https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4 What did you do to make your introduction more interesting for the reader? Which of the lead types from our lesson today were you trying to do? en-us 2018-02-19 14:02:34 UTC 2024-11-21 21:55:50 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943101 I added a "paint a scene" i made a picture in the readers head]]> 2018-02-19 14:57:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943101 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943234 I am in the process of making my new intro more in joyable to read and making a seperate page for location, place. ]]> 2018-02-19 14:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943234 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943398 In my lead sentence I painted the scene. I tried to make the reader picture what I was talking about. ]]> 2018-02-19 14:58:38 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943398 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943433 I tried to "paint an image" in the readers head. I compared Denmark's landscape and climate to Vermont. ]]> 2018-02-19 14:58:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943433 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943469 Like Ciro has the worst air pollution and making it readible and i think i did personalize]]> 2018-02-19 14:58:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943469 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943504 I added more about the landscape and plants in Puerto Rico. And talked about air plants and how they collect nutrients from the air.]]> 2018-02-19 14:58:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943504 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943551 I added to my introduction, A narrative. Of a kid that has to chores in Egypt

]]> 2018-02-19 14:59:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943551 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943905 I did a mix between personalize  and paint a scene. I  explained things about Norway and related to things they might know. ]]> 2018-02-19 14:59:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943905 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943908 2018-02-19 14:59:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232943908 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232944243 I am adding more to my intro. i made a story for my intro]]> 2018-02-19 15:00:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232944243 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232946215 I did a little of personalizing my by adding a question if they like something. intro but also painted a picture in my intro I tried to connect to one of my holidays.]]> 2018-02-19 15:05:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232946215 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232947478 I changed the facts in my intro into a scene and tried to make you picture flying around Nepal off of Mount Everest]]> 2018-02-19 15:09:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232947478 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232948165
I made it spusific like I said Frrance has things like this or this. I made things clare.I think my intro is cool. ]]> 2018-02-19 15:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232948165 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232948484 l made my intro into a paint a scene]]> 2018-02-19 15:11:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232948484 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232948765 I did a painting a scene. I helped them imagine what it looked like and felt like in Ireland. I also added more detail about the country. ]]> 2018-02-19 15:12:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232948765 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232949469 i had a hard time i will try it again]]> 2018-02-19 15:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232949469 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232949742 I had to paint a scene by saying that it will be the size of Airiza  if all the Islands were in pecs ]]> 2018-02-19 15:14:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232949742 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232949802 I was thinking of somthing i could releate too and draw a theme in my head.]]> 2018-02-19 15:14:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232949802 https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232950183 I added a fact about about water buffalo, and I said that they are 8 hours ahead of EST time and I said that when we are eating lunch they might be eating dinner.]]> 2018-02-19 15:15:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ccrowther2/y5vy9qcpsbb4/wish/232950183