https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl Don't make my mistakes en-us 2022-01-27 18:16:34 UTC 2022-01-27 18:29:22 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f399.png brandoj https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016503487 We don't use a.m. or p.m. to talk about time. Instead it's four in the morning or ten at night.]]> 2022-01-27 18:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016503487 brandoj https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016505785 Cue the transition to sports by saying "In sports..."

]]> 2022-01-27 18:18:25 UTC https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016505785 https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016509196 -the first two stories of the newscast are supposed to be local (Ottawa-Gatineau) and rewritten from local news media (CBC Ottawa, the Citizen, CFRA etc...).    You would need to focus specifically on the impact to local businesses for your lockdown lifting story to be local. ]]> 2022-01-27 18:20:00 UTC https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016509196 https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016509305 -don't forget to write your name in the intro]]> 2022-01-27 18:20:03 UTC https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016509305 https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016509920 if you're talking about something happening the same day as your newscast, say "today", not Monday.  Likewise, the day before the newscast is "yesterday" and the day after is "tomorrow"...not the day of the week.]]> 2022-01-27 18:20:22 UTC https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016509920 https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016510016 2022-01-27 18:20:25 UTC https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016510016 https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016510956 2022-01-27 18:20:53 UTC https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016510956 https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016511116 2022-01-27 18:20:58 UTC https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016511116 https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016511521 for a copy story, we don't need to know the name of someone who isn't the subject of the story, but rather a source of information.  We name people in copy stories if they are well-known (the mayor, a celebrity) of if the news is about them (charged with a crime or a victim).  Use general terms to attribute information that comes from unfamiliar people.  Ex: A city official, Ottawa police, witnesses or spectators.]]> 2022-01-27 18:21:09 UTC https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016511521 https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016512813 make sure you’re introducing the reporter just before playing the audio in a wraparound or script-and-clip.  Their name is often in parentheses at the beginning of the lead.  Make sure you say something like “Alex Stone reports” before playing the audio.]]> 2022-01-27 18:21:45 UTC https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016512813 bradleyrogers138 https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016514685 the guitar theft story is a good kicker...it's a hard transition to go from that to a family that froze to death in Manitoba.]]> 2022-01-27 18:22:36 UTC https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016514685 https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016515198 make sure you’re introducing the reporter just before playing the audio in a wraparound or script-and-clip.  Their name is often in parentheses at the beginning of the lead.]]> 2022-01-27 18:22:50 UTC https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016515198 https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016517688 lead sports with Senators, then move out from Ottawa.]]> 2022-01-27 18:23:52 UTC https://padlet.com/brandoj/y0tvn701u8s9u8cl/wish/2016517688