Writing an accident report MRC by Minerva Ocolisan https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr Use while, when, after that, as soon as to connect clauses in complex sentences. en-us 2021-03-03 14:15:11 UTC 2024-05-28 04:47:32 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f603.png mocolisan https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1263832295 2021-03-03 14:15:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1263832295 Sample from a functional skills writing site mocolisan https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1263832317 2021-03-03 14:15:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1263832317 Alia Mohammed aliamohamedb5 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1271442603
       Report of the road accident
22/02/2021
Reported by : Alia Mohammed
The accident happened on 23of February 2021 ,around 6:30 pm at London street . I was on my way back from Morrison’s supermarket I went to buy some  fresh fruit and vegetables . I saw a terrible road accident between two cars one black Audi, the other one is red BMW  .

The driver of the Audi was drunk ,and he was in a very high speed so ,he could not stop at the red traffic light which resulted to the collision . The other driver was in low speed and he had a serious injured he could not move he’s neck and he’s left arm so, I told him to not move  .  
As soon as I saw the incident I called the ambulance and the Police from my mobile phone. The ambulance came immediately and took the injured driver  to City Hospital. After that the police came and took the drunk driver to the police station to ask him a few questions .

Signed : A Mohammed ]]> 2021-03-04 21:39:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1271442603 Manal https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1277005057 The accident happened on 15th of February,around 11:00 am, at the fruits and vegetables aisle.While I was helping some customer, I heard a shout and I saw Emma lying on the floor. As soon as I saw her on the floor,I run to help her.She told me that she to tripped on a box lying on the floor and was in a lot of pain.However she could not move her left arm.I told Emma to stay where she was and I called an ambulance from my phone.I started with her until the paramedics came and they took her to hospital.]]> 2021-03-06 18:02:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1277005057 Rehab Alnahari t15498 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1279222885
Today's date: 6th March 2021.
 Reported by : Rehab Alnahari. 
Date of the incident: 4th March 2021.                                              
 The accident happened on Friday 4th of March around 11:30 while I was at the fruits  and vegetables aisle supermarket buying some fresh tomatoes. 
 
While I was looking for  tomatoes I heard a shout and I saw Emma lying on the floor .as soon as I saw her , I ran to help her to get up and she told me that she tripped on a box lying on the floor . Also she was in an excruciating pain . Moreover she couldn’t move her left arm , and  she said her back hurt  as well.         
                                                                                               I told Emma to stayed where she was and I called an ambulance from my phone . I stayed with her until the paramedics came and took her to hospital. After two hours she called me and told    
me that she was alright, but she needed rest.                                    signed : R Alnahari. ]]> 2021-03-07 19:17:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1279222885 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1289571739 Lamia akil
Details of person completing this report 
Lamia Akil
Address and post code:41 Lincoln Road, Birmingham, B20 3 BE
Telephone contact number : 664 1436
Signature:
                                                                                                                     Date: 06/03/2021
Details of accident

I was shopping at the Asda supermarket around 1 o’clock, when suddenly a woman in front of me fell backwards.I ran over to check she was alright then, she was complaining of severe pain, her back hurt also could not move her left arm.I asked her briefly what had happened, in order for me to gain knowledge of what might be wrong with her before calling the paramedics, she told me she maybe slipped because of something on the ground, perhaps it was an invisible viscous liquid. I then looked behind her and I saw a box a few inches, she was lucky she did not trip on that box lying on the floor, because I could not help her, At the end I decided to call ambulance and kept talking to her to encourage her she will just fine. As soon as the ambulance arrived ,the paramedics talked to her to make sure  she was conscious ,as well as they asked to me  few questions about the accident.furthermore ,the paramedics assist her than  they decided to take her to hospital for  a proper treatment.]]> 2021-03-09 19:32:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1289571739 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1290170734 Date:  9 March 2021

