601/603.........What makes a GOOD personal narrative? After reading "The Day I didn't go to the Pool"- what did the author do that made it engaging? by Kimberly Gallina https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i Made with whimsy en-us 2021-06-08 18:56:10 UTC 2025-11-15 18:05:53 UTC hello@padlet.com Flying Tigers: kgallina1 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595741143 Followed a sequence of events. 

It ended up being a good thing that he didn't go to the pool which is connected to the title. 

The title and beginning hooked us in as readers. ]]> 2021-06-09 13:33:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595741143 Flying Tigers: kgallina1 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595745154 Lots of surprising parts ]]> 2021-06-09 13:34:51 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595745154 Watermelon sugar spatwary https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595745295 adding an interesting title.

Adding a hook to the beginning of the story.




]]> 2021-06-09 13:34:54 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595745295 Watermelon Sugar kmaurizacatenez https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595748573 In the beginning the author is trying experience the hearing and the feeling, like your in that place  and part,
At the end it talks about how the storm is destroying and breaking the trailer.]]> 2021-06-09 13:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595748573 The Best of the Best https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595749437 What my group thinks makes a good personal narrative is to add lots of detail because when you add detail, it makes the reader want to read more because they want to know what keeps happening like in the story we were just reading. Detail basically hooks the reader to your story because it makes them want to read more.]]> 2021-06-09 13:36:15 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595749437 The flying tigers https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595750356 I followed a turn of events turns out by the end the kids that the narrator was babysitting didn’t want to go to the pool that time and it led them to say that “the thing is we have each other”.- Avery ]]> 2021-06-09 13:36:32 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595750356 Flying Tigers: jsingh116 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595751726 I felt like the author gave really good imagery because he/she described the tornado so well.]]> 2021-06-09 13:36:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595751726 spatwary https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595753159 2021-06-09 13:37:21 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595753159 spatwary https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595755467 2021-06-09 13:38:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595755467 the straw hats https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595760055 I feel like what makes a good narrative is that it puts a setting or feeling to the story that wasn't there before, like adding  extra  details to add and make more sense. 


like the story says, he didn't go to the pool. it was a good thing, and just like flying tigers said the title and beginning hooked us in.]]> 2021-06-09 13:39:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595760055 Jaisan ginyard (one man group) https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595766060 What makes a good narrative is a good story line a title that summarizes the gist. A good explanation on whats happening. And a good wordplay.]]> 2021-06-09 13:41:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595766060 The flying tigers arios97 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595767831 the events were crazy and they added dialog for each person and image they didn't go to the pool how would it be but it also had a hook-Alma ]]> 2021-06-09 13:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595767831 The straw hats aopoku3 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595769714 What makes a good narrative is to Introduce a problem or complication that causes an issue which gives your story purpose.]]> 2021-06-09 13:42:35 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595769714 The Blue Birds https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595771748 what Made it a Good Narrative was All The Details that They Put In even The Little Parts Was Really Detailed. The Author also Used vary Discredited Details, and Also used Dialogs ]]> 2021-06-09 13:43:14 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/yaiw0y17ik4n6v5i/wish/1595771748