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20901 김가을

isenglish2140 — 2024-10-22 23:42:11 UTC

내 글 쓰기(분량 15-18문장인지, 조건을 다 만족시켜 글을 썼는지 꼭 확인하기)

20402고아라

2024-10-25 05:24:19 UTC

This book is number the star by Lois Lowry,is historical fiction

It is Set in the days wheh the Nazis killed Jews

Its about Annemarie family taking care of Ellen and helping Ellen and his family meet again

I was really impressed by Annemarie

She's ten years old, and so brave

The theme of this book is growth

In Chapter 10, Annemarie didn't understand that the more bravery she knew, but she understood after answering a soldier's question falsely

Annemarie did it because she shouldn’t be caught leaving

The use of dialogue highlights the thema

In chapter 9 henrik said the more

bravery she didn’t know

20407 김채민

2024-10-25 11:27:17 UTC

1.I read a historical fiction " Number the stars" by Lois Lowry.

2.In the third year of the Nazi occupation of Denmark, Annemarie wanted to keep her jewish friend Ellen safe from the Nazis.

3.With the help of her family and the Resistance, Annemarie bravely delivered an important package that helped Ellen's family escape to Sweden.

4.I was impressed by Ellen one of the main characters.

5.Ellen is a 10-year-old girl.

6.She is jewish. She gets help from her best friend Annemarie.

7.The theme of the book is friendship.

8.This is shown clearly in Chapter 5, when Annemarie lies to the German soldiers to protect Ellen.

9.Because it is important for Annemarie to protect Ellen from the German soldier.

10.Such actions are effectively shown through the use of dialogue.

11.Additionally the use of dialogue emphasizes the theme.

12. I was impressed by the conversation in Chapter5.

13.We can see it clearly.

14.Although the world can be tough, the value of friendship does not change always.

15. I read this novel and learned a lesson that Friends always should help friends.

16.And also I thought that Annemarie was cool.

17.The scene that I remember is "She is my sister,Lise" Even though the German soldier was scary, I admired the Annemarie's courage.

18.So I also thought that I wanted to become that kind of person.

19.In the end "Number the stars" is a story that everyone will remember for a long time.

20408 문채윤

2024-10-25 14:11:52 UTC

I read a coming-of-age novel, 'Number the Stars' by Lois Lowry.

When the Nazis had been in control of Denmark for three years, Annemarie wanted to keep her Jewish friend Ellen safe from the danger.
With much help, Annemarie bravely delivered an important package that helped Ellen's family escape to Sweden.
I was impressed by Annemarie.
She is ten years old and Ellen's best friend.
I think the theme of the novel is friendship.
This is shown in Chapter 12. Annemarie cried in the house after Ellen's family had gone.
Because she thought their friendship could be broken and felt sad and alone.
Such actions are shown well by the use of imagery and dialogue, too.
The use of imagery emphasizes the theme well.
In Chapter 5, Annemarie broke Ellen's necklace to keep Ellen safe from German soldiers.
The world can be tough, but friendship isn't weak and doesn't break easily.
And this book shows it perfectly.
I felt how beautiful the friendship is after reading this book.
So, I want "Number the Stars" to be read by many people.

20412 양지아

2024-10-26 15:34:34 UTC

I read a historical fiction 'Number the stars' by the Lois Lowry.
It is the third year of Nazi occupation of Denmark and Nazi plans to relocate Jews.
Annemarie helps her Jewish friend Ellen.
Annemarie is the main character of this novel.
Annemarie is a 10-year-old Danish girl, she wants to protect her Jewish friend Ellen.
The subject of this book is bravery.
In chapter 10, she lied to German soldier's question, "Who died?" even though she was scared.
She was brave because she not known everything about Great-aunt-Birte.
Such actions are effectively shown through the use of dialogue.
In addition, the use of flashback emphasizes the theme.
Annemarie remembered what uncle Henrik said "It's much easier to be brave if you do not know everything."
The main theme of Number the Stars is bravery to fight for what is right.
The author illustrated it very well.
This book highlights how young Annemarie and her family show bravery to help their friends.
In the end, I will remember Annemarie's bravery story for a long time.

20406김소은

2024-10-26 23:04:28 UTC

1. I read 'Number the Stars' written by Lois Lowry about the situation in Denmark during World War II.

2. The plot of this book is about the Nazis taking over Denmark and then trying to persecute Jews.

3. In this situation, a girl named Annemarie protects her Jewish friend Ellen from the Nazis.

4. I was impressed by the character Ellen in this book.

5. Ellen is Jewish and Annemarie's dear friend.

6.The theme of this book is racism.

7. In Chapter 11 and 12, Ellen goes to Sweden with the help of Annemarie's family to escape from the Nazis.

8. Ellen fled to Sweden, which was not occupied by the Nazis, because the Nazis were trying to start persecuting Jews.

9. The literary techniques used expressed the subject well with imagery, dialogue, and tones.

10. Among them, the literary technique that better expresses the subject is imagery.

11. In Chapter 4, you can see well in the scene where Ellen is crying when Annemarie's dad tells Annemarie what the Nazis are doing.

