Jake Google Sites Peer Feedback 2019 - 2020 by Jake Bjorklund https://padlet.com/26jbjorklund/ya4kznxm372q Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 15:13:06 UTC 2019-12-12 15:14:04 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/438880996/f570fedbf6e2434fdefdb126310a72bc/1_TYAzzTJ60x_qg5N81ElU9A.png Jake Bjorkland 26tdowling1 https://padlet.com/26jbjorklund/ya4kznxm372q/wish/420792535 I like how you described how Zane ran to his uber like a cheetah to his pray
I like when you show me that Zane was getting bullied but stood up for himself
I wish that you would not say “It’s tommorrow.”

]]> 2019-12-06 15:25:43 UTC https://padlet.com/26jbjorklund/ya4kznxm372q/wish/420792535 Feedback" Pedro 26pmora https://padlet.com/26jbjorklund/ya4kznxm372q/wish/420829395 I like how you described how competitive and how brave Zane is. I like how you explained what happened to Zane, and I like how you made Zane stand up for himself and join the MBA. One suggestion is to correct the math, and another suggestion is to explain why he wanted to join the MBA. And not because he defeated his bully.]]> 2019-12-06 16:05:13 UTC https://padlet.com/26jbjorklund/ya4kznxm372q/wish/420829395 feedback 26nzoganas https://padlet.com/26jbjorklund/ya4kznxm372q/wish/422262941 Hey  Jake! I like how you gave a lot of detail when the bully was being mean to zane. I also like how you were discribing when his father died and you gave detail about the fight they were in. that really helped pull the reader in and understand. Something that i can suggjest is the part were you were going to the staudem, when you were talking about the tenth round, you should add more detail about your experence. Bye Jake! :)


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