《一件难忘的事》——小组活动 by jiahui Tai https://padlet.com/jellyfish041194/yuyan3 同学们需要从组里选出一个你们认为最好的语言描写，并进行优化 en-us 2018-08-31 07:49:59 UTC 2018-10-03 07:55:48 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Hotsun.png 第0组 https://padlet.com/jellyfish041194/yuyan3/wish/286026406 （优化后的2句语言描写）]]> 2018-09-26 13:56:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jellyfish041194/yuyan3/wish/286026406 评量表 jellyfish041194 https://padlet.com/jellyfish041194/yuyan3/wish/286802557  1.符合语境 -不显得奇怪、突然
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