Turn School into a Castle - Week 3 by Melanie Capes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep Talk 4 Writing en-us 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC 2024-10-14 06:12:06 UTC hello@padlet.com https://media2.giphy.com/media/83fzFhaPgXOSACHJc8/giphy.gif Monday 8th June 2020 - Lesson 1 mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015317 Today we are innovating our text. Follow the posts in this lesson to discuss your ideas with your friends. Today's posts are all pink . ]]> 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015317 Wednesday 10th June - Lesson 3. mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015319 Today you are going to create your Amber write using all of your fabulous innovated ideas. Lesson 3 posts will all be purple. ]]> 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015319 Tuesday 9th June - Lesson 2. mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015323 Today we will be making text maps (story maps). So grab some paper or post it notes and watch the video to help you with some ideas.

When you have finished your own map innovated from our model text upload a video/photo to the padlet and link to this post to share your ideas with your friends. ]]> 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015323 Turn School into a Castle. mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015324 Welcome to our padlet for week 2. If you would like to share any of your amazing work you have created during this unit please feel free to upload it to our Year 3 DRET padlet where children from year 3 in other DRET schools will be uploading their fab work too! ]]> 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015324 Thursday 11th June - Lesson 4. mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015325 Today you are going to reflect on our writing. If you would like to you can post a picture of your writing for others in year 3 to write their reflections also to give you some feedback. Remember we are using the checklist to help us and thinking of things we can improve as well as something we have done really well. Have a look at my example to help you.  Lesson 4 posts will all be blue. ]]> 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015325 Friday 5th June - Lesson 5. mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015326 Hot Task - Today you are going to write a letter to persuade someone else to do something different.  Lesson 5 posts will all be green. ]]> 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015326 Why would your idea be great for our school? mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015327 Think of 3 reasons why your idea would be amazing for our school and add them to the comments.]]> 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015327 Put your ideas into one sentence using a colon... mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015328 I think a music room in our school would be incredible because: It would create super learning opportunities for all children, it would give children who do not own instruments time to practise and we could create beautiful music for all school events. 

Add your sentence to the comments...]]> 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015328 Things to remember when writing your persuasive letter. mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015329 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015329 Things to remember when writing your persuasive letter. mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015330 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015330 Things to remember when writing your persuasive letter. mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015332 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015332 Things to remember when writing your persuasive letter. mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015334 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015334 Things to remember when writing your persuasive letter. mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015336 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015336 What would you like to see in your school? mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015338 We are going to use this letter to convince our Head Teacher to let us have a room of our choice in our school. But what will you choose to use that room for? Add your ideas to the comments...]]> 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015338 Things to remember when writing your persuasive letter. mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015340 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015340 Add your work to this post... mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015343 When you have finished your letter connect a picture/screen shot of it to this post to share with your friends...]]> 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015343 My reflection mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015346 Here is an example of my reflection of my writing....]]> 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015346 Hot task ideas.... mcapes https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015347 You can choose one of these ideas to create your letter or think of an idea of your own....]]> 2020-06-14 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/626015347 ina14geho https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/628812307 2020-06-16 11:52:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/628812307 ina15jadr https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/629103999 My story map]]> 2020-06-16 15:05:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/629103999 ina15jova https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/630328789 2020-06-17 10:22:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/630328789 my amber write ina14embu https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/630342371 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jUJtLPNenLlcEg9sg6us5Jlrhs6SIFRITvv8iCYtCN4/edit]]> 2020-06-17 10:35:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/630342371 Text map ina15emha https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/630910239 2020-06-17 17:05:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/630910239 My letter ina15jova https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/630986291 2020-06-17 17:58:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/630986291 George Amber write ina14geho https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/631818354 2020-06-18 08:45:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/631818354 My letter ina15jova https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/631845006 2020-06-18 09:05:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/631845006 the three things I think I did good ina14embu https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/631952061 1. good description 
2. talking to the reader 
3. a lot of writing ]]> 2020-06-18 10:41:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/631952061 3 things I've done well ina14geho https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/631954157 1. My pattern of three
2. Good conjunctions
3. Its clear to who it is too and from]]> 2020-06-18 10:44:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/631954157 one thing I could improve In my hot write ina14embu https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/631955963 more description and more conjunctions ]]> 2020-06-18 10:45:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/631955963 one thing i need to add to my hot write ina14geho https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/631958534 more writing.]]> 2020-06-18 10:48:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/631958534 ina15jadr https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/632318552 My letter. ]]> 2020-06-18 15:16:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/632318552 Task 14 ina15jadr https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633328626 What I did well:
• it was clear who the sender and recipient are. 
• lots of conjunctions used. 
• a good memorable phrase
What I could do better:
• use more detail to describe things. ]]> 2020-06-19 09:30:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633328626 George Letter ina14geho https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633331954 2020-06-19 09:33:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633331954 My perswaysive letter ina14embu https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633337149 Dear teachers

I am writing to tell you that I would like a Video game room I think this because after children have finished there work they can go in the video game room and play on the Xbox or on the iPads the reason why this would be good for the school is because the children are ill won’t to go on the Xbox or iPads and do there work quicker and not mess around.The people think will like this are children who like to go on iPads and Xbox’s this is a win win for everyone because the children get to play and the teachers will be happy because there lessons are more quick and not as much messing around. So that is why I would like to per swayed you to get a video game room. 

Your sincerely Emily  
]]> 2020-06-19 09:39:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633337149 Amber write page 2 ina15emha https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633473069 2020-06-19 12:22:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633473069 Reflect on my letter ina15emha https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633475161 Three things I did well:
1. Mr Ross knew why I was  writing the letter.
2. I used a rhetorical question.
3. I said who would like a trampoline room.

I could make my paragraphs more clear to see. I should I started each paragraph a little way in from the page.]]> 2020-06-19 12:24:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633475161 Amber letter page 1 ina15emha https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633484683 2020-06-19 12:34:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633484683 ina15jadr https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633486506 My letter for Fridays work. ]]> 2020-06-19 12:36:09 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633486506 My letter ina15emha https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633527368 2020-06-19 13:14:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/633527368 that looks good all of you ina18isba https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/1131725048 2021-01-27 14:23:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mcapes/yi6l53cywzmp3eep/wish/1131725048