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         <description><![CDATA[<p>도입</p><p><br></p><p>본문1</p><p><br></p><p>본문2</p><p><br></p><p>본문3</p><p><br></p><p>결론</p>]]></description>
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         <title>30210 이효린</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>도입: Hi, I’m Lee Hyo Lyn. I’d like to talk about the woman I respect the most.</p><p><br/></p><p>본문1: Her name is Mother Teresa. She lived for 87 years and she was 152 cm tall. Her job was a nun and a volunteer. She built a free hospital and an orphanage. She received the Nobel Peace Prize. I first read about her in the textbook.</p><p><br/></p><p>본문2: She helped young children and built free facilities. Also, she saved weak patients. she was an honor student when she was young. She never left dying people alone. She kept working even though she had two heart attacks. It was very kind of her to help everyone.</p><p><br/></p><p>본문3: If I could meet her, I’d like to ask, ”Why did you put up with the pain and take care of patients?“</p><p>I’d also like to ask, “what gave you the strength to endure oppression?” It is difficult for me to help people. But I will try hard.</p><p><br/></p><p>결론: I recommend you read a book about Mother Teresa later.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-09-15 04:34:12 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>도입 Hi Im KimTaeLin Let me introduce the woman who I respect the most.</p><p>본론1 1. Her name is Elizabeth Blackwell, a famous doctor.</p><p>2. She was born on February 3, 1821. </p><p>3. She worked as a doctor and  an educator.</p><p>4. She opened a hospital for poor women and children. </p><p>5. It was at school that I first learned about her. </p><p>본론2 6. It is amazing that she became the first woman doctor. </p><p>7. She showed women could study medicine like men do today. </p><p>8. She studied both in America and England. </p><p>9. It is interesting that many men opposed her strongly. </p><p>10. She wrote important books about women’s health. </p><p>본론3 11. If I met her, I would ask her how she stayed strong. </p><p>12. I would also ask what advice she would give to young women today. </p><p>13. It is important for me to study hard like her. </p><p>14. I'm tryimg to help people kindly as she did.</p><p>15.I want to be brave and open a new way like her.</p><p>결론 Thank you for listening to my presentation.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>도입)Hi, I’m Euna. Let me talk about Choi Jung-min. I found out about her from my trainer, and the person I respect the most is Choi Jung-min, who is currently playing for the IBK Altos volleyball team.</strong></p><p><br/></p><p><strong>본론1)I respect her because she always does what I’m not good at, so I always try to watch and learn from her. She also graduated from Hanlim High School, which makes me admire her even more.</strong></p><p><br/></p><p><strong>본론2)I think Choi Jung-min’s coolest moment is when she blocks. Because blocking is her strength, I also practice blocking by watching her. Even if she misses a block, she keeps trying again, and I try to do the same like her.</strong></p><p><br/></p><p><strong>본론3)If I meet Choi Jung-min one day, I want to shake her hand and ask how long she has been playing volleyball. I also want to play volleyball with her. Since I always want to be like her, I watch her games carefully and check if there is a routine that I can follow before a game.</strong></p><p><br/></p><p><strong>결론)Choi Jung-min is truly an amazing player, and I’ll try my best to be like her</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>서론//</p><p>Hi, I’m Choi daeun. I'd like to talk about the woman I respect the most.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론1//</p><p>Her name is Jang Wonyong, and she is an idol.</p><p>She was born in Seoul, South Korea.</p><p>Also, she was born on August 31st, 2004 , and she is 20 years old now.</p><p>From that time, I became very interested in her as both an idol and a person.</p><p><strong>I first learned about her when she debuted with IVE’s first single, ELEVEN.</strong></p><p><br/></p><p>본론2// I admire that she always tries to think positively in every situation. She takes good care of herself and has an excellent sense of fashion. She practices singing and dancing very hard, and it shows in her performances.</p><p>It is her good English skills that I find especially interesting about her.</p><p>Before her debut, she had dreamed of becoming a lawyer or an announcer.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론3// If I could talk to her, I would ask her what the most difficult part of taking care of herself is. I would also ask her what she usually does for fun in her free time.