12. I think the theme of 'Number the Stars' is racism because Jews had to escape to Sweden due to the Nazis' racist policies.

13.'Number the Stars' expressed the theme of racism well.

14.Through 'Number the Stars,' I believe that racism should be eradicated as soon as possible.

15. Finally, I hope 'Number the Stas' will be known to more people.

20405 김성겸

2024-10-27 08:14:05 UTC

I read a war nover 'Number the stars' by Lois Lowry.
The story of a girl in a German-occupied coutry.
Annemarie wants to protect her Jewish friend Ellen from the Nazi and always liver in fear.

I was traly impressed by Annemarie, one of the main.
She is ten years old and living in a war.
The theme of the book is fear.
This is the shown clearly in chapter 55, when he was very afraid of soldiers.
Because they're trying to kill Allen, a Jew.
Such actions are effectively shown through the use of Emphasis.
Additionally, the use of Fear emphasizes the theme.
Annemarie is afraid of the Germans, but she acts bravely to protect Ellen.
The world can be tough, so the value of Fear isn't always easy to see.
However, this great book shows it really well.
I'm scared in war, I wouldn't have been able to lie to the Germans for Ellen like Annemarie did.

15.After reading this book, I knew Annemarie was a very brave child.

20410 범지원

2024-10-27 13:34:42 UTC

I read the historical fiction 'Number the Stars' by Lois Lowry.
This is the story of when the Nazis occupied Denmark , Annemarie wanted to keep her Jewish friend Ellen safe from the Nazis.
With the help of her family and the resistance, Annemarie delivered a letter that helped Ellen's family escaped to Sweden.
I was surely impressed by Annemarie.
who cares about her friendship.
I think the theme of the novel is friendship.
This is shown in chapter 12. When Annemarie and Ellen said, we'll be going to meet again.
Annemarie did it because she cares about friendship.
Such actions are effectively shown through the use of dialogue.

Additionally, the use of behavior emphasize the theme.
In the scene that Annemarie and Ellen hugged each other. We can see it definitely.
The world can be tough, so the value of friendship isn't always easy to see.
However, this great book shows it really well.
When Annemarie and Ellen were in danger, they always think of each other. It was really affectionate.
In the end, 'Number the stars' is the story that gives me a lot of inspiration.

20414 최단비

2024-10-28 12:50:22 UTC

I read a war fiction, 'Number the Stars' by Lois Lowry.
In the third year of the Nazi occupation of Denmark.
Annemarie wanted to safe her Jewish friend Ellen.
With the help, Annemarie bravely delivered an important package to helped Ellen's family escape to Sweden.
I was truly impressed by Annemarie, one of the main characters.
She is ten years old and wants to help Ellen
The theme of the book is friendship. This is shown clearly in chapter 5.
When the Nazis asked Ellen her name, and Annemarie said her name is Lise because Annemarie wants to save Ellen from the Nazis.
Such actions are effectively shown through the use of tone and dialogue.
Additionally, the use of imagery to emphasizes the theme.
In the scene in chapter 5, when Annemarie’s dad show Lise‘s picture and told to the Nazis
The world can be tough, so the value of friendship isn't always easy to see.
But, this book shows it well.
Annemarie values friendship, so I think Annemarie is a good friend.
In the end, "Number the Stars" is a story that everyone will remember for a long time.

20411 서유주

2024-10-28 15:11:51 UTC

I read a coming-of-age novel 'Number the Stars' by Lois Lowry.
In the third year of the Nazi occupation of Denmark, Annemarie wanted to keep her Jewish friend Ellen safe from the Nazis.
With her family and the Resistance, Annemarie helped Ellen's family escape to Sweden.
I was really impressed by Peter, one of the main characters.
He is Annemarie's sister's fiancé and a member of the resistance.
The theme of the book is resistance to injustice.
This is shown clearly in Chapter 10 and 11, when Peter helps the Jews prepare to escape.
Peter did this because it was wrong for the Nazis to take the Jews.
Such actions are effectively shown through the use of imagery and dialogue.
In addition, the use of dialogue highlights the theme.
In Chapter 11, when Peter gives instructions to Annemarie's mother, we can see this clearly.
The world can be cold, and it can be difficult to resist injustice.
However, this wonderful book shows it well.
Through the characters who struggle to protect the Jews, I realized that I should fight injustice to protect my precious people.
In the end, 'Number the Stars' is a story that gives an important lesson.

20401 강희선

2024-10-29 01:10:53 UTC

1.I read a Historical fiction 'Number the Stars' by Lois Lowry.

2.This novel is about a country at war during World War II.

3.Annemarie's family helps Ellen's family and evades the German army.

4.I was really impressed by Annemarie's dad.

5.He's Annemarie's dad and he's helping Ellen's family.

6.The theme of the book is family.

7.This is shown clearly in Chapter5,the scene where Annemarie's dad shows Lise's photo to the German soldiers to help Ellen.

8.Annemarie's dad did this to save Ellen, his daughter's friend and the person he had to protect.

9.Dialogues are used in this book.

10.Additionally, the use of flashback emphasizes the theme.

