Blue Class Exit Ticket by Kaci Boss https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1 en-us 2015-11-18 19:26:32 UTC 2025-12-08 06:11:57 UTC hello@padlet.com Answer the following question in a complete sentence: kaci_boss https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/82203846

1. After reading other's narrative pieces, what revisions would you make to your own writing?


2. How was peer feedback helpful?

]]> 2015-11-18 19:24:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/82203846 Mikaela 200067 https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532214 I think I needed more dialogue and also, I think that i needed a more interesting rising action

]]> 2015-12-08 18:53:24 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532214 Samantha Perez๐Ÿฑ 202642 https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532222 1. I think some revisions could be adding more dialogue or describing myself or charachter more.

]]> 2015-12-08 18:53:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532222 Camalah๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜ https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532244 2015-12-08 18:53:30 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532244 Daya๐Ÿ˜ณ https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532269 In my story I would have added more dialougue

]]> 2015-12-08 18:53:35 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532269 Brenda๐Ÿ’๐Ÿป https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532299 I think I would add more dialouge and describe the outside characters.

]]> 2015-12-08 18:53:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532299 Jaeli๐Ÿ˜Ž https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532302 The revisions I would make is that why I yeld at my mom when she told me to clean my room.

]]> 2015-12-08 18:53:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532302 MonceratโœŒ๏ธโœŒโœŒ๐Ÿ’Ž๐Ÿ’Ž๐Ÿ’Ž https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532306 I think I would have explain my story better because I think I mumbled a bit and I would have made the story a little bit better and much more educated.

]]> 2015-12-08 18:53:41 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532306 Anjole Dull๐Ÿ€๐Ÿ’Žโšพ๏ธ๐Ÿˆ https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532310 I would change my diologe because some of my

]]> 2015-12-08 18:53:41 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532310 Amairany 1014116 https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532311 I would try to not laugh alot ,add more details,add more diologe

]]> 2015-12-08 18:53:42 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532311 Emily https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532469 I would add more dialouge and detail.

]]> 2015-12-08 18:54:07 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532469 Serenity๐Ÿ˜ฒ https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532607 I would change my dialogue and add people talking to others in my story describe the setting

]]> 2015-12-08 18:54:28 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532607 ๐Ÿ™„joel๐Ÿ™„ https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532677 Add more attactments to it and pit more details

]]> 2015-12-08 18:54:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532677 Joshua https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532704 2015-12-08 18:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532704 Cesar melendez https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532727 I would change the dialogue and speak louder adding deatails.

]]> 2015-12-08 18:54:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532727 Analice https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532738 I would add more detail on how my climax got better. I also need to add more dialoge.

]]> 2015-12-08 18:54:48 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532738 ๐Ÿ’Ž๐Ÿค‘Layla๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿ’Ž https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532749 2015-12-08 18:54:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532749 Juan๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜œ https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532786 They should describe more about the settin

]]> 2015-12-08 18:54:55 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532786 Natalie ๐Ÿ˜Š https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532980 I would revise my own story and look at the corrections they made

]]> 2015-12-08 18:55:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85532980 Aidan๐Ÿˆ https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85533012 Stronger words or details

]]> 2015-12-08 18:55:35 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85533012 Amandeep ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ‘ฟ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85533021 - After reading other's revisions I think that i should make my story better and make my voice sound really better.

- I thonk some kids should add more dialogue. I think I should describe my setting more.

]]> 2015-12-08 18:55:36 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85533021 Olivia๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿถ๐Ÿš๐Ÿโ˜”๏ธ https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85533334 When I read

]]> 2015-12-08 18:56:23 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85533334 Jasmine๐Ÿ˜› https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85533438 I need more dialogue in my story and some details.

]]> 2015-12-08 18:56:41 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85533438 Joslyn๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‡ https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85533496 2015-12-08 18:56:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85533496   Stephanie https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85533568 2015-12-08 18:57:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85533568 Monica https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85534081 I

]]> 2015-12-08 18:58:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85534081 Francisco๐Ÿ‘ด๐Ÿฟ๐ŸŽ…๐Ÿฟ https://padlet.com/kaci_boss/chemistry1/wish/85534338 I wouldfix my dialog with more people talking.

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