3rd Period Peer Feedback by Dena Green https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt Upload your lead from your narrative. Give feedback to 1 person from each column. en-us 2020-12-09 03:23:18 UTC 2025-11-12 12:18:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f99d.png EXAMPLE 2 dgreen92 https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1000836962 On new years day my uncle asked me if I would be the best man at his wedding. ]]> 2020-12-09 03:23:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1000836962 EXAMPLE 1 dgreen92 https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1000843700 I was startled by the annoying loud alarm clock on my phone.”Oh my goodness why does school have to be a loop!” I jumped out of my bed too fast and i got very dizzy.Some time later I went to the bathroom and did my business.For a long time i finally get out of the shower and went to my room to change. As soon as i was done changing I saw out the window and it was foggy.”Hmm...I wonder how today is going to be?” ]]> 2020-12-09 03:27:50 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1000843700 JaNyla Maybin maybijan https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004085419 (Lead)
‘’It’s just a game Vermahd,’’ I said for the last time to my younger brother.

‘‘Leave me alone,’’ pouted Vermahd, sitting in the corner of the kitchen, next to refrigerator.

My younger brother, Vermahd, has been pouting ever since we came inside. Why?
It’s because he kept losing to a simple game me and my siblings were playing outside.

]]> 2020-12-09 21:00:10 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004085419 Camdyn almqucam https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004087498 Why does my head hurt? Why does my back hurt? I thought to myself as I layed in bed half asleep. “Gran! My back hurts.” I said with a whiny voice. Gran, (my grandma) softly put her hand on my head to see if I was hot. Then she slowly showed me to the bathroom to take my temperature. “Yeah that's  a fever all right” she said with a frown. 

]]> 2020-12-09 21:00:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004087498 peter 🐺🐶 https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004089982 lead 
have has you body moved be for you could think on what is happening if not than you get read  first hand ]]> 2020-12-09 21:01:30 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004089982 Lexi harrilex https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004091625 Shifting is very important to me because i can see all of my friends. My mum and Dad think i’m crazy but i can actually see them. But let's talk about what shifting is. Its is not called a dream it is called “Shifting” Dreams and Shifting are different Shifting is when you can actually feel and smell were you are. Dreams are whatever you want. If you wake up during a shift it is harder to get back to your shift. 

]]> 2020-12-09 21:01:45 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004091625 My 11th bday! wilksdra https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004093667 ¨SPLASH¨ as I cannonball into the pool. wait hold on lets rewind a bit *insert time machine noise* ¨YAWN!!!!¨I yell as loud as a dinosaur. I check my phone and remember I don't have a phone so I just walk out of my room into the hallway. I dont see none of my family for some reason so I look over the table to make sure there not hiding. But there not there I look in the closet but there not in there either. I look in the back yard and BOOM! I see them there setting up a banner. ]]> 2020-12-09 21:02:07 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004093667 RedWolfSniper https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004096214 The playground was full of laughter and chaos. I was playing with my friends when i heard the recess duty talking about a virus that was going on in china and japan and how it was spreading into all the states and continents. That got me thinking what if i get what they were talking about or even worse me whole family gets it! I think my friends heard it because some of them were worried]]> 2020-12-09 21:02:57 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004096214 Edrick cardoedr https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004100467 LegoLand

LegoLand we went to the store to buy some legos and it was great and the best i bought a star war ship and i built it my brother bought a monster truck it was big. We built the legos we loved legoland..]]> 2020-12-09 21:04:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004100467 Amelia https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004104862 l]]> 2020-12-09 21:05:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004104862 Giancarlo https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004137557 So yesterday i went to my room when find out  it looks like an avalanche I hear one foot step and parents come in my room and tell me to clean up my room i was so mad it was really boring and when i finally finished after a year [being sarcastic] i had to go to soccer practice that started at 4 o'clock all the way to 5 o clock its still hard because i have breath in a mask its so hard when your running your breathing so hard in a mask that it feels like your chocking or inhaling it ]]> 2020-12-09 21:17:04 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004137557 jaqueline orozco orozcjaq https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004143064 Have you ever had wear a mask for 2 hours . I know that a lot of people wear them a lot  longer . In  gymnastic you probably know that  there is a lot of running and stuff so breathing with a mask on is not fun.]]> 2020-12-09 21:18:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004143064 Aiden https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004161101 Have you ever got put into quarantine while there is a pandemic going on there is a disease going on, called coronavirus aka covid-19 it is a disease that came from China from a bat. So some places were shut down like school and such other places so I had to start remote learning on zoom.

]]> 2020-12-09 21:25:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004161101 ethan https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004161775 We were on are way to italy all the wait and anticipation was getting on my nerves

]]> 2020-12-09 21:25:33 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004161775 Ja'Cori jonesja26 https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004231538 Have you ever woke up one day and  feel like your living the same day over again. If not well I know I have like there was this one time on my birthday when i felt like I had the same birthday from the year before.]]> 2020-12-09 21:52:39 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1004231538 Aulaya whitfaul https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1007546885 Have you ever had to be good so you wont give your parents a rough time when they come home from work and also have good grades.]]> 2020-12-10 18:55:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1007546885 Adriana Clash clashadr https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1008402611 have you ever had to wake up early to do school the realise there is no school. I have done this many times because my brain is so used to waking up this early now. ]]> 2020-12-11 00:05:48 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1008402611 Makayla Lesane lesanmak https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1017906572 "Bats!" I heard my mom scream . I looked up there they were flying over us in the night sky. We all ran to the nearest house screaming thinking that a the bats were following us lucky somebody was outside of there house and let us in or else we would have been running  nowhere.The person who let us in a old man and his house was super messy and had trash everywhere my cousins almost slipped because of a news paper on the floor dating back to almost thirty years ago. It was horrible the house smelt like a stray dog and we couldn't sit anywhere because of the pile of trash literally we saw so many bugs we thought we discovered a new type of bug turns out the bugs they were just centipedes. My grandmother was so mad she started yelling at us all even though she was the one who insisted to go out a a night time walk.]]> 2020-12-14 20:58:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1017906572 mathisky https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1018671803 I heard the alarm going off. I groggily hit the button and climbed out of my bed.  My mom was already up making breakfast for me and my dad because I can hear all the noises coming from the kitchen. My dad hadn't come home yet from work. He works for 12 hours a day.]]> 2020-12-15 03:04:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1018671803 Luke https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1025076733 We were on the way to georgia, and all of the wait and anticipation was getting on my nerves.]]> 2020-12-16 18:02:41 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/y42eqcglahlkt8qt/wish/1025076733