Essay Outlines - Class 126 by https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg Made with a warm hug en-us 2022-02-24 00:59:06 UTC 2022-03-01 08:10:09 UTC hello@padlet.com Essay Outline - Chris christopherredmond3 https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg/wish/2063695481 Thesis statement: This essay will discuss two reasons for why celebrities are good role models for young people, namely they motivate fans to do good for the society and they promote positive values; it will also explain the negative influences of celebrities’, which is their inappropriate lifestyle and making younger fans develop a sense of lower self-worth.


 Body paragraph 1:
 Topic sentence: celebrities are good role models to encourage people to do good deeds. 
 Supporting
 • Celebrities encourage people to do charity work (e.g. Angelina Jolie helped with the earthquake in Haiti and has adopted children from under developed countries.)
 • Encourage people to protect animal rights (e.g. not using leather or fur products).
 
 Body paragraph 2:
 Topic sentence: celebrities also encourage positive values.
 Supporting
 • They promote healthy lifestyles on social media (e.g. post pictures of vegetarian diets and doing exercise on social media).
 • They promote equality (e.g. Emma Watson lobbies for women’s equal rights).
 
 Body paragraph 3:
 Topic sentence: while celebrities create positive influence, they can impact young people negatively by demonstrating an inappropriate lifestyle. 
 Supporting
 • Young celebrities are heavy drinkers, substance abusers, and frequent goers to night clubs (teenage fans imitate their idols to appear cool). 
 • Celebrities also spend money extravagantly by purchasing expensive clothes, bags, accessories (young fans overspend money to buy the same expensive products as their idols). 
 
 Body Paragraph 4: 
Topic sentence: another negative impact celebrities have is that they will result in young people developing a sense of lower self-recognition and confidence. 
Supporting
• Celebrities live in rich houses, have flawless faces and body figures.
• Young people may also dream to have a life like their favorite celebrities’ and establish unrealistic life goals. When they fail to live in luxurious houses, fail to have a perfect body or face, they may feel discouraged and downgrade themselves.
]]> 2022-02-24 01:50:54 UTC https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg/wish/2063695481 Thesis statement:two reasons for it is better …online :1.it could decrease the hurt created by meeting for each other 2.leaving a relatively better impression for each other ,and two reasons for it is better to do it in person:1.express the real mind straightforward 2.it is a kind of attitude of respect to each other https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg/wish/2064027240 bodyparagraph1.topicsentence :….by meeting for each other
                              Support1
                               Support 2
                          2.                         :….Better impression…
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                          3.                         :express the real mind straightforward
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                          4.                         : respect 
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2]]> 2022-02-24 06:48:41 UTC https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg/wish/2064027240 essay online-zeren https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg/wish/2064027288  Thesis statement: This essay will discuss two   
points about which is better about breaking up with a boyfriend/girlfriend online or in person.
 
Body paragraph 1:
 Topic sentence: breaking up online is better on sending someone’s ideas to his partner quickly.
 Supporting:
during the Internet, the manage will be transferred quickly.
 Body paragraph 2:
 Topic sentence: breaking up online can help reduce both shy.
 Supporting:
by reducing the meeting to make each one clam down.
 Body paragraph 3:
 Topic sentence: breaking up in person can explain more cleanly for each other.
 Supporting:
sometimes, the information on the Internet will be ambiguous.But face to face can solve the problem.
 Body paragraph 4:
 Topic sentence: breaking up in person is more serious when someone decide to over his affection
 Supporting:
they can feel another's attitude by their eyes.
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Topic sentence: breaking up with boyfriend online is a good way to save money.
Supporting
1.      do not need pay for the last meal
2.      do not need prepare present for the special time
body paragraph 2
topic sentence: it is safe when break up with boyfriend online
supporting
1.      it is better to make both calm down, it will have more time to thinking, but not argue
2.      the possible of hurting will be decrease
body paragraph 3
topic sentence: it will convenience
supporting
1.both do not need waste time to meet, 
]]> 2022-02-24 06:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg/wish/2064029300 Essay Outline -Yuyao https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg/wish/2064043385 Thesis statement:This essay will discuss two reasons for the benefits of breaking up with your girfriend(or boyfriend) in person;and also explain why some people choose to breaking up online.

