Writing Task 2 22/10 by Trang Vo

TOPIC: In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?

tranghelenpbculis — 2020-09-16 11:50:56 UTC

Structure:

Para 1:

+ change in structure: more nuclear families (move to city for job, independence)

+ Change in member role: more women go to work to support family, housework are equally shared (gender equality…)

Para 2: Negative + Positive

+ Negative: lack of emotional contact among generations, lack of accommodation (developing city)

+Positive: happiness of family is enhanced (equally responsibility, devotion/ sacrifice…)

Phương

tranghelenpbculis — 2020-09-16 11:52:17 UTC

These days, changes in family organization and members' role are becoming more significant, which leads to various results. From my point of view, this trend brings both benefits and drawbacks.
There are two significant changes in family's structure, which more and more clear to recognize. Firstly, nuclear families are overweigh the extended one. Various family tend to move out, separate from thier senior to move to the city to seek for a job opportunity. Because living standard is increasing theseday, people need to be employed in a quality job so they would have higher income to serve their higher demand. Secondly, change in members' role is also significant. Theseday, not only the man can be a breadwinner, but also the women could take charge in support family's finace. Due to that, womens have not to undertake houseworks alone, that can be shared equally to every members.
Affect of this trend brings diversity of benefits and drawbacks. Firstly, By sharing responsibility equally to all members,

Minh

tranghelenpbculis — 2020-10-22 12:12:14 UTC

Family structure and member's position are changing considerably nowadays. In my opinion, this might bring more benefits than drawbacks.
There are two changes that can be recognized easily. Firstly, changing in structure family may be caused by the increasing demand of relocating to metropolises is increasing which is seeking for a protential job or better living standard. Finding an independent and better life might happen in young people. As a result, they want to sepparate from their parents and create a smaller family which is called a nuclear family. Secondly, family status are also changed by the development of society. We are now living in a modern world so it is easy to understand why there are more priorities for women. For example, the gender gap is significantly shortend so there are more women can go to work to support family's finance or even become a breadwinner of their home.
This trend has its advantages but also disadvantages. On the negative side, the tendency of adolesence who want to disconnect from their parents and move to the city may poses many drawbacks. The most obvious problem is the lack of emotional contact among generations. Because of the rat race in the city, they do not have enough time to get back their hometown to meet their family' members.

Việt

tranghelenpbculis — 2020-10-22 12:12:17 UTC

As the world is developing, the changes in family structure and family role are step by step happening . In my perspective, this trend bring more beneficial effects rather than detrimental ones.

Firstly the changing in family structure is very easy to recognize, more and more nuclear families are taking place. Many young peoples find it easier to get a job in the city, this make the extended family being neglected. Example, if adolescences want to independent in financial and separate from their parents that request them a job to have their own source of income. Secondly, the member role has change significantly. In the past, man is more prioritize to be the breadwinner of the family. But now in our modern world, both man or women is equally, they both have the chance to be the financial pillar of the family. Because of the gender equality is being improve time to time, woman now can go to work to support their family.

Although the advantages of this trend is huge but we can't ignore the drawbacks.