</p><p>Another question I would like to ask is what she has realized from her life as an idol.</p><p>If is important for me to keep making consistent efforts, just like.</p><p>I always try to do my best in everything I do, and I try to stay positive like she does.</p><p><br/></p><p>결론3// There are many things to learn from her, so I hope others will respect her too!</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>서론: Hi, I’m Lee yeonjae, and I’d like to talk about Helen Keller.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론1: The woman I respect is Helen Keller. She was born on June 27, 1880. She was born in the United States, and she was a social activist. It was hard for her to speak and hear. I first learned about her when I was in the lower grades of elementary school because I saw her in a comic book. She fought for the rights of people with disabilities.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론2: I think she was remarkable for overcoming her disabilities. I also greatly admire her ability to speak several languages. It is interesting that she visited Korea in 1937. She encouraged students at the school for the blind and deaf. Korea was under Japanese rule at that time.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론3: If I could meet her, I would like to ask her, "How did you learn to speak several different languages?". And I’d like to ask, "What helped you to overcome your disabilities?". I also try to have a positive mind to be like her. I want to learn from her grit. Her story inspires me.</p><p><br/></p><p>결론: I want to be a person who has a positive influence like Helen Keller.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>도입</p><p>Hi, I'm Ahyeon Jung. I'd like to talk about Ryu Gwan sun. </p><p>본론1</p><p>Her name is Ryu Gwan-sun and she was a Korean independence activist. She was born in Korea in 1930. she died on september 28, 1920, at the age of 17years old. She is remembered as a brave independence activist and a symbol of Korea's fight for freedom. I got to know her through a book.</p><p>본론2</p><p>It is her corage and efforr that I find truly admirable. If I were her, I would never be able to do the same. It is also her determination that I wish to enulate. I found it fascinating that she was such a young independence activist. I truly respect her for being so great.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론3 </p><p>If I could talk to her, I would ask how she was able to have such perseverance. That's be cause I know I couldn't show that kind of courage and effort. Even so, I am trying to live with perseverance like her.</p><p>And I working hard to become a proud figure of Korea as well. I will always remember her courage.</p><p>결론</p><p>In conclusion, I am grateful to have such a pround and remarkable figure in Korea's history. I will live with strong determination like her.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>도입: Hi I’m so youl. I’d like to talk about the woman I respect the most.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론1: Her name is An yu jin and she is the leader of IVE. She was born in Daejeon on september 1st. She debuted as IZONE on Produce 48. She is currently with Starship Entertainment. I got to know her while listening to IVE’s song because I liked her voice.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론2: It is her outstanding leadership that is the most wonderful thing about her. Also, she is good at singing and dancing. And I like her pretty eyes. She’s the leader, but she’s like the youngest because she’s playful. Her height is 173cm, and she is athletic. It’s fun to see her energy on variety shows.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론3: If I could talk with her, I would ask her to shoot a TikTok with me. I’m going to develop a spirit of challenge. Because her spirit of challenge looked great. Also, I want to develop sense of responsibility to be like her. She is in good shape, so I’ll try to stay in good body too.</p><p><br/></p><p>결론: She is so cute that I want to recommend her to others.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>서론</strong></p><p>Hi I’m Moon Chea-won. I’d like to talk about the woman who I respect the most.</p><p>본론1</p><p>Her name is lady Gaga,and she was born in New York. Her height is 156cm and her religion is Cathoilc. She is one of the most successful pop stars. She won three Grammy Award in 2019. I first discovered Lady Gaga when I heard&nbsp; a song at a restaurant and found out it was hers.