PRACTICE 02: DÙNG PHƯƠNG PHÁP PESTEL ĐỂ NÂNG CẤP OUTLINE TRƯỚC by Alpha IELTS Prep

Topic 1: Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of education should be free. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

alphaieltsprep — 2023-04-17 03:34:27 UTC

MINH HỌA OUTLINE - Disagree:

What (economic): increase the financial pressure on the government
How: spend more funding on education → cannot spend enough on other issues (e.g: develop social welfare, infrastructure, medical care)
Why: government has to raise tax rate → cause social instability

Disagree

2023-04-22 13:56:23 UTC

What (economic): Free education makes an economic impact.
How: the government spends its budget -> financial resources are not equally distributed
Why: The government increases taxes -> adversely affects people's income -> social instability.
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Agree

2023-04-22 13:59:35 UTC

What (social): free education changes people's lives
How: get good study -> better life -> grateful -> help other people who have same situation
Why: have high standard of living -> different from the life in the past -> have chance help others -> ommunity become better

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Draft 1_Practice 2

2023-04-22 14:02:19 UTC

** Neutral **
+) AGREE (Economic)
What: Free education creates the opportunities for people from all ages in terms of economic to obtain the knowledge.
How: people from all generations may learn without burden in economic aspects so that they may develop their potentials regardless of their financial background.
Why: people who do not have the ability to afford the expenses for the long terms in education may have chances to access knowledge -> change their lives -> make contributions to the community.

disagree

2023-04-22 14:10:56 UTC

what: limit one's career opportunities
how: Private schools will not gain profitable -> cannot maintain and will be closed -> Public schools are overloaded -> select outstanding students
why: who not studying in university are not prefered by companies -> lower income and cannot be promoted

2023-04-22 14:14:24 UTC

what(social): improve intellectual level
how: everybody have more opportunity for educating-> obtain knowledge-> increase cultural standard of the people in country side->lower scocial evil( abortion, chil abuse,...)
why: people gain more knowledge about morality.

Nguyen

2023-04-30 08:12:55 UTC

agree:

- what (social): have a better life
- how: being able to study without worrying about finance --> focus on their study
- why: graduate with flying colors--> can take part in higher/tertiatry education (E.G: MBA, Master's) --> Legible to higher positions/climb the corporate ladders --> have a stable life

Agree - Châu

2023-05-02 08:09:18 UTC

- What (social): increase high literacy
- how: chance to access to edu freely => more children go to school => increase rate of literacy
- why: increase career opportunities => high salary => enhance the life quality => access more social warefare,
2/ reduce the criminal rate => upgrade the social security

Kiều Thoa

2023-05-05 07:51:42 UTC

+) What (economic): a good life
+) How: the opportunity to go to school => study and improve => have a degree => and be able to do the job they want
+) Why: life experience => ability to accept new things => reduce the criminal => contribute to society and community development
+) So what: education is more important for everyone, to have a good life => it should be free

Kiều Thoa

2023-05-05 08:04:31 UTC

+) What (social): increase literacy rate
+) How: opportunity to go to school => approach the good => build a spirit of learning => build personal character => find your favorite field
+) Why: understand the value you are doing => inspire and propagate education => build a community to learn from each other => help the community => reduce the rate of illiteracy, not going to school school
+) So what: education is more critical to everyone for going to find awareness of individual => Education should be free

Khuê

2023-05-06 08:59:20 UTC

-what(social): reduce crime rate
-how: an opportunity to go to school-> improve knowledge and understanding-> get certificate-> be able to do a good-> job
-why: reduce social evils rate-> develop the economy of our community-> infrastructure will be more complete.

Diễn đạt đầy đủ:

On the one hand, free education for people of all backgrounds can reduce crime rate. The initial point to look at is that people of all ages will have an opportunity to go to school. If they study hard to improve their knowledge and understanding, they will get a qualitay diploma so they will be able to do a stable job. Therefore, free education can decrease the proportion of social evils in the community and improve the security of the area where people live.

Hữu Phước

2023-05-07 02:01:53 UTC

What (social): reduce financial pressure on parents
How: children always go to school irrespective of parents' income -> parents don't have to take care of school fee
Why: spend money for more worth-paying things or deal with other issues (E.g: paying off debts, invest) in their lives

On the other hand, this idea can reduce financial pressure on parents. Parents do not have to take care of their children school fee --> tuition fees since going to school is always allowed --> accessible to their kids. If parents pay a lot of attention to the fee, their concentration on their work may be in low productivity. Also, some children can not focus on studying because they worry about how their parents pay school fee in low income. Moreover, parents are able to spend money on more worthy-paying technological gadgets or deal with other issues like paying off debts or investment, rather than school fee.

