Jackie's Papi is next door by Edward https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt that was weird en-us 2017-10-20 13:11:58 UTC 2017-10-20 14:07:53 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199038605 2017-10-20 13:16:46 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199038605 THESIS https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199039588 THE THESIS IS ILLOGICAL AND OFF TOPIC]]> 2017-10-20 13:18:47 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199039588 organization structure https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199043555 the organization structure is inappropriate and weak]]> 2017-10-20 13:27:15 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199043555 Writers Response https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044540 Writer's Response to the prompt is weak ]]> 2017-10-20 13:29:18 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044540 https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044616 2017-10-20 13:29:27 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044616 the writer's choices is general and imprecise. is also appropriate to the task. https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044686 2017-10-20 13:29:38 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044686 The Writer's Progression https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044859 ideas are usually weak and making essay  unusual or difficult to follow]]> 2017-10-20 13:29:59 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044859 Thesis https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044887 Thesis is stating the main idea of the assignment.]]> 2017-10-20 13:30:02 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044887 Development of ideas https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044968 The Development of ideas are weak or using  inappropriate word .

]]> 2017-10-20 13:30:12 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044968 THESIS https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044994 The writer's thesis is unclear]]> 2017-10-20 13:30:14 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199044994 Development Of Ideas https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045091 The writer adds ideas that give the essay more body and are specific and appropriate, adding substance to the essay. ]]> 2017-10-20 13:30:24 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045091 Writer progression and Sentences s1557755 https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045138 Writer's progression is logical and the essay is controlled.  Sentences are varied and adequately control ]]> 2017-10-20 13:30:28 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045138 COMMAND OF LANGUAGE https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045159 THE COMMAND IS PERSISTENT WHICH CREATES DISRUPTIONS]]> 2017-10-20 13:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045159 ORGANIZATION/STRUCTURE https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045193 The essay is skillfully written, and meets all requirements asked for by the prompt. The writer's structure and format is flawless.]]> 2017-10-20 13:30:33 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045193 Writers https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045779 The writers response is thoughtful and engaging.]]> 2017-10-20 13:31:26 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045779 Writer's Progression https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045791 The progression is logical and well controlled]]> 2017-10-20 13:31:28 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045791 development of ideas https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045853 The writer adds details and examples that make the body of the essay]]> 2017-10-20 13:31:35 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199045853 Command Of sentences https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199046509 Organizes punctuation spelling, capitalization and grammar in an adequate way. ]]> 2017-10-20 13:32:48 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199046509 Development of Ideas https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199046768 The writer reflects to the prompt. The essay talks about what the prompt is asking for. The essay is understandable. ]]> 2017-10-20 13:33:17 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199046768 The writes choice s1612702 https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199047385 Usually contributes to the equality and clarity of the essay.]]> 2017-10-20 13:34:30 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199047385 Command of Language https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199047883 Writer demonstrates mastery of language over capitalization, grammar, etc.]]> 2017-10-20 13:35:36 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199047883 sentences https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199048124 the sentences are simplistic and awkward ]]> 2017-10-20 13:36:01 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199048124 https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199049164 2017-10-20 13:38:02 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199049164 Organization https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199049931 The organizing structure of the essay is not always clear  
because the writer uses organizational strategies that are 
only somewhat suited to the expository task
]]> 2017-10-20 13:39:27 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199049931 Thesis https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199049994 The writer's thesis is weak and unclear.  ]]> 2017-10-20 13:39:32 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199049994 work progression https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199050284 not always clear or logical or controlled]]> 2017-10-20 13:40:08 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199050284 https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199050476 2017-10-20 13:40:31 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199050476 Development s1832018 https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199050488
The Development of the ideas is minimal .
]]> 2017-10-20 13:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199050488 Word choice https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199051268 The writers word choice is precise and purposeful]]> 2017-10-20 13:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199051268 Sentences https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199051818 The writers sentences are purposeful, presice, and well controlled]]> 2017-10-20 13:43:03 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199051818 No Essay Written egarza14 https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199052384 2017-10-20 13:44:07 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199052384 writers response https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199052930 The writer’s response to the 
prompt is sometimes formulaic
]]> 2017-10-20 13:45:14 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199052930 Word choice https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199053110  
The word choice is general and imprecise because reflects a basic awareness of the expository purpose 
]]> 2017-10-20 13:45:35 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199053110 Sentences https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199053985  Sentences are awkward or only somewhat controlled ]]> 2017-10-20 13:47:16 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199053985 command of sentence https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199054249  The writer demonstrates a partial command of sentence boundaries and spelling ]]> 2017-10-20 13:47:44 UTC https://padlet.com/egarza14/y05wr68ld4wt/wish/199054249