</p><p>본론2</p><p>She always expresses herself without fear. She inspires people by helping others . And she always tries new things. She writes many of her own songs. And she always often wears unique and creative outfits.</p><p>본론3</p><p>If I could meet her, I would ask which performance she was most proud of try to be honest like her and build confidence. I will live to support and inspire the weak. And I’m good at self-care.&nbsp; I always try to be creative like her.</p><p>결론</p><p>It is to become like her that I make an effort.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>✅ 서론</p><p>Hi, I’m Sebin. I’d like to talk about the woman I respect the most.</p><p>✅본론1</p><p>Her name is IU, and she is a singer. She was born on May 16, 1993. She received Baeksang Arts Awords and MAMA. She became famous for the song “Good Day”. She became known as the nation’s “litte sister”. I got to know her when I heard her sing when I was 9 years old.</p><p>✅본론2</p><p>It’s her personality that I like the most. It’s interesting that she failed the JYPaudition. What’s great about her is her live performance skills. Also, she’s donated billions of wons. She loves her fans so much that she gives them gift packages at her concerts.</p><p>✅본론3</p><p>If I met her, I would ask her how she became an actress. Also, I’d ask her what her favorite game is. It is her character that I want to resemble the most. She was a big help to me.</p><p>I want to grow up like her.</p><p>✅결론</p><p>If you’re having a hard time, I recommend listening to IU’s music.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>[서론] Hi, I’m Jihyo. I’d like to talk about the woman who I respect the most.</p><p>[본론1] Her name is Marie Curie and she was physicist and a chemist. She was born in Poland in in 1867. Her husband’s name was Pierre Curie. She was the first woman to win a Nobel Prize. It was Marie Curie that discovered radium and polonium for the first time. I got to know her through a YouTube video about radium.</p><p>[본론2]I think she’s the coolest because of her patience. And It was cool for her to work hard for day to find radium. IfMarie Curie had not studied hard, she would not have won the Nobel Prize. She also looks cool when she experiments. The world was turned upside down because of the radium she discovered.</p><p>[본론3]If I could talk to her, I’d like to ask her how she felt when she discovered radium. I would like to take a science class from Marie Curie. I’d also like to know how to do research in her lab. And I would want to know how she did her research in that difficult environment. If I want to be like her, I have to study science hard.</p><p>[결론] Her courage still inspires us today.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>서론</p><p>Hi I’m Byeori, and today I’d like to talk about the woman I respect the most.</p><p>본론1</p><p>Her name is Kim Yuna.She was born in korea in 1990 and is now 35years old. She became the first woman to win the all-around title and achieved the Golden Slam-a first in a woman’s career. She completed her career flawlessly, without ever returning from retirement. I first got to know her during the Vancouver Olympics.</p><p>본론2</p><p>One of the coolest things about her is how relaxed she is. I also think she seems very cool. If it were me,I would have given up. But she didn’t, and that’s what makes her so cool. What’s interesting about her is even her “sloppy” acting skills. Even her emotional expressions in performances were delicate. It was like a work of art.</p><p>본론3</p><p>If l could talk to her, I would ask “How were you able to work so hard?”. I’d also ask her about her skating techniques. I think the key to becoming like her is persistence. I also think staying calm is important. I’m training hard to improve my mental strength like she did. But It is Kim Yuna’s persistence and calmness that have made her a world-class figure skater.</p><p>I want to follow kim Yuna’s example.</p><p>결론</p><p>Born in <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://korea.kim">korea. kim</a> Yuna is an athlete I deeply respect and am very proud of</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>서론 Hi, I'm Lee Jiwon. I'd like to talk about the woman who I respect the most. <br>본론1 Her name is Kim Maria who was one of the first female independence activists. She was born in Hwanghae-do in1892. She passed away on March 13, 1944. I learned about her while studying Korean history. She also participated in the February 8th Declaration of Independence.<br>본론2 It is the way she carried out the independence movement diplomatically that I find most admirable. She demonstrated remarkable leadership as the president of the Korean Patriotic Women's Association. And she had an unbreakable spirit. She was even called the "Joan of Arc of Korea". She was so devoted to Korea's independence that she once said, "I married the independence of Korea".