explained what each section was.
Grow: Your tone was a bit informal, next time try to be more concise.]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:51 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308498 Olivia Nasisi delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308525 Glow: I liked how you gave an overview of the digital dialog questions.
Grow: A short description of the assistive technologies would give the viewer a better understanding.]]> 2018-02-10 21:42:01 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308525 Sarah Peterson delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308568 Glow: I liked how you gave an example on Padlet for students to follow.
Grow: Some of your voice recordings got cut off, try to make it more fluent.]]> 2018-02-10 21:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308568 Julia Cassidy delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308585 Glow: I like how you showed examples of websites that you included on your symbaloo.
Grow: In the beginning, you talked a bit quickly. If you took more breaks between sentences or subjects it would help make the video easier to follow.]]> 2018-02-10 21:42:30 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308585 Alexa Morbelli delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308608 Glow: I like how you spent an equal amount of time on explaining each topic.
Grow: Some of your speaking could have been better rehearsed.]]> 2018-02-10 21:42:42 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308608 Hannah Tinney delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308627 Glow: I like how you related the aspects to the classroom.
Grow: Some of your speech was muffled or cut out, work on speaking more clearly next time]]> 2018-02-10 21:42:51 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308627 Rachel Mayer delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308688 Glow: I liked the way you described the technology grant, lesson plan, and group project.
Grow: You waited until after you finished speaking to scroll which ruined the fluency in the connection between what you said and what was on the screen.]]> 2018-02-10 21:43:17 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308688 Sabrina Decio delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308700 Glow: As a future teacher, I like how in depth your descriptions of the assistive technologies is. 
Grow: Your speaking seems a bit abrupt at points, try to practice more so your speech is more fluent.]]> 2018-02-10 21:43:25 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308700 Claudia Valverde delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308731 Glow: I like how you thoroughly explained each aspect.
Grow: It would be better if you had shown each aspect while you went through them briefly in the beginning.
]]> 2018-02-10 21:43:38 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308731 Shannon O'Brien delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308771 Glow: I really thought the pace you spoke at was perfect for a listener to follow what you were saying and what was on the screen.
Grow: Changing the pitch and tone of your voice would engage the viewer more.]]> 2018-02-10 21:43:56 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308771 Daria Marolla delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308802 Glow: I like how you followed the words with the cursor, it helps the viewer follow along.
Grow: You spoke a little too fast, which made it difficult to understand.]]> 2018-02-10 21:44:13 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308802 Carly Weshner delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308818 Glow: I liked how you followed the words with the cursor when talking about the assistive technologies.
Grow: During the tech grant slide it would have been better if you changed the slides while you mentioned what it consisted of.]]> 2018-02-10 21:44:22 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308818 Katie Mauro delaney_trotter https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308831 Glow: I like how you took perfectly timed pauses between your words, it allowed the listener to comprehend what you are saying.
Grow: On the assistive technology page you scrolled rather quickly and went back and forth from top to bottom which made it difficult for the viewer to follow.]]> 2018-02-10 21:44:29 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/230308831 Maria Benevenia https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/249575869 Glow: I liked how you included websites/examples of your assessment tools on the lesson plan page. 
Grow: It would be better if you had paused briefly on each assistive technology so I could have seen what they were.]]> 2018-04-08 19:59:41 UTC https://padlet.com/delaney_trotter/yialmugk1pw0/wish/249575869