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Headline: The Mystery bug at the Royale Cinema is no longer a mystery.

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The doctors have found the reason behind illness of 20 people that could be because of bacteria in water. The situation might have been very different if the proper care had been taken about cleanliness. The cinema shop might be imposed a heavy fine for their negligence. 

Feedback: Good effort as you have clearly used the speculative verbs in the paragraph.]]> 2022-06-14 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/avpschwartz/y0xlsj4mw7su597x/wish/2221030341 https://padlet.com/avpschwartz/y0xlsj4mw7su597x/wish/2221036053
Scientists have discovered the cause why people had been poisoned in the show at the Royale Cinema.

After 20 people had fallen with acute stomach pain in the last  show at the Royale Cinema scientists check the water in the fountain and  discovered a new bacteria which caused severe pain in stomach. The bacteria was called BRC-22 (bacteria of Royale Cinema). Currently researchers is  (are) continueing the probe and ask (asking) people to boil water before drinking it. 

by Daria :-)

Feedback:  this is great Daria - love the photo that goes with it and the name you gave it:-)  I added a few minor corrections in brackets with the verbs but you used the speculative verbs very well.

A massive thank you!

]]> 2022-06-14 17:21:18 UTC https://padlet.com/avpschwartz/y0xlsj4mw7su597x/wish/2221036053 https://padlet.com/avpschwartz/y0xlsj4mw7su597x/wish/2221118235 A group of people was brought into the hospital with an acute stomachache, however, the doctors couldn't find the reason for the illness. They suggested that the people could have gotten an unknown bacteria through the air.

Due to that, a group of scientists has done the special tests in the cinema where the people were. They have (or would you use had here?) found the bacteria in the water of the drinking fountain that could have caused the symptoms.

Finally, the specialists have done the additional water cleaning, so everyone can drink the water again.

Dasha

Feedback:  great effort Dasha with good use of the speculative verbs.  I just inserted one comment in the brackets for have found vs had found.

Thank you so much! 😊]]> 2022-06-14 18:59:14 UTC https://padlet.com/avpschwartz/y0xlsj4mw7su597x/wish/2221118235