<br>본론3 If I could speak with her, I would ask how she managed to continue the independence movement&nbsp; despite the aftereffects of torture. I would also want to ask her if she would have made the same choices if she could go back to that time. Through conversation with her, I will gain her wisdom. I want to emulate her deep love for our country, her unyeilding courage, and her perseverance. I am also trying to follow her example of leadership.<br>결론 I hope that everyone will strive to follow Kim Maria's passion and courage.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>서론 : Hi, I’m Kim Ha Yun. I’d like to talk about Dame Jane Morris Goodall.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론1 : She was born in London, England, in 1934. She is a zoologist and an environmentalist. She was awarded the title of the Dame Commander of the Most Excellent Order of the British Empire. She studied chimpanzees for the longest time at Gombe Stream National Park, in Tanzania. I got to know her by reading a biography when I was young.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론2 : It was admirable of her not only to study chimpanzees, but also to try to protect animals and the environment. I find it interesting that when she first went to Africa, she was not a researcher but just an ordinary person. Also, in her childhood, she was curious about how hens lay eggs, so she stayed in the chicken coop for five hours. She gave each chimpanzee a name and called them by name. She also formed a bond with the chimpanzees.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론3 : If I could meet her, I would like to ask her about the most surprising moment she had with the chimpanzees. I would also like to ask how she kept herself motivated when the research was difficult. I’m curious about the most unusual chimpanzee. I will follow her example and observe nature with curiosity. I will also practice patience and perseverance in my studies.</p><p><br/></p><p>결론 : I also want to be someone who cares for nature and never gives up, just like her.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>도입</p><p><br/></p><p>Hi, l'm Ji-min. l'd like to talk about the woman I respect  the most.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론 1</p><p><br/></p><p>Her name is Deokman, a queen.</p><p>She was born February twentieth, 606.</p><p>She became queen at twenty-six.</p><p>She lived long ago in Silla.</p><p>I first learned about her through books.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론 2</p><p><br/></p><p>She was wise, bold, and graceful.</p><p>She showed great wisdom and leadership.</p><p>She was not skilled in military.</p><p>She deeply respected Buddhist faith teachings.</p><p>I like her wisdom and strength.</p><p><br/></p><p>본론 3</p><p><br/></p><p>She is one greatest rulers politically.</p><p>She is known predicting the future.</p><p>She overcame difficulties with gender limitations.</p><p>She died in the year 647.</p><p>She is person I’d ask prophecy.</p><p><br/></p><p>결론</p><p>She is someone I recommend in movies.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>&lt;서론&gt; Hi, I'm Yuju.</p><p>Let me talk about Florence Nightingale.</p><p>&lt;본론1&gt; She was a nurse, a social reformer, and a statistician.</p><p>I got to know her for the first time after reading a biography of her when I was young.</p><p>She introduced the concept of hygiene and contributed to the establishment of a health care system.</p><p>She reduced the death rate of patients by 40 percent in the Crimean War.</p><p>Besides, she also contributed to the visualization of statistical data by creating a rose chart.</p><p>&lt;본론2&gt; I respect her for her hard work as a nurse. </p><p>It was possible for her to live comfortably, being born as a daughter of a rich family.</p><p>But she saved many people by working as a nurse.</p><p>And I like her because of her stubborn and upright personality.</p><p>She even threatened a soldier with a hammer to get supplies.</p><p>&lt;본론3&gt; If I met her, I would ask her why she decided to be a nurse.</p><p>I also want to ask what kind of job she would have chosen if she hadn't become a nurse.</p><p>I realized through her life that I have to act decisively to achieve my goals.</p><p>Even if it's a little hard for me, I'll do my best as she did.</p><p>And I will try to emulate her faith to the end.</p><p>&lt;결론&gt; I hope that one day I can be a good person like her.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-09-15 05:02:57 UTC</pubDate>
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