 Body paragraph 1:
Topic sentence: It shows that you value your previous relationship.

 Supporting
 • If you do this, you may also be good friends rather than enemies.
 • When a relationship ends, it's possible to do enterprise together.

Body paragraph 2:
 Topic sentence: Say it clearly in person when you break up.

 
Body paragraph 3:
Topic sentence: Choose not to meet.It minimizes the damage to each other.

Supporting
 •It's hard to avoid a lot of emotions when you meet
•Ease the hurt and embarrassment of a breakup
•Learn to face love with ordinary mentality]]> 2022-02-24 07:02:04 UTC https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg/wish/2064043385 https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg/wish/2064044350 Thesis statement: This essay will discuss two point about which is better to break up with a boyfriend/girlfriend online or in person.
Body paragraph 1:
Topic sentence: Break up with a boyfriend online will not be embarrassed for each other.
Support:
Both of them can express what they want to say. (e.g. why one of them don’t want to continue this amour)
They can be calmer. (e.g. they can’t see each other so they will not be nervous or anger that they can have a clear thought)
Body paragraph 2：
Topic sentence: This is a quickly and easier way to break up.
They don’t think were they will meet.
They don’t bother to say what they want to say first.
 
Wangzizhe
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Thesis statement:This article will explain two reasons why it is better for them to break up face to face.That is, they can get along with each other more calmly in reality, which means they can give up on each other. In addition, words on the Internet are more emotional, which may bring some impulse, while in reality, they are more rational, which makes it easier for them to truly feel each other.Online breakups can also be short and hasty, which they mar regret.
Body paragraph 1:
Topic sentence:Breaking up in reality means you can already give up on each other.
Supporting
1 Being able to face each other in reality really means they can let go of each other
2 They will not miss each other too much in the future
Body paragraph 2:
Topic sentence:In reality, they are more rational and more able to make the right choice.
Supporting
  1 In the real life may see each other, we can think more rationally, rather than fall into a very strong emotional.
   2 Talking in real life is probably even less likely to hurt each other.
Body paragraph 3:
Topic sentence:The decision to break up online was hasty.
Supporting
   1 It is easy to break up with someone in a anger over verbal conflict on the internet
2 It feels more casual online


]]> 2022-02-24 07:19:51 UTC https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg/wish/2064063161 https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg/wish/2064069317 Essay Outline - Hui.Wang
Thesis statement: This essay will discuss reasons why some people do not want to break up with a boyfriend/girlfriend.
Body paragraph 1:
Topic sentence:Breaking up with a boyfriend/girlfriend online is often affected by emotion.
Support:
[1]people often regret saying hurtful words
[2]do not carefully considered
Body paragraph 2:
Topic sentence:Breaking up with a boyfriend/girlfriend online is irresponsible.
Support:
[1]people often feel sudden and unbearable
[2]the words on the mobile phone have no sentiment
Body paragraph3:
Topic sentence:Breaking up with a boyfriend/girlfriend online is unclear.
Support:
[1] some people will think that you have not broken up completely. When you meet, you will still have chance to make up.
]]> 2022-02-24 07:25:01 UTC https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg/wish/2064069317 Essay Outline - Yidi. Wang https://padlet.com/christopherredmond3/xxkle3b9fiu3khlg/wish/2064118431 Thesis statement: This essay will discuss two reasons for why breaking up with boyfriend/girlfriend should be online: breaking up online will avoid some negative conflicts and save each others' time.It will also explain the negative influences of breaking up online, which is  the explanation on the Internet seems disrespect for this relationship.
Body paragraph 1:
 Topic sentence:breaking up online will avoid some negative conflicts.
Supporting
 • Give each other a space to think in order to avoid extreme actions. 
 • Breaking up online will reduce each other' s harm.
 Body paragraph 2:
 Topic sentence: breaking up online can save each others' time.
Supporting
 • They can communicate directly online through WeChat, it doesn't take more time to meet.
 • avoid wasting time by arguing in person.
Body paragraph 3:
 Topic sentence:although breaking up online has positive impacts, the explanation on the Internet seems disrespect for this relationship.
Supporting
 • the explanation on the Internet is not clear enough,compared with explanation in person.
 • make the other person feel that your attitude is very unconcerned and cold, he/she may misunderstand you.

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