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usictech — 2024-01-29 07:43:10 UTC

Follow the four paraphrasing steps on the PowerPoint to paraphrase the three sentences below. Add your answers to the class padlet:

Many people believe Sheffield to be one of the friendliest cities in England.
According to the NHS, anxiety is a feeling of unease, like a worry or fear.
‘Plagiarism’ involves copying ideas and words from other sources, without stating where they are from.

usictech — 2024-01-29 07:43:10 UTC

Watch the video up to 01:40 and make notes to define these terms: plagiarism, self-plagiarism, collusion, fabrication.

Make notes for your group, with examples and solutions.

usictech — 2024-01-29 07:43:10 UTC

Work in pairs.

Student A: Read and make notes on steps 1 & 2.

Student B: Read and make notes on steps 3 & 4.

Explain the steps to your partner.

without declaring the origin, plagiarism consists of stealing thoughts and paragraphs from other journals

2024-01-29 16:21:04 UTC

This is good - well done.

However, the order works better like this:

plagiarism consists of stealing thoughts and paragraphs from other journals without declaring the origin.

Also, 'journals' is too specific. It could be books, websites, newspapers, etc. - use other synonyms for sources, e.g., authors, references, publications.

the NHS states that anxiety is a sense of tension, such as a worry and panic.

2024-01-29 16:24:48 UTC

This is very good - well done.

Sheffield is regarded as one of the most amiable cities in UK by lots of people.

2024-01-29 16:27:25 UTC

Excellent work - well done.

2024-01-29 16:29:09 UTC

Sheffield is always considered to be one of the friendliest cities in England.
Good work but 'always' is not quite the same as 'many people'
The NHS said that anxiety is a kind of motion, for instance, worry or fear.
Good work but 'emotion' not 'motion.'
‘Plagiarism’ includes passing off ideas and words into your own, without having reference with it.
Excellent - well done.

2024-01-29 16:29:51 UTC

Sheffield is considered by most to be one of the most friendliest cities in England.

Good work but 'many' is not the same a 'most', and a synonym for friendly would be better.

Anxiety,worry and fear are all caused by people feeling unease, which comes from NHS.

Good work - well done.

Plagiarism is using others' research results without citing the source.

Good work but 'results' should be 'writing'.

Xinyan Li

2024-01-29 16:31:06 UTC

1.Many people agree that Sheffield is considered one of the best cities for out-of-towners to live in

2.The NHS believes that anxiety and fear give similar feelings and both make people uncomfortable

3.If you use other people's ideas in your text but don't let everyone know about it, then you will be characterised as plagiarising

William

2024-01-29 16:31:18 UTC

1.A lot of people think the most friendliest university in England is the university of Sheffield.

2.On the basic of the NHS,anxiety is a feeling that make people uncomfortable,just as angry.

3.'Plagiarism'includes stealing views and sentences from other people without permission.

2024-01-29 16:31:25 UTC

1 Many people think the friendliest cities in UK is Sheffield.

2 In the NHS, the feeling that makes people feel worried or fearful is called anxiety.

3 Content copied from other sources, without attribution, is called plagiarism.

pretty

Kexin

2024-01-29 16:33:11 UTC

A lot of people think that one of the friendliest cities in England is Sheffield.
Just like be afraid or scare, anxiety is an uncomfortable feeling, says the NHS.
‘Plagiarism’ refers to the Ideas and research replication without attribution.

Cherie

2024-01-29 16:33:17 UTC

1.Sheffield is recognized one of the friendliest cities in England by persons.

2.Anxiety is an uncomfortable feeling such as worry or fear according to the NHS.

3.Without any quoting references copying ideas and words from other sources is called ’plagiarism‘.

Chen CHEN

2024-01-29 16:34:10 UTC

A lot of people think Sheffield is one of the most friendly cities in the UK.
As mentioned by the NHS, anxiety is a nervous feeling, just like worry and fear.
Plagiarism is copying ideas and text from another source without acknowledging its source.

Yijun Ping

2024-01-29 16:37:13 UTC

1 Many people believe Sheffield to be one of the friendliest cities in England.

Sheffield is considered as one of the friendliest cities in England.

2. According to the NHS, anxiety is a feeling of unease, like a worry or fear.

Anxiety is a feeling of unease such as a worry or fear in accordance with NHS.

3. 'Plagiarism' involves copying ideas and words from other sources, without stating where they are from.

'Plagiarism ' contains copying ideas and words from other sources also left out saying where they are from