https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo Conçu avec de grands rêves en-us 2017-05-19 13:34:45 UTC 2017-05-19 14:47:23 UTC hello@padlet.com mcneal_alison97 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172820817 Great speeds
Great use of repetition
So powerful and passionate ]]> 2017-05-19 14:44:48 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172820817 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172820846 Emotional message, really good]]> 2017-05-19 14:44:55 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172820846 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172820880 Deep, moving, and impactful. You showed bravery and emotion beautifully.]]> 2017-05-19 14:45:04 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172820880 mccart_kierna27 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172820946 Really well-written and the language is very powerful
It was interesting how you used the repetition when talking about the topic negatively and then positively at the end]]> 2017-05-19 14:45:19 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172820946 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821028 the long pause and the speed change was so powerful 
I FREAKING LOVED IT 

]]> 2017-05-19 14:45:45 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821028 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821037 I love how powerful your repetition was with "they said]]> 2017-05-19 14:45:49 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821037 russell_elizabeth https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821149 Great use of repetition and pauses to emphasize your story. ]]> 2017-05-19 14:46:20 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821149 maisie_berger22 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821155 I loved how you kept saying "they said" and you were so brave and gained hope as the poem progressed ]]> 2017-05-19 14:46:21 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821155 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821178 Very emotionally vulnerable, which was moving and shocking and very important]]> 2017-05-19 14:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821178 recksi_matthe16 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821183 Strong repetition of "they said"
It really made me think how I'd react if my little brother was gone or had cancer]]> 2017-05-19 14:46:29 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821183 thoren_emily04 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821187 The pauses in between your stanzas helped to empower your poem. The speeds and volume helped make it powerful]]> 2017-05-19 14:46:30 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821187 spetal_michae04 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821201 Omg . . . That gave me goose bumps it was so good]]> 2017-05-19 14:46:34 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821201 quade_chase31 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821230 Really well-written and emotional. Speed changes were very smooth. ]]> 2017-05-19 14:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821230 bardwe_jordan24 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821331 It was so well written and impactful ]]> 2017-05-19 14:47:13 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821331 https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821350 I very happy with how this turned out🙂]]> 2017-05-19 14:47:18 UTC https://padlet.com/leach_madiso16/y7qhbeq91wwo/wish/172821350