by Hannah

STREET/

hannah_street — 2013-07-01 11:28:35 UTC

WHICH ARE THE BEST RECIPE SHEETS AND

WHY?

WHAT COULD YOU SUGGEST TO SOME PUPILS

TO IMPROVE?

sam#yolo#swag#dumpalishous/

2013-07-09 12:52:24 UTC

joshua fudge's is very creative

and craita could be more creative and coulerfull

and jakub could be a bit nicer

Lottie

2013-07-09 12:52:32 UTC

I think Yumna has a great idea and a very good sheet.

I think Sam should do more work

Jakub

2013-07-09 12:52:49 UTC

Macy:good pictures and colourful.

Sam: could do with more picture and more coulor

and info.

carita xx

2013-07-09 12:53:10 UTC

ed's was the best cuz

its gt all good qualitys init, ethans cud use sm more wrk!!

Grace

2013-07-09 12:53:38 UTC

Maireads was the best as it was really colourful and it had simple instructions and it was easy to read however I think lottie could just take the background off of her pictures and finish it but it is going really well!

Emily

2013-07-09 12:53:44 UTC

i think yumnas is very colourful and is very creative

however i also think that Lottie should do more work

JOSH

2013-07-09 12:53:52 UTC

Graces was really good because it was colourful and well

laid out

I think Lotties could have had more content

Charles Hollingworth

2013-07-09 12:53:54 UTC

josh had a good layout and a goo way to show ingrediants

connor had to add more it was plain

samira

2013-07-09 12:53:59 UTC

joshua fudges work is really colourful however carita should put more colours on :)

Rob

2013-07-09 12:54:09 UTC

Graces looks very child friendly and suits the age group

Ethan needs to be more creative

Make it look more colourful

Yumna

2013-07-09 12:54:11 UTC

i think graces was very clourful and

straight forward

and lotties was well presented aswell as charles and emily :)

MAIREAD

2013-07-09 12:54:18 UTC

i think grace allens was the best because it was colourful and simple.

macy had a good one to.

brad

2013-07-09 12:55:36 UTC

I think ed was colourful and neat

tom needs more infomation

ED

2013-07-09 12:55:38 UTC

I THINK THAT ETHAN HAS TRYED TO REALLY APPEAL TO THE 5 YRS OLD AS IT LOOKS FUN AND ENTERTAING

I THINK TOM NEEDS TO DO MORE BUT SO FAR IT LOOKS SICK

BRAD IS VERY BRIGHT AND COLOURFUL AND THE DERCORATION IS COOL!!

JOSH'S IS HAS LOADS OF PICTURES

CONNOR

2013-07-09 12:55:45 UTC

JOSH'S WORK WAS GOOD AND HE SPENT ALOT OF EFFORT INTO IT

T-PAIN/TOM.P

2013-07-09 12:55:56 UTC

I think grace s is the best because she has bright colourS and its aimed at 5 year olds. however eds need more pictures not silly ones but its good so far

Ethan

2013-07-09 12:58:55 UTC

macys was well layed out and so was eds

sams wasnt finished

MACY

2013-07-09 13:03:09 UTC

MAIREAD HAVE GOOD PICTURES AND SHORT SENTENCES

ED HAD GOOD PICTURES

TOM NEEDS MORE WORK

Jakub

2013-07-09 13:03:40 UTC

brad: good pics nice and coulorful good work

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2013-07-09 13:26:14 UTC