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CHR EOY 2022: The text below describes how the disruption by an uninvited stranger made Kenny Morrison change his and his daughter’s name.

nivashini_mohandasan1_1 — 2024-02-07 01:21:49 UTC

ANDSS EOY 2022

nivashini_mohandasan1_1 — 2024-02-07 01:24:09 UTC

Ashriq/Ariff/Peh an

2024-02-07 03:22:04 UTC

"quiet as a ghost" This shows how Scott was very cautious of his movement and wanted to be very silent so not to attract any attention

2)"never heard a rustle of leaves"

"i never saw him coming"

"never heard a stick break"

Aniq and Alvin

2024-02-07 03:22:26 UTC

Quote: 'never heard rustle of leaves'

Explain: This suggests that Scott was moving quietly, which shows that he was cautious when moving.

'Quiet as a ghost'

Explain: This suggests that Scott was moving around silently, showing that he was undetectable.

Quote: drifting into the yard

Hariz and arex

2024-02-07 03:25:08 UTC

¨quiet as a ghost¨-This means that he is like a ghost that is like invisible and very slient

¨never heard a rustle of leaves, a stick breaking, nothing.¨- this means that they never heard him and also he never made a sound so they did not know he was there.

Eleanoor and kristina

eleanoor_ruzzlyn_mohammad_esham — 2024-02-07 03:25:20 UTC

1) 'quiet as a ghost'

The phrase 'quiet as a ghost' suggests that Scott is silent, showing that he never made a sound thus leaving him undetected

2) 'came drifting into the yard'

the use of 'drifting' suggests that Scott slowly came into the yard, showing that he is sneaky.

3)'never heard a rustle of leaves'

The phrase 'never heard a rustle of leaves' suggests that Scott had managed to hidden his sounds so well that you would never know he is there.

kahshan,shauqi,nabil

2024-02-07 03:29:19 UTC

Quote: 'quiet as a ghost'

This showed how careful Scott was in not making any noise as to not attract any attention.

Quote: 'came drifting into the yard'

this shows that scott was being quiet well entering the yard. which meant he did not want anyone to know.

Quote: 'never heard a rustle of leaves' this shows that the place was very quiet that they could not even hear the leaves moving

mark & aniz

aniz_farisya_jumadi — 2024-02-07 03:30:08 UTC

1) 'he came drifting into the yard, quiet as a ghost' = he went into the yard swiftly

2) 'line of smoke lifting from the treetops on cold days' = as if he was never there

3) 'i never saw him coming' = the writer did not see him

Ryan

2024-02-07 03:31:30 UTC

with reference to the paragraph, it states that

firstly ''Scott was quiet as a ghost" suggest that Scott was moving silently and could not be seen or detected which shows how stealthy Scott was. Secondly, it states in the paragraph that :" never heard a rustle of leaves, stick breaking nothing." this suggests that Scott was very quiet and light that not even his slightest movements could be detected around him. Lastly, the passage states that:" Scott was drifting into the yard." This shows that Scott is able to move very fast and swiftly that no one is able to see him which shows that he is stealthy

Neev

2024-02-07 03:31:33 UTC

" quiet as a ghost" suggests that Scott was moving silently showing that he could not be heard moving and was undetectable

"never heard a rustle of leaves, a stick breaking, nothing" suggests that Scott was quite which suggest that not even the slightest movements could not be detected

"drifting into the yard" suggest that Scott was very swift which suggests that scott can move very fast that no one was able to see him

xinrui and jiajun

2024-02-07 03:36:15 UTC

‘ quiet as a ghost’

This suggest that scott staying as silent as possible as ‘quiet as a ghost’ means the ghost as not usually seen and flows in mystery and silence. Thus, suggesting that he was very cautious and careful with his movements

‘ never heard a rustle of leaves’

This suggest that Scott was so careful that even Jake could not hear any sound being made while Scott was walking in the yards.

‘ he came drifting into the yards’

This suggest that he was quietly trying to walk to the yards, showing a sense of carefulness in his movements.

mark & aniz

aniz_farisya_jumadi — 2024-02-07 03:51:35 UTC

1) 'it was dark and spooky in the shed'

2) 'it had muffled smell, as of graves'

3) 'Something cold, or slimy --like a snake!'

azan aniqa

2024-02-07 03:52:01 UTC

"it was dark and spooky in the shed" this shows that ravi found the shed to be very scary and pitch black suggesting that he felt very scared and uncomfortable in the shed
"he quickly stuck his finger back up his nose to soothe himself" this shows that ravi had to stuck his finger up his to soothe himself this suggest that the shed was uncomfortable because he had to find ways to soothe himself and feel comfortable

Xinrui and jiajun

2024-02-07 03:52:24 UTC

‘ he hunched himself into a ball so as to not to bump into anything, touch or feel anything’

This suggest that Ravi was arching into a position that makes him feel a sense of comfort, that helps him to knock into anything as the objects around him are probably going to get him hurt. Thus, these dangerous objects caused him to feel conscious.

‘He quickly stuck his finger back up his nose to soothe himself.’

This suggest that he was anxious and scared, using his own copping mechanism to help himself calm down as he was very tense.

Daniell, Nabil, qiqi, ks

2024-02-07 03:52:44 UTC

1) Quote: 'shook, Shivered with delight.' This shows that Ravi was spooked somewhat like goosebumps because of the shed

2) Quote: 'He hunched himself into a ball' This shows that he tried to take up as little space as possible in order to not bump into anything in the shed

3) Quote: 'Ravi suddenly leapt up' This means because was very uncomfortable he was overreacting to a slight touch making him leap up

Ashriq/Ariff/Peh an

2024-02-07 03:53:27 UTC

1)"It was spooky and dark". This shows how he is not able to see anythi

mariam and elaine

2024-02-07 03:53:50 UTC

1) 'it was dark and spooky in the shed'

2) 'he hunched himself into a ball so as not to bump into anything'

arex

2024-02-07 03:54:02 UTC

"dark and spooky" This means that the conditions in the shed was very dim and caused Ravi to feel fearful of the unlit environment "shook then shivered with delight" this means he felt scared of the environment

neev and ryan

2024-02-07 03:54:11 UTC

"it was dark and spooky" this suggest that it was pitch black which suggests that he was scared

Jireh Jovan Eee

2024-02-07 03:54:13 UTC

1)"It was dark and spooky"

2)Shiecring wit dleign

3?something collfsnm

Kristina

eleanoor_ruzzlyn_mohammad_esham — 2024-02-07 03:54:52 UTC

1) 'he hunched himself into a ball so as not to bump into anything, touch or feel anything.'

this suggests that he is feeling uncomfortable in the shed because he is trying to avoid the possibility of touching anything inside.

2) 'he quickly stuck his finger back up his nose to soothe'

This showed that he was uneasy as he needed to stick his finger back up to find solace since he feels scared inside the shed, he needed a sense of comfort.

3) 'it had a muffled smell of graves'