Remake of Plath's "Reflections of a Seventeen-Year-Old" by Luciana Hurtado

Rhythm

hurtadol3 — 2024-03-25 12:12:40 UTC

Anaphora

hurtadol3 — 2024-03-25 12:12:40 UTC

"I am afraid of getting older. I am afraid of getting married" (Plath).

"Spare me from cooking three meals a day- spare me from the relentless cage of routine and rote" (Plath).

Repetition

hurtadol3 — 2024-03-25 12:12:40 UTC

Repeats I want, I think, and I am, frequently in the journal.

Parallelism

hurtadol3 — 2024-03-25 12:12:40 UTC

"Never, never, never will I reach the perfection I long for with all my soul- my paintings, my poems, my stories,-all poor, poor reflections" (Plath).

Rule of Three

hurtadol3 — 2024-03-25 12:12:40 UTC

"It is a room suited to me- tailored, uncluttered, and peaceful..." (Plath).

"I love my flesh, my face, my limbs with overwhelming devotion" (Plath).

Alliteration

hurtadol3 — 2024-03-25 12:12:40 UTC

"...for I have been too thoroughly conditioned to the conventional surroundings of this community..." (Plath).

THEME

hurtadol3 — 2024-03-25 12:12:40 UTC

To feel comfortable in your shoes and do the best you possibly can.

TONE

hurtadol3 — 2024-03-25 12:12:40 UTC

Bemused and conversational

Mr. M's Advice

mendozaj16 — 2024-03-26 14:53:39 UTC

I would consider looking back at the definition of Parallelism. The Rule of Three and Parallelism differ.

Remember: One is structural...

"Of the people, for the people, by the people."

While the other mirrors the following...

"to ____, to ____, to ____ ."

I am looking forward to reading your emulation assignment! It seems like you're off to a great start!