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(非常好/很好/还不错/有进步的空间)

因为

(有/没有)表现他的粗心大意/不认真。

]]> 2025-08-19 04:00:18 UTC https://padlet.com/tan_teck_soon_a_1/xiangxie/wish/3547105707 任务3 tan_teck_soon_a_1 https://padlet.com/tan_teck_soon_a_1/xiangxie/wish/3554519227 阅读其他组别的作品，选出你最喜欢的外貌、行动、心理描写（各一句），点like

]]> 2025-08-26 00:19:49 UTC https://padlet.com/tan_teck_soon_a_1/xiangxie/wish/3554519227 任务四：在SLS把完整的作文打出来 tan_teck_soon_a_1 https://padlet.com/tan_teck_soon_a_1/xiangxie/wish/3554521780 综合以上所学，写出一篇详略得当的作文。

选材必须排除“迟到”（核心课文题材），以及“考试时大意”（SLS资源演示题材）。你可以自选其他符合主题的题材。

题目：你有一个坏习惯。最近发生了一件事，让你意识到它的危害，因此你下定决心要改掉这个坏习惯。请你写出事情的经过。

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