Case study analysis by https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7 Read and 'mark' the two excerpts from case study analysis assignments en-us 2021-04-26 08:43:46 UTC 2021-04-26 10:41:25 UTC hello@padlet.com The first script is too repetitive. Mentions avoidance-based coping in the first paragraph, but continues to refer to it in the second paragraph. I think it would have been better to stick with one point instead of repeating it again in the latter. https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458761833
Mark - 5/10?? not sure]]> 2021-04-26 10:22:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458761833 The second script is worded really well, theoretical evaluation is great. Could provide more examples which refer to the case study? e.g. specify what the stressor could be within the theoretical evaluation. https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458764746 Mark - 7/10?? not sure to be honest.

Example: 

Stressors are situations that are perceived as having the potential to challenge or threaten an individual.

- Could provide an example of what the stressor could be? is it workload? deadlines? Provide some inference maybe or suggest something? ]]> 2021-04-26 10:23:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458764746 Not sure if this is too ahead but both use terms such as 'hasn't' or 'isn't', i think because it is academic writing the writer could have used 'has not' or 'is not'??? just a thought. https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458775180 2021-04-26 10:25:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458775180 https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458787505 The second script is structured really well as it makes a point, shows where in the extract it can be applied and then explains this. It links the extract to the theories really well.]]> 2021-04-26 10:30:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458787505 https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458791173 The first script waffles on too much without really using much evidence. This is also highlighted by the fact that there aren’t many citations.]]> 2021-04-26 10:32:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458791173 https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458795965 B is better strucutured and much more easy to follow. It also is better than A in its use of referencing theories to support their arguments.]]> 2021-04-26 10:34:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458795965 The first script does not really have a structure or flow effectively compared to the second script and is more easy to understand. https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458807323 2021-04-26 10:39:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458807323 The second scripted is clearly more researched https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458811707 2021-04-26 10:41:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ms348ynkvc/yarma4dule017ej7/wish/1458811707