https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi Made with wonder en-us 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC 2023-10-09 13:18:44 UTC hello@padlet.com lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916043 Topic: cooperation + sacrifice between parents and children => quality time together.
L1: parents =>  hy sinh their social life to make time for their family
L2: children: optimise their study schedule/ other priorities to spend their time having meals with the elderly in family. ]]> 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916043 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916044 P1: Losing the bonds between family members
- widen the gap between parents and their children
P2: Less opportunities for children to learn about courtesy .....
- parents educate their children while having meals together


]]> 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916044 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916045 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916045 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916046 Introduction: As family co-breadwinners, many mothers today are spending more time at work compared to mothers in the 1990s. This trend has allegedly contributed to the increase in delinquent behaviours among adolescents. I disagree that the increasing rate of juvenile delinquency is associated with less parenting involvement of working mothers, thus this issue should be considered from much broader aspects.
Topic sentence:
+ Agree: There are two reasons behind my advocacy that..../ I also believe that .... because of the following two reasons; 
+ Disagree: There are two reasons behind my disagreement that..../ I strongly against the view that ... because of the following two reasons
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Dịch: Là người đồng trụ cột trong gia đình, nhiều bà mẹ đang dành nhiều thời gian hơn cho công việc so với những bà mẹ trong những năm 1990. Xu hướng này được cho là đã góp phần làm gia tăng các hành vi phạm pháp ở thanh thiếu niên. Tôi không đồng ý rằng tỷ lệ trẻ vị thành niên phạm pháp ngày càng tăng có liên quan đến việc ít tham gia vào việc nuôi dạy con cái của các bà mẹ đi làm, do đó vấn đề này cần được xem xét từ các khía cạnh rộng hơn nhiều.]]> 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916046 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916048 There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life. As a result, ....
A second measure would be for governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes. {thiếu supporting ideas}
.....]]> 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916048 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916049 As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several fiscal challenges can be anticipated. Firstly, the retirement of more working seniors, mainly from the baby-boom generation,  will impose additional pressure on working adults. In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for working-aged taxpayers to support the pension system since governments will receive less to none taxes from retired population. Another pressure includes the ever-growing expenditure for healthcare services for old patients. Although individuals tend to live longer lives, they usually suffer acute chronic conditions such as heart failure or diabetes, which increases the utilization of old age-related procedures and treatments that are pushing up costs of long-term care and healthcare expenditures in general. This means funding for improvement of education or environment has been channeled into age care  field.]]> 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916049 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916050 In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations. ]]> 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916050 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916052 In many developed countries, their presidents expect to lead a longer life. This essay examines the consequences/ negative impacts of this trend on both individual and societal levels, thereby drawing proper solutions revolving around [1] raising  retirement age and [2] encouraging labour migration to mit__gat__   these potential problems]]> 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916052 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916053 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916053 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916059 Many essay titles require you to examine both sides of a situation and to conclude by saying which side you favour. These are known as discussion or for and against essays. In this sense, the academic meaning of the word discuss is similar to its everyday meaning, of two people talking about a topic from different sides. For a discussion essay, a balanced view is normally essential. This makes discussion essays distinct from persuasion essays, for which only one side of the argument is given. When writing a discussion essay, it is important to ensure that facts and opinions are clearly separated. Often you will examine what other people have already said on the same subject and include this information using paraphrasing and summarising skills, as well as correct citations.
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Nhiều tiêu đề bài luận yêu cầu bạn xem xét cả hai mặt của một tình huống và kết luận bằng cách nói bạn ủng hộ mặt nào. Chúng được gọi là thảo luận hoặc ủng hộ và chống lại các bài luận. Theo nghĩa này, nghĩa học thuật của từ thảo luận tương tự như nghĩa hàng ngày của nó, về hai người nói về một chủ đề từ các phía khác nhau. Đối với một bài luận thảo luận, một cái nhìn cân bằng thường là điều cần thiết. Điều này làm cho các bài luận thảo luận khác với các bài luận thuyết phục mà chỉ đưa ra một mặt của lập luận. Khi viết một bài văn thảo luận, điều quan trọng là phải đảm bảo rằng các sự kiện và ý kiến ​​được tách biệt rõ ràng. Thông thường, bạn sẽ kiểm tra những gì người khác đã nói về cùng một chủ đề và đưa thông tin này vào bằng cách sử dụng các kỹ năng diễn giải và tóm tắt, cũng như các trích dẫn chính xác.]]> 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916059 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916060 Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. ]]> 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916060 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916061 Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. ]]> 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916061 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916063 Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Cach 1: synonyms
Cach 2: khoan thoi diem - a period
early childhood
teenage years
When it comes to the most significant period that influences a child's future, there is a debate regarding whether it should be early childhood even before schooling or teenage years. This essay analyses....



VIEW 1:  “that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life” => 

]]> 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916063 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916064 2022-01-12 10:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1987916064 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1988127473 Main 1: The absence of mothers in the household + V
care - the child's psychology + school => missing => lured by bad friends/ peers => they engage in criminal activities

Main 2: Thieu main idea
In Asian household, cooking + cleaning => stressed + physical exhausted => being indifferent + neglect (mac ke) => to draw parents' attention, become rebellious by [ commit crimes] ]]> 2022-01-12 12:50:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1988127473 lillysng1995 https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1988130619 Main idea 1: Early access to the Internet can corrupt the minds of minors-> Explanation: social media/ websites: violent or sexual contents that are not suitable to children => Consequence => not the mother's fault.
Main idea 2: social factors outside the households + V -> Example: Making friends with peers who are with disruptive behaviors/ are problematic be seduced, infected with anti social behaviors.]]> 2022-01-12 12:52:24 UTC https://padlet.com/lillysng1995/xxbwen9knudn06gi/wish/1988130619