https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1 subject + what you think + 3 reasons to support en-us 2018-02-14 14:05:05 UTC 2026-01-31 20:06:31 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231503493 Pets are a magnificent companion, because they keep you company, and make sure you are safe.

Great work! Make sure to have 3 reasons to support and you do not need a comma before because.]]> 2018-02-14 14:41:07 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231503493 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231504551 Basketball is a great sport because it is both safe, fun and competitive.

Great format!]]> 2018-02-14 14:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231504551 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231504820 Football is better than Basketball because there is more space to play, it is more exciting ,and it also put you on the edge of you chair.

Great format! Try to make even more concise

]]> 2018-02-14 14:42:46 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231504820 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231504999 Dogs are better than cats because they have more companionship, and they are easier to train, and there more lovable than cats.

great format! You do not need and 2 times. Take the first one out.]]> 2018-02-14 14:43:04 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231504999 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231505518 Early dismals is the best because you can be benificel because you can go vaction daytrips , and hangout

Try not to use because 2 times and avoid the word you 

Early dismissals are the best because ____________, ____________, and ___________.]]> 2018-02-14 14:43:54 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231505518 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231505551 Because they cuddle with you, they play with you, and they keep you company.

Now put this all together in 1 sentence and try to avoid the word you]]> 2018-02-14 14:43:58 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231505551 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231505631 Dogs are  much more useful because they can save your life in threat of a danger, they can help you be more active, and can be an all around good friend

Great format! Don't forget punctuation. ]]> 2018-02-14 14:44:05 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231505631 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231505936 Dogs are better than cat because they they're  not lazy, they can  retrieve a ball, and they are the best company there is.

Nice format! Make sure to read for typos

]]> 2018-02-14 14:44:35 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231505936 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231506219 Cats are better because cats use a litter box, you can pick them up even if there old and big,  Cats also save people.

awesome work! Now try to make it more concise. Make the 3 statements within shorter. 
Try not to use the word you.]]> 2018-02-14 14:45:01 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231506219 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231506362
Nice work! Remember to have 3 reasons to support.

Phones should not be allowed in school because ____________, ______________, and ______________.]]> 2018-02-14 14:45:14 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231506362 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231508797 Summer is the best season because  it is warm, you can go swimming, and you can go on vacation.

Great work! Try to take out the word you.]]> 2018-02-14 14:49:20 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231508797 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231508876 Summer is the best season because it lets you go to the pool and cool off, you don't have to go to school, and you can go to camp.

Great format! Try to take out the word you]]> 2018-02-14 14:49:28 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231508876 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231508956 Football is better because there is tackling, more running, and more exciting.

Awesome claim!!! Try another one!]]> 2018-02-14 14:49:37 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231508956 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231509007 Dogs are fun, friendly and protective therefore they are the best pet

Great! Just make sure to add the proper punctuation. ]]> 2018-02-14 14:49:43 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231509007 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231509012 Dogs because they are trainable, loving, and they like to be outside

Dogs? Make sure to make a statement about dogs to make the sentence complete and add 3 reasons. 

Dogs are _____________ because __________, _____________, and _________.]]> 2018-02-14 14:49:44 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231509012 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231509050 Pets are something everyone should have because they bring people joy, teaches kids responsibility, and gives people companionship.

Nice work. Revise to make it singular words. Teach kids, and give people]]> 2018-02-14 14:49:47 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231509050 s021496 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231509395 dogs are better because they are more affectionate

Great start! Now add 2 more reasons to this sentence.

Dogs are better because _____________, ______________, and _______________.

]]> 2018-02-14 14:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231509395 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231509644 Dogs are better than cats because they will play with you whenever they want, they are more affectionate, and they are easier to train.

Awesome claim! All the parts are there! The subject + what you think + 3 reasons! I would just try to not use the word 'you' and not use they are so much. ]]> 2018-02-14 14:50:50 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/231509644 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/233250655 Dogs are better than cats because they are more comforting, they don't have as sharp claws as cats do so they can't  scratch you as bad, and they can be trained a lot easier. ]]> 2018-02-20 13:47:57 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/233250655 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/233251223 Dogs are better because they are trainable, loving, and love to be outside.]]> 2018-02-20 13:49:05 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/233251223 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/233252829 2018-02-20 13:52:14 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/233252829 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/233252845 Dogs are better than cats because they are easier to train, they pay more attention to their owner, and they want to play all the time.]]> 2018-02-20 13:52:15 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing1/wish/233252845