An

2023-05-30 02:15:17 UTC

What:(social) reduce crimes rate
How:study a lot->get a stable and well-paid job->no reason to commit crimes like shoplifting, pickpocketing
Why:people generally commit crimes because they lack money->getting a job will mostly prevent this->secure community

Viên

2023-06-09 02:03:51 UTC

What (social): increase intellectual level/ decrease crime rate
How: all people are able to go to school => be equipped with knowledge => increase social consciousness
Why: high consciousness => avoid social evils, lower crime rate => increase social safety.

Viên

2023-06-09 02:20:03 UTC

On the one hand, free education for all people contributes to reducing the crime rate. Obviously, people who go to school will be equipped with both academic and social knowledge, which helps them increase their social consciousness. As a result, people are aware of what is right and wrong, so they can avoid social evils, leading to a lower crime rate. Therefore, free education can enhance the social security.

Minh Châu

2023-06-11 01:52:34 UTC

*Agree
-What(social) education helps improve the quality of people's life.
-How: able to go to school=> obtain knowledge and essential/vital skills=> be confident to apply for their dream jobs (get the certificate, technical training)
-Why: be qualified for jobs=> have stable income=>improve quality of life.

Firstly, free education is vital in enhancing people's living standards. This is because they would be able to obtain imperative pieces of knowledge and skills which definitely boost their confidence. Thus, having enough requirements for getting good jobs, for instance, certificates and technical training, many people stand a higher chance of successfully applying for their dream jobs. And obviously, people's quality of life would increase, thanks to having a stable income.

Thu Phương

2023-06-20 04:27:17 UTC

what (economic): reduce the unemployment rates, improve the overall economy
how: if all people get access to education => they can get a degree => can get a job and stable income => reduce the unemployed rate and even homelessness=> increase the gdp rate and even economy overall
why: if not => increase the unemployed rate and even crime rates => the government has to create a grant to assist unemployed and homeless people =>budget deficit for other areas like science, infrastructure...=> economy sufffers losses

HPhuc

2023-06-20 13:09:35 UTC

agree

what (social): rate of intellectuality/literacy rise
how: all students with different economic backgrounds can go to school -> reduce illiterate percentage (especially children live in remote or rural areas)
why: student don't want to miss chances to study -> free -> stimulate studying

Hiền

2023-06-20 13:09:50 UTC

agree
- what: (social) reduce crime rates
- how: all people have access to education => be equipped with knowledge and skills => make informed decisions/ distinguish morally wrong and good behaviors --> Avoid social evils
- why: reduced crime rates => overall safety and well-being of citizens => social cohesion

Linh Đan

2023-06-20 13:10:27 UTC

Agree
- What (social): better everyone's lives.
- How: equal opportunity to learn -> can all study all necessary knowledge and skills -> earn a good living and become a better person.
- Why: know more about laws and morality --> avoid committing crimes -> better the community -> improve everyone else's lives.

Nam trân

2023-06-25 02:04:36 UTC

Agree
- what (social): improve academic level of the community
- how: everyone with all financial condition can go to school => get more knowledge=> increase the social awareness.
- Why: help the community decreases illiteracy rate, increases people’s politeness in behaviors and good awareness=> decrease socials evils and crime rates

Nhật Minh

2023-06-25 08:58:51 UTC

What (political): increase the advocate's number to that government
How: free education to the poor => they will be grateful and stand with the government
Why: they want to more similar beneficial policies => support government's development direction & reaps harmony of a nation

On the one hand, in terms of politics, providing free education will increase the advocate's number to a/one government. This is happening because civilians especially the poor ones who have a chance to study by virtues of that policy will be grateful for it. Hence, not only people want to retain that government to achieve more similar beneficial policies, but also reaps the harmony of a nation.

Ngoc Ha

2023-06-27 04:26:35 UTC

What (social): ensure the safety in community
How: every social class can approach to education -> more opportunity for the poor to get jobs for daily expenditure--> reduce significant criminals in community
Why: people become more knowledgeable to distinguish wrong and good behaviors -> avoid/decrease social evils & control crime rate

Khánh

2023-07-02 07:52:39 UTC

What (social): improve the living standard of some people
How: be able to approach education-> leverage their knowledge and improve skill sets ->get a stable job
Why: a stable job and be able to afford basic needs-> pay off debts and reduce financial burdens-> decrease the poverty in the community

The first benefit of free education is that it improves the living standard of many people. Citizens, especially the impoverished, have the ability to approach education so that they can leverage their knowledge and gain some helpful skills. With that skills and experiences, they can apply and get a stable job. Moreover, people with well-paid jobs can afford their basic needs, and thereby, they are able to pay off debts and reduce financial burdens. As a result, it can contribute to decreasing poverty in the community.