11.In the change between the scene in Chapter6 looking at Lise's photos, she flashes back to when she was young.

12.Protecting your family during war is not easy.

13.However,this great book shows it really well

14.It was nice to see families helping each other during the war.

15.In the end ,"Number the Stars" is a story that everyone will remember for a long time.

20409 박벼리

2024-10-29 23:52:13 UTC

1.I read a historical number the stors’ by Lois Lowory

2.The story is about Annemarie saving Ellen from the war in Germany And Ellen's family left for Annemarie Sweden

3.Ellen moved in with Annemarie's family

4.I was inspired by Annemaries’ mother in this book

5.She is Annemarie's mother

6.the them of the book is war

7.On page 63, Anne-Marie and Elin were talking at sea when their mother ran up and told them the soldiers were everywhere

8.From this action, you can see where the soldier was and from the fact that he called in a hurry, the soldier at this time was very scary Such

9.actions are effectively shown through the use of dialogue

10. Additionally,the use of Behavior emphasizes the theme

11. He's trying to protect the kids

12.the world can be tough,so the value of war isn’t alway easy to see

13.However,this great book shows it really well

14. The horrors of war are endless I learned from the story of the war in this book how scary and terrible it is

15.ln the end, “Number the stars” is a story that everyone will remember for a long time

20416허ㅏㅇ채민

2024-10-30 14:02:41 UTC

1.I read historical fiction Numder the stars by Lois Lowry

2.It's the story of Nazi occupation of Denmark

3.Annemarie helps her best friend Jewish Ellen from the Germans

4.I was impressed by Annemarie

5.she is Ellen's nest friend

6.I think the theme of the novel is friendship. This is shown clary in chapter5

7.When the Nazis asked her name.Annemarie lied that she was Lise

8.Because I want to save Ellen from the Nazis

20417 김예나

2024-10-30 15:47:58 UTC

1. I read a Historical fiction

'Number the Stars' by Lois Lowry.

2. It is a historical novel about a Jewish family during the occupation of Denmark in World War II.

3. To protect Ellen, Annemarie’s family hides her and helps her escape by pretending that she is part of their family.

4. I was really impressed by Annemarie

5. Annamaria is a 10-year-old Danish girl.

6. The theme of the book is family.

7. In chapter 5 and 7, Anna Marie quickly took out Ellen's necklace and hid it in her hand to hide that Ellen was Jewish.

8. At that time, Nazi soldiers were arresting Jews in Denmark, so Annamaria quickly judged the situation to protect hir friend and hid Ellen’s necklace.

9. actions are effectively shown through the use of dialogue

10. Additionally, the use of Behavior emphasizes the theme

11. In the scene in Chapter 6

12. It’s touching to see him bravely for others even in the horror of war.

13. However, this great book shows it really well.

14. The process of Anamary, who was an ordinary girl, risking and taking responsibility for her friends and family in the war was deeply moving.

15. Finally, I hope 'Number the Stas' will be known to more people.

20415최윤서

2024-10-31 01:21:53 UTC

1. I read the novel Courage. ‘Number the Stars’ by Lois Lowry.

2. The story is about Annemarie saving Ellen from the Nazis and Ellen's family leaving for Sweden.

3. Annemarie helps her Jewish friend Ellen.

4. I was very impressed with Annemarie.

5. Someone who is interested in her friendship.

6. I think the theme of the novel is courage.

7. This comes from chapter 12. Annemarie and Ellen say we will meet again.

8. I think it was because Annemarie had the courage to meet again.

9. Behaviors like this can be expressed effectively through conversation.

10. The use of action can also emphasize a topic.

11. Chapter 11 shows Peter giving instructions to Annemarie's mother.

12. The world seems cold and sharp, and resisting injustice is not always easy to see.

13. The author expressed the content very well.

14. The book highlights the courage young Annemarie and her family show in helping their friends.

15. In the end, I was able to see what lesson this brave story taught.

20413 주혜린

2024-11-01 03:20:22 UTC

1. I read a war history novel, 'Number the Stars' written by Lois Lowry.

2. The Nazis seized Denmark and Annemarie wants to protect her best friend Ellen, who is Jewish.

3. With the help of her family and the Resistance, Annemarie bravely delivered an important package that helped Ellen's family escape to Sweden.

4. I was truly impressed by Annemarie, one of the main characters.

5. She is ten years old who wants to help Ellen.

6. The theme of the book is friendship.

7. This is shown clearly in chapter 5, when the Nazis entered Annemarie's house, Annemarie hid Ellen's necklace in her hand.

8. Because she wants to protect Ellen from the Nazis.

9. Such actions are effectively shown through the use of imagery and tone.

10. Additionally, the use of dialogue emphasizes the theme.

11. In the scene in chapter 5, Annemarie tells Ellen, "You should try saying, 'I'm Lise Johansen!'".

12. The world can be tough, so the value of friendship isn't always easy to see.

13. However, this great book shows it really well.

14. I was mad at Nazis who killed Jewish.

15. In the end, "Number the Stars" is a story that everyone will remember for a long time.