Reported by: Mah Noor 

Date of incident: 5 March 2021

I went to Morrison’s supermarket for grocery shopping at 11 AM. I passed by the fruits and vegetable stalls looking for fresh tomatoes. Suddenly I heard some voices, I went to that place to see what happened. When I reached that place, I saw Emma was lying down on her back. She looked injured; she could not move her arm as well. I called an ambulance immediately and looked after her. As soon as the ambulance arrived, the paramedics gave her first aid immediately and took her. I went to the hospital after grocery shopping to see her, she looked fine when I saw her. She told me that she tripped on a box which was lying on the floor, doctors take some X-rays of her arm to confirm internal injury. After seeing her I came back home.

 

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The accident happened last week, on 29 of February 2021 around the 9:00 morning. When I was on the bus going to the Birmingham town. A person was sitting in back seat trying to steal my back while I was busy with my phone. 
He was trying to extend his hand and pull the bag from the gap between the seats, but another person was sitting on the opposite seat and watched him while he was doing the robbery.
The man came up to me and noticed me that this person was trying to steal me, then I shouted to the bus driver to stand aside and call the police. At this time I was very scared and nervous because it was the first time I’ve been in this case.
Fanelly and after his failed  to get out of the bus before the police officer came, and arrested him.]]> 2021-03-09 23:04:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1290278344 Maria Masood https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1290316708 Report of the road accident 
Date; 25/02/2021
Reported by:Maria Masood
Date of incident :22/02/2021
I was on my way back from work on Monday at around 4:15pm  and I saw a terrible accident on the road .
The accident was between a bus and a car . The car driver was driving at a very high speed and seemed as if he was drunk . Due to this error from driver this resulted in an accident .The bus driver was in bad condition because of collision.All the passengers on the bus were safe .
As soon as I saw the accident I call ambulance.The ambulance came immediately straight away and took the injured person to the hospital. The road was blocked and the traffic started to built up , due to this I got home late . 
Signed. Maria ]]> 2021-03-09 23:24:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1290316708 Sultana https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1290562966
Report of the accident 
Reported by-Sultana Akter Shipa
Date of incident  -4th March 
The accident happend it's on 28th of February, around 11am at the Asda supermarket. While I was doing my grocery shopping, I heard a short  from the fruit and vegetable aisle.
As soon as, I heard the sound and I saw Emma lying on the floor. I tried to help her but she could not move her left arm. She told me she want to buy some fresh tomatoes but when she was walking she triped a box lying on the floor. She said that her back hurt and it was more pain. I told Emma to stay their where she was. After that I called the ambulance, when paramedics came then they used some first aid. After the ambulance said we want to took her hospital because she need to x-ra. I stayed with her until the paramedics leaved. After about four hours later Emma call me and she told me everything is fine, but she needed two weeks bed rest.]]> 2021-03-10 00:58:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1290562966 Samira MEKHALDI https://padlet.com/mocolisan/yhaf81uaxq9klwsr/wish/1291939950 Accident report
Reported by; Samira Mekhaldi
Date of accident :25 February 2021

last month on 25th at 11:00 AM, I Was working an assistant in Asda supermarket, which is the biggest supermarket in my area.While I was arranging the goods, I heard a shout from the fruit and vegetables aisle. As soon as I heard the shout, I hurried to the place of the accident, and found Emma tripped on the ground. There was vegetables and fruits on the ground.She told me that she was doing her shopping, suddenly the fruits and vegetables fall on her head.
Added to this, the blood is flowing on her head. Also she couldn't move her left arm, because the fruits and vegetables fall on her left arm as well. So I tried to help her to get up, but she was shouting, as she had a buck hurt. Emma wasn't able either to get up or to move, which needed to call the ambulance.
I told Emma to rest, and don't be afraid, and she has to stay where she was until I call the Ambulance.
The ambulance arrived at the scene five minute after the accident had happened.
Luckily, Emma was ok, but had some cuts on her head, which needed to checked, by the doctors at least 1 month.

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