Minh Phuong

2023-07-23 04:00:15 UTC

- What (economic): contribute to the development of the economy
- How: have access to proper education => gain knowledge => be qualified for jobs
- Why: improve the quality of the workforce => higher output -> vital role in economic growth

Thanh Ha

2023-07-29 12:58:11 UTC

- What (economic): Increasing budgetary constraints on the government
- How: the government has to spend money on free education -> other concerning problems ( pollution, infrastructure, healthcare) not evenly distributed
- Why: requiring governments to manage and allocate resources effectively and has to raise tax -> social instability and insufficiencies

Thanh Ha

2023-07-29 13:09:48 UTC

On the other hand, it is undeniable that free education can increase the budgetary constraints on the government. Providing education for free means that the government has to spend more money on it, so other graving issues such as pollution, infrastructure, and healthcare are not evenly distributed. Free educational programs also require governments to manage and allocate resources effectively and raise taxes, this could lead to social instability and inefficiencies.

2023-09-24 01:54:54 UTC

Sang

What (Social): Free education can enhance living quality

How: Every social class can approach education -> Prepare themselves skills for future degree -> get a stable job -> making better communities

Why: People can understand and can help themselves not to commiting crimes -> decrease social crime rates

Thu Phương

2023-11-26 01:59:27 UTC

what (economic): increase their nation's gross domestic product output
how: have access to free education => get a diploma or achieve higher education => be qualified for a job
why: if more people have a job=> more contribute to the economy like paying more income taxes and decrease the unemployment rate, raising the GDP higher

Lê Khang

2023-12-18 02:52:22 UTC

What: Help students, especially underprivileged ones, acquire an occupation
What: Enable students to contribute to the betterment of their community
How: Government allocates funds => Free access to many professional courses => Students pursue their career path easily.
Why: If more ppl are qualified for good jobs => increase living standards => Making more contribution to the society.

Hồ Nguyễn Khuê

2024-02-01 04:07:00 UTC

Topic 1: Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of education should be free.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Agree

What (economics): free education enhances economic prosperity
How: ensure all students get access to free education => increase intellectual level of a nation => create a more professional and high quality workforce => GDP of that nation increases => economic growth
Why: if people are well trained a knowledgeable and professional skillsets => generate more career opportunities => monetary flow rises => equitable education would result in economic advancement.

Liên

2024-03-01 02:59:17 UTC

what (economic): less money will be allocated to other sectors
how: health care and environmental protection --> suffer from insufficient governmental funding
why: citizens do not get medical attention of high quality & pollution problem deteriorates

Pham Ngoc

2024-03-03 10:20:20 UTC

Agree

What: (Social) reduce crime rates
How: free education -> have qualifications to apply for well paid jobs -> not have motivation do illegal jobs
Why: have no reason to risk for better paying -> live earnest life

Thuy Minh

2024-04-12 02:51:45 UTC

Disagree

What: increases the financial burden on governments and citizens to cover all tuition fee.

How: Universities usually request higher payments to students because of the excellent faculty and infrastructure -> citizens have to pay more taxes to support the program.

Why: the economic development may slow down -> deriving from the purpose of the program

Trương Huy

alphaieltsprep — 2024-05-05 12:44:31 UTC

Agree

What (social): contribute more to community
How: access to education --> better life skills --> make good decisions about relationships & professions
Why: engage in community service --> improve community life quality

Hạnh Vũ

2024-06-29 09:26:19 UTC

Agree

what (social): improve and ensure people's social life.
how : government spend more funding on education > resident have opportunity to acquire knowledge > get a stable job > the poverty rate will go down
why: the crime rate will decrease > build a safer community life in which people are willing to help each other > this should be free for everyone

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One the one hand, free education can improve and ensure people's social life. Firstly, if government spent more funding on education, residents, including poor people could have the chance to access knowledge. They can have a stable job to help make their family life less difficult. This method will lead to a decrease not only in poverty rate, but also in crime rate. Due to this, citizens will join hands contributing to build a safer community life in which people are willing to help each other.

An Hà

2024-08-14 13:53:27 UTC

what : vicariously enhance the societal standard
How: acquire moral knowledge> understand about societal moral compass> lead to a downturn in the number of participants of unethical activities
Why: the crime rate will decline> a safer community & a more wholesome community

gia huy

2024-09-17 10:14:31 UTC

What (economic): it can boost economic development
How: free access to education help raise the quality of labor market-> high-quality professionals > attract foreign investors/employers
Why: attract more foreign direct investment > economy go up

>> Tập trung vào một aspect duy nhất (aspect: labor market)

minh duc

duc105661 — 2024-09-17 10:22:06 UTC

-what (economic): increase the number of jobs and the quality of employees.

-how: more people have access to high-level education -> more people have bachelor degrees + attain more transferrable skills increases competitiveness -> people are better qualified for many jobs on the market

-why: Companies can hire more quality staff and also people who do not follow the trend might create other ways to make money.

Hải

2024-11-16 07:32:25 UTC

What: Free education can help develop the economy

How: Free education=> everybody can learn more skills=> improve personal level of knowledge + skills

Why: enhance work productivity => More tasks can be done => live better& work better=> Develop economy

So what: Education plays a big part in our live=> Should be free